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Well, that was different! It's way too early for a proper review, so...
Pros: Emmy is an attractive protagonist, the renders are decent and the story behind Emmy doing what she is doing is an interesting one (kidnapped and forced in to becoming a spy of sorts by a shadowy figure, not that you would get that from the overview though).
Cons: The pacing seems a bit off at times, which isn't helped by the dialogue not making much sense in places. There is also some inconsistency in the beach scene. If you say no to Paul touching you, Emmy still mentions how she already felt Paul's hands on her body later on in the scene, except he never touched her. Also, though the dialogue is in English, saving and quitting is in Cyrillic script. Finally, as Purple Lagoon mentioned in their post, not including skip, auto and rollback makes playing this painful if you accidentally scroll through the dialogue too quickly and have to reload an earlier save.
Emmy's secret, what I have written above may have come across as overly negative but it really isn't meant to be. I liked what is already included, this game really does have a lot of potential and I'd love to see more of this. I'd like to offer a few of suggestions though. Firstly, please think about using a proofreader for the dialogue, it could really help with the flow of the game. Also, please look at reinstating the skip, auto and rollback functions. Finally, the overview doesn't really explain anything about the game itself, but it should as it is your first chance to gain some interest from potential Patreon supporters. Maybe something like this:
That last paragraph was pure speculation by the way!
Anyway, whatever you decide with your game, good luck, I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next!
Pros: Emmy is an attractive protagonist, the renders are decent and the story behind Emmy doing what she is doing is an interesting one (kidnapped and forced in to becoming a spy of sorts by a shadowy figure, not that you would get that from the overview though).
Cons: The pacing seems a bit off at times, which isn't helped by the dialogue not making much sense in places. There is also some inconsistency in the beach scene. If you say no to Paul touching you, Emmy still mentions how she already felt Paul's hands on her body later on in the scene, except he never touched her. Also, though the dialogue is in English, saving and quitting is in Cyrillic script. Finally, as Purple Lagoon mentioned in their post, not including skip, auto and rollback makes playing this painful if you accidentally scroll through the dialogue too quickly and have to reload an earlier save.
Emmy's secret, what I have written above may have come across as overly negative but it really isn't meant to be. I liked what is already included, this game really does have a lot of potential and I'd love to see more of this. I'd like to offer a few of suggestions though. Firstly, please think about using a proofreader for the dialogue, it could really help with the flow of the game. Also, please look at reinstating the skip, auto and rollback functions. Finally, the overview doesn't really explain anything about the game itself, but it should as it is your first chance to gain some interest from potential Patreon supporters. Maybe something like this:
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Anyway, whatever you decide with your game, good luck, I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next!
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Well a story that makes no sense, setup in 3-4 images and a few lines then it's time for secrets. My god, at least there is something like a story i guess!
Then we have an adventure without any fun or interest, well the girl is pretty at least but nothing happens unfortunately.
The dev had a nice model and a few clothings and tried to make something out of it, but we need a little more to get interested!
Then we have an adventure without any fun or interest, well the girl is pretty at least but nothing happens unfortunately.
The dev had a nice model and a few clothings and tried to make something out of it, but we need a little more to get interested!
- Feb 1, 2017
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Emmy's secret Congratulation on your game. I would like to know what kind future tags you will add.
Female protagonist games can have some good femdom scenes. Will you add any femdom scenes
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Female protagonist games can have some good femdom scenes. Will you add any femdom scenes
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- Sep 27, 2017
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I hope her secret is murdering guys who grope her and teasing girls because she is lesbian...
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Already in progressEmmy's secret Congratulation on your game. I would like to know what kind future tags you will add.
Female protagonist games can have some good femdom scenes. Will you add any femdom scenes
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If you use this you can add a quick menu to the bottom of the screen and then you can do all the things you want to do....... https://f95zone.to/threads/renpy-re...-quick-menu-v7-6-change-save-name-v0-3.13751/
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Hey, You probably know what is happening in Ukraine. Due to hostilities, I had to postpone the release of the next update. But now I'm safe and actively working on an update.