Comics Abandoned Lara Gets Captured! [Part 1] [nexTGen]

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Lara Gets Captured! Part 1.​

Updated: 2019-06-28
Developer/Publisher: nexTGen F95zone
Censorship: No
Language: English
Resolution: 797x945
Pages: 82
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[Papa Ernie]

Editing thread.

Done. Good luck with your comic!

 

[FemaLep]

Well... it's half-decent at best.

- The text (including sound effects), usually should be in bubbles or placed somewhere around the focus point (of the action) on the page, rather than just on the bottom.

- The font for the text also seems too stand out too much (is that Impact?), you should try a different font.

- The models look like they belong in a third-rate SFM porn animation. Though for a beginner's work, I don't think this matters too much.

- You should keep your logo in one place, it's very odd to look at when it's placed in random locations across the comic. The logo does slightly irk me however. That graffiti font for your name, and the contrast between the green text color and yellow oval background makes your logo look amateurish, and just... bad. Though, this is my opinion.

- Even though you have a long way to go, I think this comic is adequate considering you are just starting out.

 

[whereislotion]

well, i get used to see her 'captured' :/

 

[nexTGen]

Well... it's half-decent at best.

- The text (including sound effects), usually should be in bubbles or placed somewhere around the focus point (of the action) on the page, rather than just on the bottom.

- The font for the text also seems too stand out too much (is that Impact?), you should try a different font.

- The models look like they belong in a third-rate SFM porn animation. Though for a beginner's work, I don't think this matters too much.

- You should keep your logo in one place, it's very odd to look at when it's placed in random locations across the comic. The logo does slightly irk me however. That graffiti font for your name, and the contrast between the green text color and yellow oval background makes your logo look amateurish, and just... bad. Though, this is my opinion.

- Even though you have a long way to go, I think this comic is adequate considering you are just starting out.

Thanks for your advice. I appreciate.

 

[nexTGen]

Editing thread.

Done. Good luck with your comic!

Thank you very much!