VN - Ren'Py - 4 Years in Tehran [v0.6] [Monia Sendicate]

Honestly Im just contributing to "fix" the rating of this game, the game its awful, every rate of 1 star here its true and sad.

The game start like a rollercoaster where in the beggining start to go up above like 3 or 4 meters (you have choices that supposedly will matter on the long run, spoiler alert, it only matter on what scene you wanted to watch or not) to go down, down and to the abyss.

The story goes from innocent naive (arab? sorry idk) girl from dumb repressed bimbo girl that always take the dumbest option for porn plot, the angel doesnt exits anymore just the devil, now that I think about it... does angel and devil exists in the muslim religion? they look more like catholic creatures, but still you could say that the porn could be the only redeemable aspect of this game... Its not.

Every important side character that they show that you think they could have something with the MC... they do not, instead the MC will be doing naughty shit with characters that doesnt have anything interesting (and are mostly filthy for no reason), probably to reduce the divergent options and overall the creativity of this game, its starts offering you possibly, old guys, shota, lesbian, even vanila and nothing of those things its explored, even the shota guy got raped without any reason non warning and I be like "wtf? who asked for this in a game about female protagonist?"
Anyways, the MC lost her V card with the random most booring guy in the dumbest porn situation, as you can see the devs are imcompetent to do a more complex game and just want easy money.

The end... Thash mediocre game

I’ve been playing since it was released as an RPGMaker game, over 3 years ago now. It started out spectacularly, with a good story, a solid introduction of characters, potentially interesting scenes, and a good and engaging context. But with each update, it kept getting worse. I don’t think it’s fair to review a game right at the start; well, maybe if it’s being updated as it progresses, yes, but that usually doesn’t happen. So I’m writing this review now because I won’t be playing anymore. With each update, the fetishes that made the game great have been disappearing. It’s disgusting to me to see such high ratings just because of how it started. The main characters never had the chance for good scenes after the midway point. Updates take forever, the developer lies constantly, and on top of that, a new character always appears, gets one scene, and then disappears. This would be fine if the others were progressing, but what happens instead is that they introduce a new character, replace the protagonists, and then they disappear. In reality, this game doesn’t deserve even one star overall, but seeing the inflated ratings and the direction it’s going, I have to give it one.

They introduce a new character, a friend of the protagonist, who supposedly goes to school with him but looks four times his size. And there’s a totally random and out-of-place gay scene with the friend. This game has fallen into a pit of despair. The main character just sleeps with random people for no reason—it’s all pathetic. You can’t drag out a project for so long without working on it consistently because it loses all meaning. No one should keep paying for this product unless it’s already finished. At this point, it feels like a huge scam. I don’t understand how anyone can think it makes sense to introduce new characters in version 0.7—what are you talking about? Honestly, I think too many kids are voting on this site. You see comments and reviews that are clearly from very young people. I’m not saying minors because, in theory—and I repeat, in theory—they shouldn’t have access, but that’s how I see it.

In short, avoid this game. With every update, it breaks more and disappoints even further.

I could write 100 lines on why this game doesn't deserve more than 1 star but playing it tired me so much that I don't even have the energy to type
FMC is a complete idiot. her brain is no different from a 4-year-old child. Anyone in the world can deceive her. The logic and reasons for her actions are very stupid and illogical
Everything in this game is random, there is no real plan, logic or story, suddenly a gay scene happens, suddenly someone comes out of nowhere and deceives the FMC, etc
Animations are completely mechanical if you don't know how to make a tense animation with a good camera angle, you'd better stick to the renders. A game without animation is better than a game with bad animation
You can't even find a person in this game with a good character and personality, they are all weird and simple and clichéd
Renders are sometimes good sometimes weak
The writing is very simple and clichéd, I didn't experience any pleasure from reading the dialogues
And etc
Really everything about this game is bad only FMC is hot and has an original appearance

I wrote this review because it wasted my time so it should pay the price fairly

I just love female protagonist games, and this was an amazing one! Corrupting her is just great, considering she is a very religious woman.
Would have been 5 stars if it was completed instead of abandoning, would love to see where the story goes and how much more we can corrupt her.

This is by far one of the greatest VN games I have played. This game touches on many great aspects, such as great rendered character models, great story for all the characters, good writing, and well designed game play mechanics across the whole game. I recommend this game to players and I support the developer for this game. I am looking forward to future updates.

I usually don't put my immediate reactions here nor do I jot down negative reviews, but this time I take an exception.

I had the opportunity to travel to Iran and live in Tehran for about a year. Interesting people, some good, some shady and some weird, much like any other place, really.

Why does it matter? I'll tell you in a minute.

I am totally OK with people letting their imagination run wild using exotic/real life settings and locations. That part is fine and usually leads to some saucy games.

But if you kickstart your game by saying "This is all real-life events" while you portray everyone as rapists and sadists while the MC is a pathologically masochist female ... that's no longer a game, that's a cultural hit-piece.

I personally took offense to this honestly, even though I have nothing to do with the country, and I can't remember the last time I got triggered.

And that's besides the poor grammar, crappy storylines, unfathomably dumb main character and nonsensical reactions and phoned in sex scenes.

Conclusion:
If you haven't downloaded this, do the following instead: The next time you go to the bathroom and take a giga-dump, one with an overpowering odor, take a deep nasal breath and enjoy that pungent smell. That would still be more wholesome and enjoyable than playing this.

I'm a sucker for a good female protagonist who has the opportunity to explore her sexual interests and fantasies. The English is poor, so it can make the dialog and story hard to follow, but many of the situations presented are highly erotic. It's not a sophisticated production, this game, but if you keep your expectations modest and enjoy female protagonists, I think you may find yourself enjoying this like I did.

MC is super hot, story can be overwhelming but it’s going in a nice direction in my opinion.

Grammar can be improved but it’s not a deal breaker, content is good enough that it’s worth to stick around.

If you like corruption games where you can keep MC’s virginity but still turn her into a slut this game looks like a very promising addition to that genre.

Keep up the good work dev!

The first thing I want to say is that if you hate bad grammair and bad dialogue stay away from this because they are a lot of problems with that.

The sex scenes are sometimes animated but it just feels cheap and the sex sound effects don´t sound good either, they also have a lot of frame drops.

The story is not good and it takes too much time away from all the porn stuff which is not good in this case. The characters are all very unhuman, males are mostly just horny because the main character Marsha is supposed to looklike the hoottest person ever which I find weird because she looks so boring. Marsha is also a very dumb and naive person at points I was so frustraded at her because it isn´t realistic, she is also very awful to her "boyfriend" especially in the end. In the beginning it is also said that this is a real story that happend to a friend, but that seems like a lie and I hope it is because if everything did happen makeing a porn game with these characters is just disgusting and shows that the creator didn´t really care about the person this happend too.

Don´t play this.

monia thats a great game! A game with brain and handlings. A little differtent to the most others here.
i like it and will follow the next time. Hope that the updates will be faster in the future. wish the best

Was this written by a revolutionary guard or some sucker to an ayatollah's balls? The situations in this VN would turn any nympho into a frigid woman with the number of humiliations and put downs the FMC has to suffer and yet we are to believe that she's getting wet at the thought of ,let's face it, rape because 'all' the sex in this VN is akin to rape or forced. Even the better made ones are not arousing at all. Deleting.

Storyline : 5/5
Images : 5/5
Gameplay : 4/5
I played the latest version. the pictures and music of the game were wonderful. also, new music is used in this game. But what surprised me the most is the frames of the animations, Some animations have more than 60 frames per second, That is very strange and nice

Pretty amazing game

Story 10/10
Animations 8/10
Renders 8/10
Main Character 10/10

I live in iran and this is true story ofc not happend for all do not listen to those who says its not true story they are either brainwashed or too blind to see the truth
Ive never seen this fine corroption developing on a charecter its really really good but lets cut the islamic stuff they are mostly dead now for high majority of ppl and having sex with old people its not fun
The story have told whats being happening to her so now we gonna have sex scenses its really good to have hardcore stuff in female protog game and i hope u have more patreons to develop faster and creating more content i mean this game CAPABLE OF HIGH AMOUNT OF MAIN EVENTS AND SIDE EVENTS(its better than fashion buissness honestly but due to lack of patreon we see smaller content)
Tnx for the game and good luck
I belive u gonna have more patreons after update 6 bcuz of sex scenses they gonna pay for this kind content not good story

Mahsa was an incredibly sweet and sexy character. The story was good, the story was very seduced. The image quality was great, but I can't say the same for animations, but I hope it will improve in the future. Updates are already looking great.

v0.5
what can you tall about game if you can't play it?
first time I see so bugged... "game"
it's unplayable unfortunatelly, looks like authot not even launched own game after developing
sorry, it's total mess

The story did not deliver the satisfaction.
Persistent errors (image not found, script exception.......).
The dialogue can be better written.
I really like the renders, but I do not like how it sequenced

Broken mess of a game. The graphics of the CGs aren't great in particular so this kind of porn game needs to rely on story and immersion. With errors every couple frames, compounded by the actual scenes not playing due to said errors, you end up with a game where you'll have to skip much of the content due to errors.

It's full of errors. The dialogue is badly written, sometimes it's better, so it's a bit inconsistent. There's hardly any meaningful decisions, everything just happens without asking you. The story was too boring to follow, also because of the errors and bad dialogue. The renders are pretty decent.

So I downloaded this game after while (Fresh start) There is ERROR in almost every second scene. Most important VIDEOS are not playing at all it says error code aswell.. so befor releasing I would advice dev to try it and check if there are any bugs.

looks good but every second an error appears, image not found, script exception....wtf did the dev at least test the game before uploading this version? as soon as i fix it i play it again and reevaluate