I haven't had time to play yet due to my lack of time, but I intend to test your game as soon as I finish updating mine. But right away I thought the art of the game was a little strange. I'm not a professional designer and I don't even do my game with original CGs (I use Koikatsu) but I'm taking some lessons to start a new project with a friend. I advise you to try using a different pattern for your images. Your painting IS VERY GOOD, but the proportion of these drawings is quite lacking. Your drawings remind me of BLEACH by the lips, eyes, and hair. Why not try the Bleach (anime) style? This comment is not to discourage you or anything like this, quite the contrary, it is to try to give you a moral strength since many think that drawing is something "so easy". Take a look at this drawing. >>>
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<<< I made it a few days ago. I didn't even draw a straight toothpick months ago, but I started basing my drawings on Fairy tail, and I improved the posture of it in a good way. I'm sure you'll be able to improve if you try.