VN Ren'Py Completed Pious Ari [v1.0] [noasfw]

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Overview:
Ariandra is a nun that's extremely dedicated to her god, Cira.
However, her strict life changes one day as a mystery woman suddenly appears in her bedroom - and a new world is opened to her.​

Thread Updated: 2024-11-12
Release Date: 2023-12-08
Developer: noasfw

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Version: 1.0
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English
Other Games: Marin's Expansion Delivery
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[Grandy_UiD]

This actually looks interesting. Will check it out sometime.

 

[CoffeeSaint]

looks interesting!



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thanks for the sharing, Zemax;
cheers.

 

[Sonico]

Female protag & lesbian tags, nothing remotely resembling a male in the images, not to mention one previous lesbian focus game... what deluded convinced you about there being anything else?

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[rKnight]

"Pious Ari"
*suggested plot*



One says "Father", the other says "Daddy"...

THX for sharing...

 

[Nikodor]

Female protag & lesbian tags, nothing remotely resembling a male in the images, not to mention one previous lesbian focus game... what deluded convinced you about there being anything else?

Hey, in Postal 2 you can do a pacifist run. Why in this game you can't do a nun run?

 

[GreenDark]

I like the story you have going here and I'm intrigued to see more.

Though I like the story itself I don't like the choices and their results. Firstly it really didn't seem like they mattered much outside of one (touch Lydia's chest). Maybe these early choices will have consequences later but for now it just seems like a matter of flavor.
Lastly, I really don't appreciate the backwards logic of the results. In the first choice, if you reprimand Lydia the goal is obviously to get her to correct her behaviour and letting it go would obviously mean you don't care that she repents. Why would you reverse the results? Reprimanding her has no effect and letting it go makes her feel bad admit her mistake.
It feels like you thought you were clever but the audience has no way to know whatever arbitrary thought your brain is running with. It falls directly into one of the major flaws of choices in VNs which is making the reader think "that's not what the choice meant".

Again, I like the story being told. The writing is neither bloated nor curt and the characters are strongly portrayed and engaging. If this were a kinetic VN I'd have no complaints since my only issue is the way you handle choices.

 

[JenMistress]

Short demo, but the Universal Mods worked with it, so tried it out. Very interesting story, and that was indeed one hawt demon lady, that's for sure. Interested in seeing where this goes. Thank you for this, and looking forward for more!!!

 

[AelphysTerra]

Avaron1974 Thoughts?

 

[x~Minchen~x]

Looks good so far. And as I understand Kashei, he really wants the incest tag for personal reasons. I don't think this is the right story though.

 

[krysik]

really enjoyed the demo, can't wait for more

 

[Avrital]

Looks good so far. And as I understand Kashei, he really wants the incest tag for personal reasons. I don't think this is the right story though.

nah,he talking about why f/f is bad,and why f/m is good(according to bible),nothing about incest

 

[DiamondNinja]

Missing a rape tag

 

[Marcypawn]

OOOOOH neat art style! Gonna check it out sometime later

 

[syh653]

That was a fun little demo.

 

[Mapfap303]

A yuri only game with interesting premise and art style, sign me in !

 

[spikesagitta]

That's a pretty good demo! I really like the art style too.

 

[friedburger]

looks good i cant wait to see her get plowed like cheap ply wood

 

[LucioLupo]

Cute demo