VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - 4 Years in Tehran [v0.6] [Monia Sendicate]

This is by far one of the greatest VN games I have played. This game touches on many great aspects, such as great rendered character models, great story for all the characters, good writing, and well designed game play mechanics across the whole game. I recommend this game to players and I support the developer for this game. I am looking forward to future updates.

I usually don't put my immediate reactions here nor do I jot down negative reviews, but this time I take an exception.

I had the opportunity to travel to Iran and live in Tehran for about a year. Interesting people, some good, some shady and some weird, much like any other place, really.

Why does it matter? I'll tell you in a minute.

I am totally OK with people letting their imagination run wild using exotic/real life settings and locations. That part is fine and usually leads to some saucy games.

But if you kickstart your game by saying "This is all real-life events" while you portray everyone as rapists and sadists while the MC is a pathologically masochist female ... that's no longer a game, that's a cultural hit-piece.

I personally took offense to this honestly, even though I have nothing to do with the country, and I can't remember the last time I got triggered.

And that's besides the poor grammar, crappy storylines, unfathomably dumb main character and nonsensical reactions and phoned in sex scenes.

Conclusion:
If you haven't downloaded this, do the following instead: The next time you go to the bathroom and take a giga-dump, one with an overpowering odor, take a deep nasal breath and enjoy that pungent smell. That would still be more wholesome and enjoyable than playing this.

I'm a sucker for a good female protagonist who has the opportunity to explore her sexual interests and fantasies. The English is poor, so it can make the dialog and story hard to follow, but many of the situations presented are highly erotic. It's not a sophisticated production, this game, but if you keep your expectations modest and enjoy female protagonists, I think you may find yourself enjoying this like I did.

MC is super hot, story can be overwhelming but it’s going in a nice direction in my opinion.

Grammar can be improved but it’s not a deal breaker, content is good enough that it’s worth to stick around.

If you like corruption games where you can keep MC’s virginity but still turn her into a slut this game looks like a very promising addition to that genre.

Keep up the good work dev!

The first thing I want to say is that if you hate bafd grammair and bad dialogue stay away from this because they are a lot of problems with that.

The sex scenes are sometimes animated but it just feels cheap and the sex sound effects don´t sound good either, they also have a lot of frame drops.

The story is not good and it takes too much time away from all the porn stuff which is not good in this case. The characters are all very unhuman, males are mostly just horny because the main character Marsha is supposed to looklike the hoottest person ever which I find weird because she looks so boring. Marsha is also a very dumb and naive person at points I was so frustraded at her because it isn´t realistic, she is also very awful to her "boyfriend" especially in the end. In the beginning it is also said that this is a real story that happend to a friend, but that seems like a lie and I hope it is because if everything did happen makeing a porn game with these characters is just disgusting and shows that the creator didn´t really care about the person this happend too.

Don´t play this.

monia thats a great game! A game with brain and handlings. A little differtent to the most others here.
i like it and will follow the next time. Hope that the updates will be faster in the future. wish the best

Was this written by a revolutionary guard or some sucker to an ayatollah's balls? The situations in this VN would turn any nympho into a frigid woman with the number of humiliations and put downs the FMC has to suffer and yet we are to believe that she's getting wet at the thought of ,let's face it, rape because 'all' the sex in this VN is akin to rape or forced. Even the better made ones are not arousing at all. Deleting.

Storyline : 5/5
Images : 5/5
Gameplay : 4/5
I played the latest version. the pictures and music of the game were wonderful. also, new music is used in this game. But what surprised me the most is the frames of the animations, Some animations have more than 60 frames per second, That is very strange and nice

Pretty amazing game

Story 10/10
Animations 8/10
Renders 8/10
Main Character 10/10

I live in iran and this is true story ofc not happend for all do not listen to those who says its not true story they are either brainwashed or too blind to see the truth
Ive never seen this fine corroption developing on a charecter its really really good but lets cut the islamic stuff they are mostly dead now for high majority of ppl and having sex with old people its not fun
The story have told whats being happening to her so now we gonna have sex scenses its really good to have hardcore stuff in female protog game and i hope u have more patreons to develop faster and creating more content i mean this game CAPABLE OF HIGH AMOUNT OF MAIN EVENTS AND SIDE EVENTS(its better than fashion buissness honestly but due to lack of patreon we see smaller content)
Tnx for the game and good luck
I belive u gonna have more patreons after update 6 bcuz of sex scenses they gonna pay for this kind content not good story

Mahsa was an incredibly sweet and sexy character. The story was good, the story was very seduced. The image quality was great, but I can't say the same for animations, but I hope it will improve in the future. Updates are already looking great.

v0.5
what can you tall about game if you can't play it?
first time I see so bugged... "game"
it's unplayable unfortunatelly, looks like authot not even launched own game after developing
sorry, it's total mess

The story did not deliver the satisfaction.
Persistent errors (image not found, script exception.......).
The dialogue can be better written.
I really like the renders, but I do not like how it sequenced

Broken mess of a game. The graphics of the CGs aren't great in particular so this kind of porn game needs to rely on story and immersion. With errors every couple frames, compounded by the actual scenes not playing due to said errors, you end up with a game where you'll have to skip much of the content due to errors.

It's full of errors. The dialogue is badly written, sometimes it's better, so it's a bit inconsistent. There's hardly any meaningful decisions, everything just happens without asking you. The story was too boring to follow, also because of the errors and bad dialogue. The renders are pretty decent.

So I downloaded this game after while (Fresh start) There is ERROR in almost every second scene. Most important VIDEOS are not playing at all it says error code aswell.. so befor releasing I would advice dev to try it and check if there are any bugs.

looks good but every second an error appears, image not found, script exception....wtf did the dev at least test the game before uploading this version? as soon as i fix it i play it again and reevaluate

This game is fresh of breath air as the middle eastern sure gives the game a unique and different look with a stroyline that is well put together. Though it is going through quite a massive changes, hopefully sthe story would progress nicely and I hope the graphics can become even better.

the story seems interesting to me, the renderings and animations can improve but overall they are good, female MC I liked the style.
I consider that the game has a good start and with time the quality can improve, I recommend it

One star for the excellent quality of character sculpting. But unfortunately, the rest is not so good. It is impossible to avoid scenes of forced sex. There is no real freedom of choice. This is a problem of many Asian games. Impossible situations. It's impossible to try on a dress and not notice that the ass is naked. It's just-impossible. It was after that that I quit the game.

This is the typycal VN. It was a RPGM, but they switched to renpy and I think it's an improvement.

It would be a mediocre VN, if not for the MC, whom I think is breathtaking. I would probably behave as stupidly as the male characters in the game if I met her in person.

The main problem I see with the game is the atrocious English. Otherwise, it's quite decent.

Another problem, that I have is that in this 'rape town' kind of game, you have too little agency. I would prefer more choices and some sort of system of keeping track of the relationship levels.