VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - You and Me [v0.2] [AgentWho22]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    wrs_supernova

    Early review, so let's state what we have right now

    -Standard looking Sims game.
    -Confusion, since there are two pages with the same game (one with a version 0,2 and other with a 1.0. Both with the same content).

    You can

    -rename the MC
    -set the relations (not paying rent, landlord)
    -wait for it to have more content

    Problems or observations

    -English and writing ain't great. Not the worst as well, but need improvement.
    -There are no choices. (Don't know the scope. If it is a first try this actually may be a good thing, since the dev wouldn't chew more than he could. Though writing level should evolve in case we get a choiceless one).
    -Could use better clothes. MC could've seen mom in a nightwear, a fancy dress, etc.


    Take everything with a grain of salt since this review was written fairly early