[Reviewed: Chapter I; updated to Chapter II]
More of an introduction than a "Chapter 1" in my opinion, but there's already an interesting story that we only just get started with. We meet a few characters that appear to be on-going players in the plot, with a like/trust points model for each that's overt -- telling us whenever it changes. We're left with more mysteries as this version ends.
The only lewdness at this point is a shower viewing -- your choice whether you see "full frontal" with animation. The visuals are good, with a regular scattering of other animations. The sound effects present are used appropriately. And background music has been chosen to match the current location.
There are a few spelling errors ("Arche Dioses" instead of "Archdiocese" for example) but happily the author uses subject and object pronouns correctly!
[update for Chapter II]
This episode is a short addition to the story -- some or maybe all of the next day. We're introduced to a new character (briefly) and can improve a couple of character's opinions of the protagonist. We also get some backstory for (what we are hinted as being) the protagonist. And again, we're left hanging at another story reveal at the end of this episode.
This continues to be a solid start on an interesting story. I'm looking forward to the next update. 5 stars. Keep up the good work.
More of an introduction than a "Chapter 1" in my opinion, but there's already an interesting story that we only just get started with. We meet a few characters that appear to be on-going players in the plot, with a like/trust points model for each that's overt -- telling us whenever it changes. We're left with more mysteries as this version ends.
The only lewdness at this point is a shower viewing -- your choice whether you see "full frontal" with animation. The visuals are good, with a regular scattering of other animations. The sound effects present are used appropriately. And background music has been chosen to match the current location.
There are a few spelling errors ("Arche Dioses" instead of "Archdiocese" for example) but happily the author uses subject and object pronouns correctly!
[update for Chapter II]
This episode is a short addition to the story -- some or maybe all of the next day. We're introduced to a new character (briefly) and can improve a couple of character's opinions of the protagonist. We also get some backstory for (what we are hinted as being) the protagonist. And again, we're left hanging at another story reveal at the end of this episode.
This continues to be a solid start on an interesting story. I'm looking forward to the next update. 5 stars. Keep up the good work.