This is the first negative review i have ever given.
First, I understand this is the first release. So I added a start for what this might become.
PRO: 1. Unique art. It has the soft filter from 80's and early 90's VHS soft-core porn.
2. Kinks are wildly established in the very beginning! Quite few all crammed into this small chapter.
CON: 1. MC is an (adult?) that has never masturbated? Never felt an ejaculation before? Seems to be VERY immature mentally.
2. Needs Editing badly. Dialogue is wonky/bizarre to begin with.
3. Needs a setup. Story opens with MC having sex with LI, then cuts to new scene where he just arrived at LI's house. How did the MC and the LI meet? Will the Dev use flashbacks?
4. Feels like a one off. Like this all of it.
This project could turn out okay, possibly even great, but there is a lot of work to be done. Hang in there Momoki. I'll wait and see where this goes next.
First, I understand this is the first release. So I added a start for what this might become.
PRO: 1. Unique art. It has the soft filter from 80's and early 90's VHS soft-core porn.
2. Kinks are wildly established in the very beginning! Quite few all crammed into this small chapter.
CON: 1. MC is an (adult?) that has never masturbated? Never felt an ejaculation before? Seems to be VERY immature mentally.
2. Needs Editing badly. Dialogue is wonky/bizarre to begin with.
3. Needs a setup. Story opens with MC having sex with LI, then cuts to new scene where he just arrived at LI's house. How did the MC and the LI meet? Will the Dev use flashbacks?
4. Feels like a one off. Like this all of it.
This project could turn out okay, possibly even great, but there is a lot of work to be done. Hang in there Momoki. I'll wait and see where this goes next.