Ren'Py - A Wife's Phone [v0.4.8] [Bloody Ink]

Well at last a game where the writing is "readable" and really thrilling, the storyline intruiging and the concept with the phone refreshing!

I really really love to play 0.15 and i want to save Jenny and Christie... or dont iI...?

keep this up @ Dev youre programming a real pearl here!!

This game has a TON of potential and I am giving it 5 stars based on that alone. In this early version, there isn't really much to do and that makes a lot of sense as this version seems less like a final product and more of a proof of concept. Given that the developer is actively looking for feedback about whether a story like this has appeal to a wide enough audience, I think this whole experiment will come down to whether there is enough interest in it or not. As such, I would say that if you are looking for a VN game format that is a bit different from the motion-comic-book style that most VNs are these days and you don't mind the particular hang ups and fetishes of the content, then let your voice and support be heard. Similarly if you are into the fetishes and content, but less in the format, let that be known as well. I like the whole package, so I am eager to see what comes next - I just hope the issue where hitting the space bar at certain points sends you back to the main menu gets fixed. Really promising start!

its exactly what it looks like

fairly good writing

lots of professional real porn

100% BBC Cuckold netorase

Theres really nothing else to say as the game is very short
but sure I can waffle on about it being presented very nicely as well

Although this is only v.01, I am rating it based on its potential, not where it is now in early development.

As other reviewers have said, the phone interface is somewhat unique and makes for compelling hook. One reason why that is so is because it is realistic. Most games here are not very realistic (fine), but it is great to see one that is built on a realistic concept (even if the interactions are more fantasy).

Some suggestions: First, introduce a few more characters, some of which don't necessarily end up going anywhere (that would really up the realism). Have their interactions with the MC be more realistic, short, meaningful, not grindy. Second, design the files so that players can mod easily with their own preferred images of their own friends/wives/etc. Third, this phone-style seems best to focus on cheating, so play that up enough with several main options for the MC and MC wife. Make it so the wife can cheat some or alot, in different scenarios, for different reasons (without a huge decision tree).

I look forward to seeing v.02.

This game is fantastic, great interface and concept. Can't wait for more content and seems like the dev will be putting out updates fairly often. Definitely one on the top of my watch list. Hope it doesn't go down the trans route or sissification route like many of these games do.

This is a really strong start! I saw another review that suggested that Ren'Py isn't the best engine for this story, and I think I agree, since it's got such a unique layout. I encountered a bug, too, where if I was on the home screen of the phone, hitting the spacebar or clicking on the margins of the screen it would take me back to the home screen of the game and I'd lose progress.

Still, this seems like a really hot start, and I look forward to more, whether it turns out to be a linear story, or one with different paths.

Really well done so far! And a very unique idea to have it all run through the interface of smartphones.

Personally I would really enjoy if the game embraced the BBC, QoS, BNWO themes EVEN MORE, but that's just selfishly cuz they're exciting kinks for me.

Keep sissifying the white cucks!

Excellent start for a v0.1 little short, but it was expected but the little we got was perfect,
(a little too linear)
a little more freedom of choice and different fetish, and it actually could be perfect
but with the amount of picture and video me and other as given on the discord already I have high hope for the future

It employs a clever system as you watch everything from your smartphone. You interact with people through that device and see the outcomes as photos. I am very curious to see how you will interact with your wife's adventures. Photos and models are fitting to the scene and concept is very exciting for now. I am looking forward to see frequent and meaningful updates. I hope this turns out to be gem.

Hast great NTR potential if youre into that kind of thinng.

love the choice of images so far.

The story could use some work but i really dont mind it. Looking forward to seeing more updated, not too much to go off so far.

**v0.15 Turning into some A tier shit, lots more content added. Worried the creator might be doing too many story threads and wont be able to deliver, but id love to be proven wrong. Cant wait to see more

Good start, perhaps a slower rate would be better as the colleague goes a bit too weirdly fast . I like the idea of the phone interface and the mc just experiencing everything through the device. I Look forward to seeing more.

TL;DR = game focused on cheating, voyeurism, spying. Really early in development.

Story: 2/5
- The story goes like: every single girl in MC's life is a slut. Majority of them are sluts for black cocks. As far as we know only MC's wife is sort of good person, but that will somehow change soon.
- There isnt any plot at all. Everybody is cheating. At start MC has trouble accepting it, but after few minutes he accepts it. That's all the plot development we get. It feels quite lacklustre.

Art: 2/5
- This game contains some random pictures and GIFs. The number is quite low.
- The game is mostly text based. If you dont mind, then feel free to check out the game.

Sex stuff: 0/5
- The sex part is HUGE disappointment for me. In text based games I expect a lot of description of the sex. Unfortunately the game doesnt have that. You are only witnessing the game through mobile phone interface and it sucks. Imagine this example:
Wife sends you a message "I will be home in 1 hour and I feel horny". But then the game will SKIP entire sex scene with some message "2 hours have passed". After that you will receive a SMS from your wife "Today we had nice sex". OMG! Bascially the game skips the whole sex part. You will only hear how good/bad sex was. No details!!!

Gameplay: 2/5
- Idea about the the witnessing the story only through mobile phone interface is novelty idea. But it also sucks because it restricts players a lot.
- The game is also very early in development and there isnt much content at this point. It is quite short.
- The game has some choices, but they dont affect much. So far only difference is seeing slightly different pictures. No matter what you choose the game will proceed anyway.
- Game is also very UNFINISHED and buggy.
- Skip button doesnt work.
- Settings about text speed dont work. You can set to "max" or "min" speed, but text will always CRAWL slowly on your screen.
- There is no image gallery. When people send you pictures, you cant see them at your own leisure. The image will only popup when you click through the text and then it will disappear. If you want to see it again, you will to SCROLL BACK through a tons of text. Seriously? If dev takes his time to create mobile phone interface in RenPy then at least he should add img gallery.

To sum it up:
This is game in early development. At this point it is not worth playing. Maybe check the game later.

A bit of a new take on the wife corruption path. I would prefer that there was a little more freedom with the path, but this is so much better than games that require a grind to progress story. Decent imagery. I hope there will be more options to stear the wife into different directions in future updates.

A great start I like the phone simulation idea. It's the first time I've played a game like this, and, well, it's really good. The MC is likeable and seems like a good person who loves his wife. There already are some choices to make, so the player won't be railroaded into stuff they don't like.
I haven't seen any bugs, and the game is quite good from a technical standpoint. I mean, it's a pretty realistic simulation of a phone with messages and apps.
So, best of luck to the dev! Looking forward to the next update

This is a really interesting concept approach, with a lot of hot images and videos. If you're not into interracial you may want to avoid this title. There are a lot of good quality clips and images from Blacked.

Be aware that the notes at the end as well as the overview mention feminization and hypnosis. I'm unsure who can be feminized, but it may be the MC or some of the other men. The hypno spam is definitely the kind of content that accompanies feminization and sissification of the MC. Crossing my fingers.

It is emphasized that all such content is avoidable/optional, including optional NTR of your wife.

I'll try all of the routes regardless.
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Edit: Sadly, the avoidable content is not so avoidable. Many of the story's cheating aspects play out even if you do nothing. Avoiding certain characters, such as Kirely, avoids their content, but not the major family members. Currently, there are a lot of flaws in the programming so that you end up with your wife both cheating and acting like she's not cheating.

The game's greatest flaw is the central role of Jenna. She is the architect of your character's downfall, appears to be responsible for many of the behind the scenes machinations with family, and yet, despite the MCs mild annoyance with her, she has access to you and your entire family w/your consent. That is not something any rational person would do after being so thoroughly stabbed in the back by her (As in you lose your company, your job, your house, and you owe Salim $1 billion--queue Dr Evil). It seriously interferes w/the main narrative thrust of the game. I'm honestly just waiting for Jenna to be revealed as the main villain of the story--which the MC will ultimately be fine w/and glad she allowed you to become the cuck you've secretly always wanted to be.

So, I've revised the rating down from a 5 to a 3-star rating. The Dev has chosen a lot of good images, and quality porn, and it will please NTR lovers. But, it is undermined by a messy, inconsistent, and incoherent story, and is annoyingly repetitive too often. There are a lot of bugs that thwart any attempt to save you of your family from their inevitable downfall. So, despite the claims, current bugs in the game mean little of the NTR is actually avoidable. You will inevitably have scenes that make no sense. If NTR is your fetish, you'll avoid many of these flaws, and probably be fine with the flaws and bugs you do run across (so 4 stars for NTR lovers--still a lot of bugs and repetition).

Great Start ! Can't wait for next update . Good mix of resistance from the husband about wife's promiscuity. Couple of bugs and text mistakes but i am sure dev will fix those. The characters are well defined and good direction.

Nice relaease the Game seens very very interesting, i hope the Game go far in this route. I wait next update of this. The way you can "hack" phone, the social media app, nice image pick, well i don't have to much of this, the Game is on early developement but promises. Good job developer i hope the Next chapter keep the same quality

where the fuck do i begin -_-

ok, so, if this is a legit game,it has a semi intresting premis, inspired from the girlfreind abroad or whatever it was. simple ground work content wise, a decent base. the future of it could be intresting.

as for the way the game is made/played, very bad, at least for the renpy engine, twine suger cuber or other engines could be better.

having text speed funtion be default no matter that the setting is isnt a good idea.
disabaling the skip dialog also isnt a good idea,
I am not a programmer but something tells me the reason those to exist, is because the game would be unplayable with the following and the last 2,
when you click 1 too many times after a convo is ended you are expected to click the home butoon on the bottem of the screen, click too many times and it will boot you to the menu.
same with the phones "home screen" after the players dialog is finished at times you are supose to select the messaging app or the instagram app, but click the home screen and you get booted to the menu.

you have shown the next mechanics of game play, they are intresting for sure, but the last problem, of being booted to the menu from 1 accedental click, must be resolved, other wise people will drop it thinking the game is borked.

i am intrested to see what is planned and how it comes out, best of luck.

A really great first instalment. Very few bugs or errors when played on android (wife's name is sometimes the MC's name is the only one that stands out) Definitely one to watch for those who...enjoy this type of content...

Writing and pacing is great and I can see this becoming quite addictive if played long-term. I wouldn't mind seeing the son being sissified at some point too...