- Mar 17, 2018
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First impressions my dude... Grammar is really, really bad!
Clothing is bad, the bodies are clipping through in a lot of cases.
No sound, no music at all, not sure since when this is even acceptable... Barebones ren'py with minimal work done to it.
This whole project feels like someone had fun in Daz and made a decent female model and decided to put a 'game' around it later on with zero -or at the most: minimal- knowledge about coding, project management.
The fact that your versioning doesn't follow any standards also says a lot.
Finally, and just to point out the problems with incorrect grammar... my favorite sentence from the demo:
I honestly did a quick mirriam search to see if the Grape as the fruit could be used as an adjective/verb... and to my surprise it could, but probably not what you wanted to convey...
Clothing is bad, the bodies are clipping through in a lot of cases.
No sound, no music at all, not sure since when this is even acceptable... Barebones ren'py with minimal work done to it.
This whole project feels like someone had fun in Daz and made a decent female model and decided to put a 'game' around it later on with zero -or at the most: minimal- knowledge about coding, project management.
The fact that your versioning doesn't follow any standards also says a lot.
Finally, and just to point out the problems with incorrect grammar... my favorite sentence from the demo:
I honestly did a quick mirriam search to see if the Grape as the fruit could be used as an adjective/verb... and to my surprise it could, but probably not what you wanted to convey...
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