VN - Ren'Py - WVM [S2 Ch.1 Ep.13 F] [Braindrop]

I've been playing this game since the start and I can only say, It has gone to worse every time, and the main culprit is the plot building.
This game has the exactly same problems as certain game with a Milf Grandma. The story GOES NOWHERE, because It is clearly made on the run, there's not a plot planing beforehand.
Also related to the writing, and also similar to the Grandma game, almost everything is a concatenation of feel-good-moments, that, after a while becomes annoying. The same goes for the characters personality.
The double sin in the game is, you could forgive a bad plot and character building like this in a game with a fuck-a-ton of branching/options, but it is NOT the case, AT ALL.
In the visual field, the animations are ok, the renders quality are good, but the faces on all women are almost copy paste with different wigs and some details...
This game started really nice, with great potential but died because the fanbois's fanaticism and the authors lack of improvement... sad, very sad.

The main problem with the game is that it's boring. 99% of the dialogue is about how awesome the MC is and whatnot. The second problem is the lack of agency, which is kinda weird considering you get to decide whether a girl is trans or not. Aside from that, the plot will always go the same way regardless of your choices which are just there to decide if you want to see a sex scene or not.

I've seen people say the MC is a "chad" or "alpha" but that couldn't be further from the truth. An alpha is a leader, someone who is dominant, which is the opposite of the MC. In fact, if the whole harem could be thought of as a pack, the MC would be at the bottom of the hierarchy. Everyone is always telling him what to do. They tell him to go here, go there. Do this, do that, etc.

The plot development is outright nonsensical. Early on you get a chance to become a gigoló for a woman. Later, this woman tells the MC that he shouldn't be dependant on the college because they'll replace him, which is just an outright lie. The dude is a superstar and has all the bargaining power. Hell, he could even demand even more things and they would still give in because he could be anywhere in the country, but he decided to go to a shit-ass college and everyone wants him to revive the college. Again, he is their hope and dreams. They have no leverage over him, but the MC, being the good boy that he is, agrees to become dependent on this woman who actually has a ton of leverage against him. She could easily ruin him and she has no reason to keep him.

I'd understand this level of bad-writing if this was just a fuckfest type of game and while there is a decent number of sex scenes, it isn't enough to call this purely a porn game, in which case it would maybe get 3-stars.

The basketball drama writing is cringe, the girls are ugly, make the same facial expressions and cling to you 24/7, and the best girl aka Harper doesn't get enough attention, I don't know why this turd is popular

For the love of God. When are the writers going to learn that you don't need to explain every aspect of MC story (when is his favourite time to take a shit, who is his mother, who farted in the echo chamber, etc) in the first gameplay minutes? It's too dense for a start.

"Oh MC you are the perfect pinnacle of a human being, please take me in your arms and fuck me"is what 90% of the dialogues can be boiled down to. I have tried to play this game 4 times over the past 2 years, all of those times I've had to quit after 20 minutes of playing. Never in my life have I played such a horrendously boring game, I'm serious, even the worst pervert simulator made by someone who doesn't speak English can be more enjoyable than this game.

This is neither a visual novel, nor a game this is basically pov porn, but animated, has ugly looking duckbilled characters and janky animations. Basically worse in every aspect.

You often hear about negative review bombing of games but I feel like this game has been positive review bombed because this many 5 star reviews for such a trash game just doesn't make any sense to me.

game- It is one of the best game i have ever played thanks for the dev to give us such an amazing game. while playing i was thinking wish this game was never ending just keep on playing and playing.

Story - mc got a break and become a bb celeb in high school then he met rachel which was icing on the cake then belle another one and he keep on adding everyone. I like the story very much because its very different from the other VN games or maybe cause i love basketball too.


texts - In start i was like why there is too much text then after sometime damn it is interesting, the conversation became more interesting than the scenes for me.

characters- All the characters are very different, good designed and have an amazing back story as well and they didnt gave mc a face its on your imagination whatever you want(loss is you cant watch him kiss others).

scenes - scenes are really good instead of having same variations or angle we got many with different variations, good renders an animation too.

annoying - too much hugging but after some time i was like hug her man hurry

overall - I thought it was going to be like other game watch scenes and get it over with but nope you can go slowly with this you can enjoy it more if you go with the whole conversations.

Future expectation - Just go with the same quality its good..Wish there will be a past story added in future that how he reached at such heights.

1 rachel preg confirmation and after celebration on yacht
2 cindy intro
3 daliah intro
4 rainbow and mc intro
5 hannah and eden tape
6 rachel new client(maybe some new addition) for mc
7 dates with his girls spa (improvement for some)
maybe all will be covered on yacht and florida trip

After the trip
8 cheer team surprise
9 alexis meetup
10 jax gf and cheer team intro
11 harp and mc relation talk with nat
12 the future pregs(anna, jamie)


Fav part - the exhibition game arc(I know not many scene but it was interesting that time)

wish - its was never ending and reality hits hard keep up the good work.

Played till
[S2 Ch. 1 Ep. 10 ]

Oh my God!
how boring is that!!!
Seriously, I bought into the good reviews in the hope of seeing an interesting game, but I was deceived!
The renderings are not bad, the animation is not bad, but the script is boring to the point of insanity and there is no development. A lot of girls, you can simply forget about the existence of some, they are so without characters, ordinary dummies. With each girl you do the absolute same as with the others:

>couch talk
>hug/kiss
>repeat 999 times

You can download and see for yourself, but just waste your time.

Props to the developer for creating a nice representation of trans men and women. People complaining about specific tags should just move on rather than complain. If you don't like a tag then don't play the game. I like games where you receive meaningful choices but aren't given free will to the point of a sandbox, not that I don't like sandboxes, but sometimes you just want to sit down and enjoy a game for its content rather than endure a grind. This game has a great story, great renders, and plenty of lewd scenes to enjoy.

5 stars in my opinion. Reviewed at S2 Ch.01 Ep. 10

There are small problems I have with this game, especially forcing the MILFs too much, but overall it's a great story and great sexytimes. And while I still don't like MCs with donkey dicks, at least this guy is huge, so it's (almost) justified.

lack luster story, way too many hugging scenes. tried to get through most of the current game, but it failed to catch my attention in every way.
Animation are well done, and game is relatively bug free. just not my cup of tea

TL; DR
Harem VN at its best. Many paths are optional, just choose your preferences and go for them.
Highly recommended.

Incredible story telling. I've never played a sports drama erotic vn, but its right up my alley. I also find it funny that it asks you every time if you want to date a new girl as if youd want to say no. Ended up with like 30 girlfriends Can't wait for more.

I have been a long time lurker and this is my first post. I felt compelled to write a review about how much I enjoyed this game.

Before I start I would like to say I am not up-to-date, I have been savoring this game and I believe I am close, if the last ep or two changes my opinion I will post an edit.

I enjoyed every aspect of this game on different planes, which I didn't think was possible from what I had long considered games on here to be just "porn." This game is smart, arousing and emotionally wholesome. The story and characters are well done and thought out. Even though there are over a dozen characters and even more plots and sub-plots, it doesn't feel muddled or lost. Every character felt unique personality wise and added something to the story. I have found myself wanting someone like Jamie and/or Shauna, in my life and not even sexually, (though I wouldn't mind, lol) Needless to say every one of the interactable characters were arousing, the renders and detail were phenomenal. The scenes/animations were numerous, unique and hot. I doesn't take much to see that a lot of effort and passion went into the making of this story.

If I had to find a complaint, it would be that the scenes were a little short. I often found myself at the edge during a particularly hot scene only for it to end before I could cum. For how long this game is and the number of scenes I can honestly say I have only cum 3 or 4 times. Though, in a sense it wasn't bad because of the numerous short unfulfilling scenes usually with side characters, it made the slightly longer scenes with the main girls like Jamie and Shauna more impactful and erotic. I don't know if this was done intentionally, to sort or facilitate the open relationship feeling with best girls Jamie and Shauna. Sort of unconsciously forcing you into the mind set of "This relationship means more than any of the meaningless sex I can get anywhere else."

TLDR; More than just your average porn game, closer to erotic visual novel. Wholesome, well written story and characters with lots of erotic content. If story focused erotic games are not your thing I would look elsewhere, but all the girls/women are insanely hot so you have some great eye candy during dialog and/or exposition.

One of my favorites on the site. Very light hearted, and is pretty much an omega harem. You want it all you got it all. MC is OP and all is good. The main girl (MC's girlfriend) is pretty open in a pretty unrealistic way but no one plays these games for realism. She's pretty much the ultimate wingman. Game is great, it's a real slice of life penis vagina anime.

Well man... this fell off a cliff from what it was at the start. This needs to end without being dragged further...the only problem is that there is no end in sight with so many characters and unfinished (not well-fleshed out) arcs.

Anyways, for what it's worth, I will give it a 4. But if the main stories don't get a convincing ending, I will probably edit the ratings.

I love this the game, when i stop updating it made me sad bad but it fixed after it came back, graphically I liked the change of some characters like Emiko but I also didn't like the change of others like Elizabeth just like it made me sad the fact of knowing that there will be no incest and more with the scene that was presented with Rachel saying that we should imagine Azel in a sexual way, as well as the tension that exists with Cedar, but well I hope that in the future DEV changes his mind or at least give a fan service with a mini alternative story that focuses on the family (Azel, Cedar, Wendy, Jaimie Isabel and Mili) and Shauna has to be yes or yes, without further ado I just wanted to tell you to go ahead with the game and others, greetings and luck.

"Oh MC, I am so empowered by your ability to listen to me, I am so madly in love with you, along with the 22 other woman. But please take the time to acknowledge my insecurities and say you support me, cause just like the other 22 women, that is what gets me off"

There is very little difference between each girl that falls for the MC in this game, it gets very tiring reading about how happy they are, or how insecure they are, or how empowered they are when you finally realize it is the same conversation with a different skin. The sexy scenes aren't even that enticing, there is no build up for the characters cause there are too many of them. The game developer needs to learn how to build suspense and sexual tension, and not just throw us with a shit tonne of girls all just smitten with the MC...Shit I don't even think there is a single kink in this game, just different body shapes with ...the same... personality.

MC is too cringe. Dialogue is too long and cringe as fuck. Story is boring and all over the place with all those girls come out of nowhere. Animation.... I have no word.
this is the first game I can't stand playing even though it has good rating.

This game started of well and was one my favourite games. But too many characters (many with no significant scenes) and a stagnating storyline over the last few updates has turned this game into a boredom and I have stopped playing this game.

Story should have been kept simple with a few core characters and a few side character, not a few hundred side-chicks, new ones every single update. Hopefully it gets better in the future.

I came back to this game today for the first time in several updates (Maybe ep 6 or 7? A little bit after the "rework" hiatus). I really enjoyed it for the most part when it came out. The renders are pretty good, and the sex scenes can be pretty hot for the most part (though too many of them are always, always, ALWAYS interrupted in some way. Like just let a man finish for fucks sake!)

So going back to this, my first thought 15 minutes in was
"Man, the pacing of this game has gotten way worse."

After spamming my space bar (between sex scenes) for what seemed like hours, I had to stop at day 33 -I just wanted to finish the basketball game, but it rarely gives you a good stopping point. You are always in the middle of dialogue somehow. And that's when I decided to write a review for this finally.

MC has to talk to every girl in the room multiple times, repeating the same feelings, maybe a couple new ones, going back and forth and back again, everyone gets a kiss, then you can move on to the next room, repeat ad nauseam. There is no break, it just keeps going and going. Room to room... or hallway, or bathroom, or corridor, etc.

There is so much exposition and unneeded dialogue, so much pointless involvement, that not only does it bore me to tears and make my eyes roll out of my head, but I realized using renders as a measuring stick for progress is completely meaningless.

Look, I can suspend disbelief in a harem porn game where the MC has a magic dick everyone wants, but you're also going to throw him into every single person's petty squabbles, or have someone get involved in his, and then have him be the solution to everyone's problem, right then, right there? Especially when there are so many damn characters to keep track of? C'mon, man, get on with it already!

Look, I really enjoy the sweetness/lighthearted nature of the game, it's actually a selling point for me. I also really enjoy some of the kinks, I mean it's rare to find any good games with a cuckquean, let alone a cuckquean and a harem! But whoever is writing the dialogue/story really needs to be more concise, and let events breathe. You ARE allowed to show, and not tell. All I wanted to do was get to the damn basketball game, and it was a total slog getting through that whole day.

I know the Dev has gotten a lot of flak for updates and stuff, and for the most part, I don't really care about that as much as a lot of people here do. I still really like the game, but I was disappointed in how this turned into a click fest. Sometimes, less is more. Despite all that, I will check back with the game occasionally and probably still enjoy it, though I'll keep my hopes up that my space bar will not be doing a lot of work.