Overall this is a very impressive start to a story and I cannot wait for more
PROS:
The models aren't just copied and pasted from other games
This game has a unique premise with interesting characters
This game contains (for the most part) good English with a few mistakes in there
It's a option/consequence game which I personally like more than games where excessive clicking is necessary to accomplish goals
It's a rather long 0.1 version, which is nice
CONS:
There aren't any sex scenes in 0.1, but this is probably because the developer is trying to build up relationships instead of going straight to sex
I do not know how good the Ren'Py will be in this game as there are no scenes containing it
CONCLUSION: 5/5 This game looks really promising. Hopefully the developer puts a lot of time into it. And also because there is a dog in it, which usually helps bring up the rating. (If the dog continues to be in the story, I'll rate this game a 6/5)