VN Ren'Py Abandoned Quickfix - Laura vs You!!! [v1.0] [SaltySai]

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Overview:
Laura is about to steal an age old heirloom of yours, stop her at all costs.
This is a femdom game with relevant elements.​

Thread Updated: 2021-12-08
Release Date: 2021-12-08
Developer: SaltySai
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Version: 1.0
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Mister_M

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So it's 2 mediocre scenes with a tiny bit of context, weird looking MC, and almost no plot whatsoever. I think that if someone here wants to interest possible supporters then that someone should spend more time on fleshing out the demo/1st release. As of now I can't say it looks promising. I can only hope it's only a poor start of an otherwise great game.
 
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Akkarin69

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Laura seriously doesn't know what she is doing in this picture, because she is doing it all wrong. There isn't any pressure at the neck of the MC at all this way.
 
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So I downloaded this.. whatever it is. The opening screen is already making me questioning the decision. It's picture one in the preview. Anyway, the game starts by calling the girl Lara, just to switch to Laura in the very next sentence. So the game creator doesn't even care enough about the girl to remember her name longer than 10 seconds..
And it keeps changing. "Laura" speaks to you for a while, then it's back to "Lara". The name stays Lara for a while until she speaks again and now it's Laura again. Make up your mind already! But no, the name keeps changing... and then Laura or Lara or Whatever makes you pass out and the game is over.

Also like I already said, the "necklock" doesn't work this way as it is shown in the picture, because the lower leg is ABOVE the other leg (which is also over the shoulder of the MC - hell, La(u)ra, WTF are you doing?), so there is no way to apply any pressure on the neck of the MC.

Great start. Not.
 
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