- Jul 26, 2023
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Is it me or does the writing feel...incomplete?
I feel like I'm having a bad trip. Conversations end out of nowhere, random ass transitions that make no sense, abrupt/unnecessary sex scenes that add nothing to the plot and do nothing for you, the player.
The narrative takes some truly confusing turns that have had no build-up whatsoever, often leaving the readers guessing what's happening and who the MC is talking to.
But some of the best 3d models/renders I've ever seen though. Feels like they did the hard part right and then fumbled the ball when it came to the easier stuff.
I'm still waiting for this one to grab me. I really like the renders, and most of the girls are nice and desirable, but the story has yet to drag me in. I really want it to and haven't given up. Waiting on the next update to see whether it can pull me in.For me the narrative took me some time to get into and granted have to accept a lawyer doing non lawyer work. It was until the MC rescued the girl from that house when I got into the story. Can't speak about the quality of the writing or dialogue as the way I play I find personally hard to notice good vs bad writing most of the time. If I recall only 1 of the lewd scenes didn't feel random to me. Even then there is practically no build up as this game is lacking on character development to me.