HTML - A Boring Life? [v0.1] [Lolboy101]

This game highlights the age-old dilemma in adult games. Do you bore players in the beginning by taking the time to give characters substance, with adequate back stories to give you a good idea as to what part they will play in the story? Will players give up on your game because there isn't enough sex to keep them interested? Or do you just jump in and start f*cking away?

This rather formulaic game features the latter approach. Well, calling it a "game" is a stretch, as there is only one choice given so far. More on that later.

So, you meet a girl in a bar. You immediately have sex. All weekend. Then you meet her boss, and eventually (a couple of screens later) get a job offer. And you immediately have sex.

Then you advise your best friend whether or not to change jobs. This simple choice puts you on two completely different paths without having any clue as to what either choice would mean. One path, you're in a threesome and that's it. The other, you have more sex with the first girl, but you come home to find your best friend gender bent into a woman.

Huh?

There needed to be about 10x more story for a first release, and it needed to feel a lot less rushed. The mix of AI cg images (which isn't tagged) and stolen porn isn't well matched. And the fact that it's a fairly generic Sugarcube/Twine game means the dev didn't have to spend a lot of time on coding, just sourcing the mismatched images.

Good luck, dev, but you need to spend a bit more time actually developing before releasing stuff like this.

VERSION 0.1: A good start with a decent amount of content for a first release. Also not too many options to start with which can be a good thing especially depending on how many future branches the intial choices will have. The last thing anyone wants is for a dev to overwhelm themselves with too many choices and abandon the project.

Story: I would give this an 8/10 so far its a decent setting but if you go the chad route its a little crazy how easily the MC fixes the ED problem I guess its explained that its someone who means a lot to him so he can overcome it but its still a little rushed. Also love how it will split into 2 main paths of being transformed or transforming others and being a chad. Its nice to have the choice of both in a TF game. The other compliment is how Fem MC doesn't go straight to being obsessed with dick and is very reluctant to it and has to be eased into by other women.

Characters: For the intro its an 8/10 again. Not too much and not too little so you look forward to where the dev takes these characters. However one main criticism was Otherwise I do like AJ and the other characters.

Art: 7/10 AI art mixed with real porn I think its fine personally the only major objection I have was the difference between the BF Alex's face and his full body art he looks far too different.

Overall about 7.5 I am excited to see where the dev goes next and I appreciate having a TF game that doesn't have insane grind. I also hope the Fem MC can have the choice of only sticking to females or doing a mix rather than going men only later on in the story. This review is based on 0.1 Version and may change based on what the dev decides to do in the future.