VN - Ren'Py - Completed - XS Crossing Fate [v1.0] [Xrus Studios]

Just couldnt get into this.

The MC mentions early on that he is sort of a loner that never really hit it off with girls, then a gorgeous Redhead comes into his life and he ignores her. Hell, if that girl was undressing in front of me I wouldnt be asking her why?

The writing just needs to be better if this is going to gain any traction.

It seems to be the author's learning project made for sole purpose of gaining game development experience. Not really worth checking out as there is no inherent value here. Short 5-10 minute story with weak dialogue and dry 2-pose sex scene without animations.

There are two characters. One is a girl whose only personality trait is "wants to fuck the protagonist", while the other is said protagonist whose only personality trait is "apparently has never interacted with another human being in his life."

They fuck. It's competently rendered and not very long. The end.

So the title screen doesn't lie about it being short (it also says it's a short number one, so unfinished i guess?), it's around 5 minutes give or take so there is very little to talk about. And the thing is, overall i would say the staging of the scenes (scuse me, A scene) and the girl model aren't bad, but this is at the point it's so little it ends before it begins. We don't get to learn the characters, nothing is developed, we don't learn why the girl is so ridiculously stubborn about it.

Honestly i can see an alternative timeline where a developer is making some longer game and it's at least fine, but this ultra short barely not even a first act of a prologue ain't it. It's not awful but there is almost negative amount of content here.