VN - Ren'Py - Your Life with Naomi [v1.2 demo] [yaminox]

I believe the dev just wanted to convey a message about leaving toxic relationships. (Based on the ending where the world gains color when MC leaves girlfriend, and the literal words "respect yourself and know your worth ").

As a game though, the quality is poor. The characters are cartoonishly evil, and the concept is just not executed well. Pacing is also off. Goes from 0 to 100 right off the bat. No build up or anything. It's like the dev really just wanted to spread a message about the dangers of toxic relationships. (or onlyfans simps, findom etc) as fast as possible. The problem though is that the message gets lost if the game your using to spread it is bad.

Overall, there's potential here if the characters get fleshed out a bit more, and the story gets some breathing room. No need to rush to the "good parts" so quickly.

Can't really recommend playing if you like some story with your porn, but it's passable for a quick fap I guess.

it is great if you are into humiliation/degradation! I think its only rated low because not many are into it! give it a try if you are into that. Worth it. It is AI Art but...I mean.... its alright! lol

>"your goth girlfriend"
>Is actually a goth woman who wants nothing to do with the mc
Ai lets anyone make games these days. art was eh but the writing was just bad.
Missed opertuninty having a futa but no real scenes with her, might get added in the future but these characters personalities really doesn't make me want to come back to this game.

I don't mind AI art in a game, if the execution is decent and the game is fun.

This isn't, its a boring bag of shit, the MC is unbearable, the AI art is lazy (at least fix Emma's fingers in her standing pose... I pulled off my glasses to make sense of what her 4 fingers were doing all bunched together).

Too bad zero stars isn't a rating. I guess the 1 star can be for the black and white art?

Big thanks to uploader for going through the trouble. The game itself is composed strictly of AI art that characters that "morph" as they change poses. It's very weird to see as their clothing and even facial features can change from one sentence to the next. The writing is also bad, bad pacing, and almost zero gameplay.

I'll start saying something good. The IA art is okay, and if you're into the submission fetish, I guess I could count as a quick fap bc there is not much build-up.

Now, the not-so-good part, the game is not good, the dialogue is a hyperbole of a cartoon, the goth could perfectly be a villain on Looney Tunes. The same happens with the MC, who is spineless as a slug. The rest of the cast is the same. I'm not going to bother explaining them in detail because they are not characters, they have no personality whatsoever, and in no way have a natural interaction.

If you're going to play the game for the goth, don't. The eyeliner is the only interesting part.

If you're going to play bc there is the possibility of NTS/Cuckold content, don't. The build-up that goes with the fetish is non-existent.

If you're going to play bc of the humiliation part, don't. The dialogue is cartoony and unoriginal.

Honestly, it's just kinda boring and depressing. I imagine if you're into ntr then it might be enjoyable? I'm not into it myself, so I made the mistake of not checking the tags. The dialog is bland, the art isn't very good either, and there's no audio so you don't really get feedback from anything. I'm a firm believer that if you're going to make a videogame you should atleast have some agency as a player- this is just a railroaded experience of being bled of your money, getting cheated on, and being caged up. There's room for improvement in all of these areas especially given the "goth niche" that this game is trying to play into(?). I'm honestly not sure the creator knows what a goth actually is.

Excellent!
I had a great time playing this game. The atmosphere, character design, and writing are top-notch. I especially appreciate the inclusion of NTR its rare to find a game that handles it well without feeling forced. The pacing was solid, and the emotional tension kept me hooked from start to finish. Looking forward to future updates or new projects from the dev. Thanks for the hard work and creativity!

Honestly, I really enjoyed it. It touches some heavy themes of humiliation, but compared to other games that do that, I really enjoyed this one. Would I want to be treated like that irl? Of course not. But it works as a dark, hot and intense fantasy. To the people complaining about every character in the game treating MC like shit, well, maybe this is not the game for you.

This game basically gives you 2 options, either you follow along the path of heavy humiliation that is its story, or you decide to leave your girlfriend and have some self-respect, in which case you heal, the world gains color and you reach the end. It basically works as a meta commentary about this kind of visual novels / games. If you don't enjoy the themes that the game explores, it's as easy as leaving "your goth girlfriend" and playing something that is of your liking,

In my opinion, really hot game in terms of a dark themed fantasy, and the alternative ending about the world turning into color makes me think the author knows this is just a dark fantasy that shouldn't be taken too seriously.

I hope it gets a second act and that it follows the same themes (I'd love for the girlfriend to also join in with the chastity humiliation).

Damn,why even let someone walk all over you and abuse u to this extent?,why is there not a single femdom fmc game which does not involve dark themes like this?, why can't the FMC be loving? Even if it's NTS? ,why must all the femdom ntr game or any femdom game in general have such FMC?.
This is clear trash, another ai trash,all femdom NTS games are just hard ntr,where the mc is abused abused used and then abandoned, 0 star

I understand, entirely, that this game may be for a crowd I'm not 100% down with, but good golly molly.
Your Goth Girlfriend is actually seriously depressing.

When your only options to move forward are to (in order) be abused, be abused off camera, be abused and watch yourself get cucked, literally kill yourself in game, or stop playing the game - in game, it's a sign that you need to be a special brand of masochist to enjoy that treatment.

However, from a gameplay perspective, it also means that there are serious problems.
The player has no valid choices, navigation between events is clunky, walls of text dumps are the majority of the playtime, the AI art's quality jumps around, and the game will gets stuck on a black screen on any non-suffering ending (or at least it did for me.)
The game's a slog and has no payoff, in addition to being seriously fuggin' depressing. True story: I convinced myself to get through to the end, then went to have a couple shots of whiskey (at 11 AM) to clear my head.

And then comes the cherry on top - your goth girlfriend is not a 'big tiddy goth GF' to keep the dream alive.
Her sweater puppies are mere sweater hamsters... Except in that singular AI image where they were massive.

Giving two stars only because the idea and art are good (if you've got a humiliation fetish. Which to be transparent, I don't) but at the end of the day it's generic AI generated slop. The characters practically change art style on each still and at least 1 moment where the script describes a character only for their still to be the complete opposite. Something you're not gonna notice if you're just trying to speed to the sex scenes.

For fuck's sakes, Despite asking for your name, the game still reffers to you as "MAIN" during your dialogue