The idea behind this game is a very fun premise. However, the dev is entirely way to focused on changing the MC into a woman. It feels less like the players choice and more like it's forced upon you by the dev. I mean it's okay if that is the way you choose to play, but trying to stay a male the whole game isn't possible. You are basically forced to do demos in order to further your career. I guess the simple meet and greet demos where you just talk to the clients is fine, but the other ones tend to be a bit much. There are so many ideas that could make this game appeal to more people and grow different branching paths, which will also up the replayability of the game.
Suggestions:
First I think you should integrate spiked fun into the base game. Being able to spike coworkers is a lot of fun. It give the play a fighting back chance at work. However there is no chance to fight back at the bar or club. Adding a way to try and get back at someone trying to spike your drinks could be a very fun game mechanic. Especially if you have already been turning into a girl and though it could be difficult, you also revenge spike him and it turn into 2 guys turned into 2 horny girls. This could have multiple branching paths that end up in girl on girl, a threesome with another guy, or more. This would also give more use the the backrooms at the clubs. Just imagine awkwardness when the both wake up the next morning turned back into guys, lol.
The best friend at the beginning of the game:
1. The ability to also choose what your best friend looks like. This will be explained.
2. You and your best friend apply to the job together. Again branching paths at work. You dominate him, he dominates you, or you become best friend dumb sluts for the office. This also can give you the chance to get out doing demos yourself. He can also come to you to try and get out of demos himself. On particularly sexual demos he may ask you to go along with him. Branching paths: You can try and run interference to save your friend, you can watch your friend get taken advantage of, you can try and step in saying your "saving" your friend while also demoing the product. This can also be done in reverse when you take his demos depending on the his stats with you.
3. Secretary. As you or your friend climb up the ladder at work a secretary is going to be needed. Are you going to take him with you to the top of the company or is he going to take you? Only one of you can be the boss and the other the secretary.
Work: The basics are in place. I think it can be streamline into a more user friendly ui, but it's fun to play.
1. Screw your way up the ladder. Go into work as a girl and walk into the bosses office. Depending on the action you take you would need less sales in order to get promoted. This won't help you get a better desk however. Looks like you will have to spread your legs for that as well. If you are dominating your best friend you could send him in for you.
2. Sales team manager. You (or your best friend) are doing an amazing job and your boss in getting promoted. Someone needs to fill this role. You can still do sales calls yourself (if you don't want to do the demo, make one of your employees do it) if you want to but more actions open up. Motivating members of your sales team. Punishing bad sales numbers. Demo inspections. Firing and hiring new team members (could be a fun way to get better sales). Build the team the way you want too. Are they going to spike them to be your private harem who will do anything to make you happy, or are you going to turn into a girl and motivate them as men, or are you just going to send your best friend to motivate them. You could do it together. Or, your best friend could become the sales manager and you are at his mercy. You could become a piece of meat to be passed around the office. Your going to have to do a good job the get sales numbers up for you friend. Don't want you or your friend to get demoted? Looks like you will have to use the screw your way up the ladder function again.
3. integrate spiked fun into the base game and add a function to turn it on and off at the start. It makes a fair playing field at the office. When you become a manager, there may be cocky guys trying to spike the boss.
Bar: There are already many bar girl mods. Just add them into the game.
1. Bar guys. Add in bar guys that you are able to spike (This can also help tone down the none porn star girls that won't talk to you). Be careful, if you let them get away, you may raise your suspicions with the police. Of course you could always just challenge them to a game of blackjack instead.
2. Police. Be careful if the police are in the bar. You a higher chance of getting caught. If this happens you might have to bribe or fuck your way out of it or you will be arrested.
3. Bar girls. Add a way to spike a bar girls drink. Make them horny and instead of taking them home, just take them in the bathroom. This way you can stay in the bar and enjoy yourself. Only take home girls you actually like.
Home: The morning in the game is almost meaningless. Pretty much work out or clean. The whole blockbuster movie at home is useless. I am pretty sure there might be something if I turned my character into a girl, but no. This game is so focus on the girls point of view that any other play-through completely make functions for the game pointless.
Sister: Paths: Love route (normal or cucked by dad or Bruce), you dominate her, femdom (you or sister if you are female), (you female) slutty best friends.
Dad: Spike him and dominate him, friends (could end up split roasting sister), (you female) love route, (you female) Dom dad route.
Club: Adding in club girls and guys. Some at the bar and some on the dance floor. This would also add more functions for the back rooms trying to find a secluded spot for some quick fun. This brings for functions to going to the club alsone as a guy or girl.
Pregnancy: The basic function is there and nothing else. Girls just basically call you up and get rid of the baby. I do have a mod on so I'm not sure if this is the basic function or not, but it's pretty basic so far and could expained into so much more.
1. child support. You have to pay for child support for girls that end up keeping the baby. This will help with excess money as you keep doing a better job at work. It also creates a bad end if you can't pay up. When the child becomes of age, the payments stop.
2. Birth control suppression. This doesn't raise suspisions with the police as girls don't see the immediate effects. Girls on birth control will be okay with creampies only to become pregnant later.
3 Later in the game. You end up going to the bar and seeing someone new (guy or girl). You end up sleeping with them only to find out there mom is someone you knocked up or knocked you up (in this case the guy would take the child and you pay support) earlier in the game... oops. Accidental incest could be a fun game mechanic for you as a guy or girl. Hopefully you don't have a new child support payment from this. Now that you know who they are you wouldn't do it again... would you? I mean want would happen if the mom found out?
4. Perminance: I don't think pregancy should be the trigger for perminance. You should only be stuck as a girl for the pregancy. I do believe that the should be a way for perminance and if you play as a guy, you would have to avoid it being force on you.
I know I am writing from a different point of veiw as the creator of this game, but trying to play this game as more of a guy takes away the functions of the game and could be expanded. I am pretty sure there are a lot of events I am not triggering because I mostly play as a guy leaving the game feel empty and undeveloped. I hope I have given the dev or modders ideas to play around with. I like the premise of your game. It's a fun idea. I just want more paths for people to choose there path as a dom or sub man, or dom or sub woman. Of course you could loose a mini game and be forced into something, but that is just part of the game. I understand that. I didn't just write choices that would for me, but for others as well. A simulation game like this is fun because if you do something wrong it could have conciquences.
Note: if there is a skill modder out that that wants to make try and implement this kind of narative into the game go for it. I am not a coder, not in twee at least. I won't mind writing the narative if you need help with that. I do like the game, but not so much the narative state it's in now. It's not bad, it just feels empty as a guy MC.
Suggestions:
First I think you should integrate spiked fun into the base game. Being able to spike coworkers is a lot of fun. It give the play a fighting back chance at work. However there is no chance to fight back at the bar or club. Adding a way to try and get back at someone trying to spike your drinks could be a very fun game mechanic. Especially if you have already been turning into a girl and though it could be difficult, you also revenge spike him and it turn into 2 guys turned into 2 horny girls. This could have multiple branching paths that end up in girl on girl, a threesome with another guy, or more. This would also give more use the the backrooms at the clubs. Just imagine awkwardness when the both wake up the next morning turned back into guys, lol.
The best friend at the beginning of the game:
1. The ability to also choose what your best friend looks like. This will be explained.
2. You and your best friend apply to the job together. Again branching paths at work. You dominate him, he dominates you, or you become best friend dumb sluts for the office. This also can give you the chance to get out doing demos yourself. He can also come to you to try and get out of demos himself. On particularly sexual demos he may ask you to go along with him. Branching paths: You can try and run interference to save your friend, you can watch your friend get taken advantage of, you can try and step in saying your "saving" your friend while also demoing the product. This can also be done in reverse when you take his demos depending on the his stats with you.
3. Secretary. As you or your friend climb up the ladder at work a secretary is going to be needed. Are you going to take him with you to the top of the company or is he going to take you? Only one of you can be the boss and the other the secretary.
Work: The basics are in place. I think it can be streamline into a more user friendly ui, but it's fun to play.
1. Screw your way up the ladder. Go into work as a girl and walk into the bosses office. Depending on the action you take you would need less sales in order to get promoted. This won't help you get a better desk however. Looks like you will have to spread your legs for that as well. If you are dominating your best friend you could send him in for you.
2. Sales team manager. You (or your best friend) are doing an amazing job and your boss in getting promoted. Someone needs to fill this role. You can still do sales calls yourself (if you don't want to do the demo, make one of your employees do it) if you want to but more actions open up. Motivating members of your sales team. Punishing bad sales numbers. Demo inspections. Firing and hiring new team members (could be a fun way to get better sales). Build the team the way you want too. Are they going to spike them to be your private harem who will do anything to make you happy, or are you going to turn into a girl and motivate them as men, or are you just going to send your best friend to motivate them. You could do it together. Or, your best friend could become the sales manager and you are at his mercy. You could become a piece of meat to be passed around the office. Your going to have to do a good job the get sales numbers up for you friend. Don't want you or your friend to get demoted? Looks like you will have to use the screw your way up the ladder function again.
3. integrate spiked fun into the base game and add a function to turn it on and off at the start. It makes a fair playing field at the office. When you become a manager, there may be cocky guys trying to spike the boss.
Bar: There are already many bar girl mods. Just add them into the game.
1. Bar guys. Add in bar guys that you are able to spike (This can also help tone down the none porn star girls that won't talk to you). Be careful, if you let them get away, you may raise your suspicions with the police. Of course you could always just challenge them to a game of blackjack instead.
2. Police. Be careful if the police are in the bar. You a higher chance of getting caught. If this happens you might have to bribe or fuck your way out of it or you will be arrested.
3. Bar girls. Add a way to spike a bar girls drink. Make them horny and instead of taking them home, just take them in the bathroom. This way you can stay in the bar and enjoy yourself. Only take home girls you actually like.
Home: The morning in the game is almost meaningless. Pretty much work out or clean. The whole blockbuster movie at home is useless. I am pretty sure there might be something if I turned my character into a girl, but no. This game is so focus on the girls point of view that any other play-through completely make functions for the game pointless.
Sister: Paths: Love route (normal or cucked by dad or Bruce), you dominate her, femdom (you or sister if you are female), (you female) slutty best friends.
Dad: Spike him and dominate him, friends (could end up split roasting sister), (you female) love route, (you female) Dom dad route.
Club: Adding in club girls and guys. Some at the bar and some on the dance floor. This would also add more functions for the back rooms trying to find a secluded spot for some quick fun. This brings for functions to going to the club alsone as a guy or girl.
Pregnancy: The basic function is there and nothing else. Girls just basically call you up and get rid of the baby. I do have a mod on so I'm not sure if this is the basic function or not, but it's pretty basic so far and could expained into so much more.
1. child support. You have to pay for child support for girls that end up keeping the baby. This will help with excess money as you keep doing a better job at work. It also creates a bad end if you can't pay up. When the child becomes of age, the payments stop.
2. Birth control suppression. This doesn't raise suspisions with the police as girls don't see the immediate effects. Girls on birth control will be okay with creampies only to become pregnant later.
3 Later in the game. You end up going to the bar and seeing someone new (guy or girl). You end up sleeping with them only to find out there mom is someone you knocked up or knocked you up (in this case the guy would take the child and you pay support) earlier in the game... oops. Accidental incest could be a fun game mechanic for you as a guy or girl. Hopefully you don't have a new child support payment from this. Now that you know who they are you wouldn't do it again... would you? I mean want would happen if the mom found out?
4. Perminance: I don't think pregancy should be the trigger for perminance. You should only be stuck as a girl for the pregancy. I do believe that the should be a way for perminance and if you play as a guy, you would have to avoid it being force on you.
I know I am writing from a different point of veiw as the creator of this game, but trying to play this game as more of a guy takes away the functions of the game and could be expanded. I am pretty sure there are a lot of events I am not triggering because I mostly play as a guy leaving the game feel empty and undeveloped. I hope I have given the dev or modders ideas to play around with. I like the premise of your game. It's a fun idea. I just want more paths for people to choose there path as a dom or sub man, or dom or sub woman. Of course you could loose a mini game and be forced into something, but that is just part of the game. I understand that. I didn't just write choices that would for me, but for others as well. A simulation game like this is fun because if you do something wrong it could have conciquences.
Note: if there is a skill modder out that that wants to make try and implement this kind of narative into the game go for it. I am not a coder, not in twee at least. I won't mind writing the narative if you need help with that. I do like the game, but not so much the narative state it's in now. It's not bad, it just feels empty as a guy MC.