v.04 Update:
The writing seems to be improving somewhat, however the reality quotient is still off the rails. Does she really have to be suffering from schizophrenia in order to be a slut? Just make her a former slut being tempted to her old ways. Much more organic conflict than what we see emerging here.
The writing is really terrible. Not just bad dialog, but the actual interactions are very unrealistic. Motivations are unclear and responses are wooden. These aren't fleshed out characters, but puppets following a disjointed plot. There doesn't seem to be a redeemable or likable character in the lot. Considering this is a straight VN with virtually no choices, it lives or dies on the writing, and that's poor. The graphics border on disturbing with some weird, uncanny valley animations here and there.
By the way, it's not NTR if he gives her away - but it is interesting.
As a matter of fact, the premise does border on being a great idea. Here's an suggestion, dump the resistance to a potential hotwife/cuckold fantasy, and have the couple embrace it. Then the company can be ironically thwarted, because willing participants cannot be exploited.
This would also address my major complaint. Considering the poor level of writing, all the non-consensual content comes off as flatly distasteful and not very erotic.
The writing seems to be improving somewhat, however the reality quotient is still off the rails. Does she really have to be suffering from schizophrenia in order to be a slut? Just make her a former slut being tempted to her old ways. Much more organic conflict than what we see emerging here.
The writing is really terrible. Not just bad dialog, but the actual interactions are very unrealistic. Motivations are unclear and responses are wooden. These aren't fleshed out characters, but puppets following a disjointed plot. There doesn't seem to be a redeemable or likable character in the lot. Considering this is a straight VN with virtually no choices, it lives or dies on the writing, and that's poor. The graphics border on disturbing with some weird, uncanny valley animations here and there.
By the way, it's not NTR if he gives her away - but it is interesting.
As a matter of fact, the premise does border on being a great idea. Here's an suggestion, dump the resistance to a potential hotwife/cuckold fantasy, and have the couple embrace it. Then the company can be ironically thwarted, because willing participants cannot be exploited.
This would also address my major complaint. Considering the poor level of writing, all the non-consensual content comes off as flatly distasteful and not very erotic.