This needs the kinetic novel tag. There are no meaningful choices (if you exclude failing to solve puzzles and quitting the game), unlike the premise implies.
The art and the writing are OK: not horrible, but not particularly competent.
But what particularly annoys me is the use of custom speech bubbles instead of the native Ren'Py dialogue system, which means that the normal text speed, skip settings and controls don't work. First, if you are going to do this, your writing needs to be, not just OK, or even good, but superb and riveting. Second, I read a lot faster than most people. The text speed is much, much too slow for me. Ren'Py has an option for text speed precisely for this reason: some people read faster, some slower. But then you go an make it inoperative because... you think you know better? Get bent.
The art and the writing are OK: not horrible, but not particularly competent.
But what particularly annoys me is the use of custom speech bubbles instead of the native Ren'Py dialogue system, which means that the normal text speed, skip settings and controls don't work. First, if you are going to do this, your writing needs to be, not just OK, or even good, but superb and riveting. Second, I read a lot faster than most people. The text speed is much, much too slow for me. Ren'Py has an option for text speed precisely for this reason: some people read faster, some slower. But then you go an make it inoperative because... you think you know better? Get bent.