Wrote a mockup VN script idea.

yessiyuri1

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Just recently found this place, and I'm kind of loving it.
Reminds of the good old wild west internet days.. tits of gtfu

At this point I've probably played somewhere close to 100 games.
Utterly ranging in interests, just to see what these types of games can offer and what the devs can really do within them.
It's been fun. And dam are all of the fucking artists TALENTED.
lol I wonder what they do in real life?

But I've kinda niched out and can't find anymore content form self(at least not yet) so I started looking around at other things going on on this website and noticed there wasn't a lot of necrophelia content and thought that was odd, considering the plethora of other interests..

But the more I thought about it, at least realistically, you either have to be the perpetrator (which brings in a completely different kink)
or have someone close enough to those type of things(mortician).
Or I guess be at the event itselft, which still brings in a completely different kink imo.

Ehhhhhhhhhhh actually you could go for a Vampiric route? Or Zombie? I guess..?

Regardless, I tried to come up with a realistic but not too on the nose VN script idea that could work.
But it's still campy as fuck I think:


NTR NECK ROW


This is a game about finding love.. in all the wrong places.

CHARACTERS -

MORTY = Mortician
ALYSSA = Deloge
STEPHEN = Herring


BACKSTORY -
Morty has been watching a girl live her life. Looses control.
He make GO SLEEP. (oil on street, car go vroomy-vroom vroom)
VN starts with him talking to seemingly himself (actually her corpse while he's cleaning her and having flashing back to scenes)

Flash back scenes are played from boyfriend's perspective, to misdirect. Or from OUTSIDE perspective(farther off shots) (audio from Alyssa's cell phone)
Ending is MORTY remembering the PLAYER(mc) choices towards STEPHEN and then Morty confesses his (CHOICE) for Alyssa.

STORYLINE -
Starts at a super market with ALYSSA grabbing milk carton while shopping with STEPHEN.
This catches the eye of MORTY, who then start to follow them around the store, then home. (internal voice over starts after Morty is shown NOT BEFORE)
MORTY uses open wifi to cell phone and gets cellphone apps like: gps, email, camera.
(PLAYER is supposed to think internal voice over is girl/boyfriend or friend?)

ALYSSA and STEPHEN fight on way home from store.
(Fight is about MOMENT that correlates with emotional connection of death)
(Some pivotal deep relationship problem like: growing up/apart, changing as people, familial expectations)
(Alyssa has good grades and got into MIT. Stephen's father just died and inherited his company in Japan.)
(Should also correlate with Morty reasons he fell in love and reasons for the SLEEPYTIME)

ACTUAL STORY LINE -
Story will follow Alyssa as she struggles with the unknown that is life after school.
Is she destined to be a mother? A business woman? A lover? Or does she want to try out something
less conventional?

Players will have to try to keep up with her boyfriends new found "energy" and choices.

Questions like:
W Points = Whore points and are meaningless.
*CLAUSE1 = if not okay with exposing in front of bf, then okay with stranger.
*CLAUSE1.5 = if no to letting stranger touch themselves, Alyssa runs away when he cums.

Are you okay with boyfriend watching porn? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W)
Are you okay with boyfriend looking at ass? No.(-1W) Just not in front of you?(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W)
Are you okay with boyfriends friend grabbing your ass? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) Just not in front of bf?(+1N)
Are you okay with wearing more revealing clothing? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) Just not in front of bf?(+1N)

Are you okay with exposing yourself in public? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) Just not in front of bf? (CLAUSE1)
Are you okay with letting a stranger touch themself in front of you? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) (CLAUSE1)
Are you okay with letting a strangers cum on you? CLAUSE1.5(1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) (CLAUSE1)

*CLAUSE2 = If CLAUSE1, then CLAUSE2.
Are you okay with kissing boyfriends friend? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) (CLAUSE2)
Are you okay your boyfriend showed his friend that picture(pic of dick suck)? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) (CLAUSE2)
Are you okay that your boyfriends friend has your number? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) (CLAUSE2)

*CLAUSE3 = If CLAUSE1, then CLAUSE3.
Are you okay with your boyfriends friend texting you late at night? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) (CLAUSE3)
Are you okay with your boyfriends friend texting you his dick? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) (CLAUSE3)
Are you going to tell your boyfriend about his friend? Yes.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W)

Are you okay with your boyfriend pawning you off to friends? No.(-1W) Doesn't bother you. Is it turning you on?(+1W) (CLAUSE2)


ROUTES -
No Route = All I want is his love.
Pass Stephens test and Fight for his Love.
Ending Result - Alyssa would have said yes to Stephens marriage proposal. Morty puts a ring on Alyssa and Stephen's fingers, as well as his own.

Doesn't Bother You Route = If it makes him happy.
Alyssa left her phone in Stephens car. Alyssa wasn't in the car during accident.
Ending Result - Stephen died alone instead. Morty reluctantly obliges (...) Alyssa doesn't go to funeral.

Turning You On Route = Ready to take whatever life throws at you.
Stephen is driving car, while you're in the back seat with his friend. Alyssa and friend die. Stephen survives.
Ending Result - Stephen stays for funeral meets Morty leaves for Japan. Morty keeps Alyssa and friend as pets.

Clause Route = I have found myself through others and don't need you anymore.
Party Bus leaving Stephens 'Going Away' party crashes.
Ending Result - All of Stephen's friends die. Stephen meets Morty at Funeral. Morty hacks his phone, gets him a week later and has the absolute time of his life.

STORY LINE ENDING -
Car crash happens. Blank screen. Morty is standing over Alyssa's and Stephen's bodies.

(Ending scenes/lines correlate to ending route choices)





END ON MORTY PROPPING UP ALYSSA


So it's not anything really like necro, and in my head if I were to make it (I wouldn't) I wouldn't show it, but the whole VN would be encapsulated in a necro-ish scene.
That's the only way, other than making it even darker, that I could see this being done. Other than like I said earlier: Vampire, Zombie, Ghost, sci-fi shit.

I'm not into that subject, like at all.
I am into NTR obviously, as you could see.
I just wanted to use a stale topic to see if I could see it from a different angle(ooof that's kinda fucked up, in this case lol)

So does anyone think I have what it takes to write these things?
This is my first one, ever, so idk wtf I'm doing or trying to do yet.

But I want to give Virtual Novels told with Renpy a try.
I already have HS2's Studio Neo v2 and all of the mods from the betterrepack. I've also started trying to learn how to use it.
I think I know enough python for Renpy to not be a problem for me.

I just wanted to see if I have what it takes to even come up with stories myself or if I should try to copy an already made story and see what I can come up with from there.
(I do have an idea of re-creating the show 'Carnival Row', pretty much beat for beat for storyline and then artistic splurge for spicy bits per episode)
But learning how to stage HS2 characters in Studio Neo and then doing it is very time consuming.
And if I suck, I won't even play them. So I want to rip the band-aid off now.

Ohh and btw:
I've never posted anything like this ever before: so please be harsh as fuck.
It's fine, I've seen what makes you smile...
 

voronkov

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Читал, читал, так и не понял интересного или нет сюжета. Я сам много идей генерирую и делюсь даже с полным описанием и частью продуманного сюжета. Насчёт этого сюжета. Если продуманно не только начало, но и хотя бы небольшое продвижение в игре, то можно делать не смотря на сюжет. Судя по тому что прочитал есть даже идеи для финала этой игры. Так что если сделаешь то ничего не потеряешь. Просто приведу пример того что сделал я по ссылке и пару идей для вдохновения. Игра почти текстовая и с минимум картинок у меня.


I read and read, and did not understand the interesting or not the plot. I myself generate and share many ideas, even with a full description and part of a well-thought-out plot. About this storyline. If not only the beginning is thought out, but at least a small advance in the game, then you can do it regardless of the plot. Judging by what I read, there are even ideas for the finale of this game. So if you do, you have nothing to lose. Just give an example of what I did at the link and a couple of ideas for inspiration. The game is almost textual and with a minimum of pictures I have.



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