It had potential but that went out of the window, too many head scratching decisions as well as overly used clichés like stalling, I'll jump right in it.
Renders:
Okay.
Characters:
Models wise, Ruby is this cream of the crop, just my opinion and maybe Grace but she was a side note. The mom Anna isn't bad to look at either, she just wasn't my favorite. Ruby is a very likable character as far as personality goes. The Mom Anna seems to play dumb on a lot of things and that really hurt her character in my opinion.
Story:
We die, we assume the body of a teenager and that's how the story starts off. We are tasked by Aurora to do things to better the life of the people you left behind. You are burdened with an idiot of a son, Lucas and a extremely sad and sort of pathetic daughter, Emma. You also have to pick up in with the life of the teen who's body you're now occupying, which includes living under a roof with your single mom, Anne and your adoring sister, Ruby.
Now to talk about what I liked and disliked about the story:
It started off good, I enjoyed the relationship that Ruby and the MC have throughout the game. I do like that you help out your kids from your other life and don't totally ignore them. You can pretty much skip any girl you're not attracted to, which is a good deal for me.
What I didn't like most of all was the dialogue. Now I could of sworn that the main character was initially a middle aged man? But you wouldn't know that by playing this game. Our MC behaved as if he was a teenager, which threw me off. Sure he didn't need to talk and behave all the time like a 40 year old but some of this was so cringe. One moment that stuck out the most was when he was getting ready to have sex with Emma for the first time, he's all like "I want her cherry" it was so bad. There was no battle within the character from a father standpoint. "Should I really be doing this with my little girl?" none of that type of dialogue came up doing Emma's first sex scene, instead he was just like a hard up teen, this was a reoccurring theme throughout this game, sadly.
Next, the tasks we had to endure was so cringe. Playing match maker to your crappy, miserable ex-wife? That was on the list? Seriously? How about helping her to became a better person and mother instead? Building your daughter up? Making sure your son isn't around shady people? But no, her getting laid was top priority. Lucas, the idiot son was always into shit, which led the MC getting involved with criminals and we then became a snitch/informant to Roxy. I just didn't picture the story going this way from the way it started out, Grace was the only good thing that came out of that whole ordeal.
Lastly, there was too much stalling with your main girls or should I say still is. Now I love romance, build up, character relationship development just as much as the next guy but this was overkill. There's no way that the MC and Ruby should've been doing some of the things they were doing without fucking. Normally, watersports and such comes AFTER you've bedded your love interest but not in Young Again. They've practically teased each other for the entire 14 chapters with no real payoff. It's the same with the Mom, she teases you, you see each other naked, grind on her, she takes a picture of your dick, more teasing and all that lead up to was an Assjob in the later chapters. And what really was the deal with Richard? You "save" her from the creep, though let's be honest either Anne is just too dumb and had no clue what Richard was doing or secretly enjoyed his antics. My money is on the latter, if I'm wrong then it just makes her character look naïve and weak but that's my opinion.
Conclusion: Too much stalling with main love interest, too many girls that we didn't want in our way. After 14 chapters we should've fucked one or both of the main girls already. Head scratching decisions that created unnecessary drama and of course cringe dialogue and situations.
Alas, fuck Natalie and Elliot, I'm not the love doctor and don't enjoy playing one.