- Jun 1, 2017
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Hello! I'm making a new game in Unity that's going to be similar to Cook, Serve, Delicious, but it's also going to have a storyline with characters. This game will involve human women transforming into monster girls (full furry is not planned ATM).
I've attempted to make a humorous storyline that doesn't take itself seriously, but I worry that comedy (at least my style) plus lewdness may not mix. I'm about to commission the artwork for these scenes, and that could cost me 100s of dollars, so before I commit to that, I'm wondering if these scenes "work." If not, it'd be really cheap to rewrite now compared to paying for all the artwork and throwing it away later.
If you'd like to give me feedback on my scenes, here's a link to a google doc:
I've attempted to make a humorous storyline that doesn't take itself seriously, but I worry that comedy (at least my style) plus lewdness may not mix. I'm about to commission the artwork for these scenes, and that could cost me 100s of dollars, so before I commit to that, I'm wondering if these scenes "work." If not, it'd be really cheap to rewrite now compared to paying for all the artwork and throwing it away later.
If you'd like to give me feedback on my scenes, here's a link to a google doc:
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