VN - Others - Completed - Yomegami- My Sweet Goddess [v1.02r] [ALcot]

atrocious writing.

nothing's happening, uninteresting characters, most of the time it devolves to sex and penis jokes which Iris is the biggest offender. Heck, even the MC is mostly forgotten. his trope of needing to do good deeds to somewhat negate his evil deeds from his past life that he can't remember is also pushed to the side just to give way to most of the time, comedy that falls flat.

Character designs are solid and scenes are good quality but the writing is simply unbearable. There is a complete lack of pacing, scenes drag on for far too long which runs any humor into the ground, it frontloads a boatload of uninteresting information which makes the introduction a slog, and a lot of the dialog can be boiled down to basic pervert MC or run-of-the-mill love interest lines. The textbox also likes to move around which is unneccessary and disruptive to flow. It has appealing visuals and production quality is good but the writing needed a much more aggressive editing and revision process.

It's sweet, hit's hilarious, it's lewd, it's heartfelt, and it was well worth the wait for a complete translation. Perfect for when you're in a bad mood.
I wish there were more VNs with official translations like this, instead of the usual slop of depression, rape, scat and misery. This blows anything that overrated hacks like Maeda and Nasu have created out of the water simply by virtue of existing.