Ren'Py - Abandoned - YourChoice [v0.1 Demo] [DzsiGam]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

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    The following review is based off my personal experience with playing this Game/Visual Novel... I try to be as brutally honest and detailed as I can, and these are my own opinions and thoughts, from one or more play throughs... The version this review is based on is v0.1 Demo...

    Originally Reviewed on 12/30/2017

    This visual novel/game is very early into it's development and doesn't have much content at the moment, but it does appear a bit grindy...

    The visuals of the characters are good, and the backdrops are alright... The user interface for moving around the house is easy to use...

    The script is chop full of broken English as well as spelling/grammar errors... It is very difficult to read, and many of the choice buttons do not make complete sense... The plot is yet another overused Family Sex themed one, with the male protagonist living with his mother, sister, and girl friend... There is not much in the way of actual story, and much of the dialogue and monologue seems more like place holders than real conversations... As an example, every time the protagonist has coffee in the morning, half the conversation for the women is replaced with "blah...blah" as if what they say does not really matter, or the protagonist just does not care... There just seems to be no real character development, or meaningful feelings between the characters and the protagonist...

    This game/VN is focused on a stat grind of Trust and Lust with each character the protagonist interacts with... All of which appears to be influenced by how he dresses as well as the same highly repetitive chit chat he can do during certain parts of the day... These stats seem to influence how the characters dress and open events for the protagonist to take part of... There really is not much content, and the grind is lengthy and highly repetitive... And what little story it has, flies by quickly... As this game/VN is just a Demo version of the game, which is way early into it's development, there isn't really much to it...

    Overall, it feels more like this is just a proof of concept game/VN, since it is marked as a Demo... Plus it has the same name, currently, as another visual novel/game, yet they are not related... It is different from others, in that it uses clothing as a means to change stats, but a lot of the text is so confusing and hard to read, which makes it difficult to play... Because it seems to be more of a Family Sex Corruption/Domination porn game, then an actual story driven VN, I will most likely not revisit this one... I'll just have to wait and see, maybe if it really tries hard to improve itself, because right now I'm not impressed with it...