I like the content so far, the story/plot is decent, the writing is quite above average, the renders are quite good.
I have just a couple of issues, though they may seem fairly small;
First, some technical/design points;
I don't like auto-forwarding scenes, it seems like I either have to wait and see if the scene auto-forwards, only to find it doesn't or I am clicking and then I miss some text or something because it starts auto-forwarding and then I have to roll back to see it.
I'd rather have no auto-forwards and just click my own way through.
And with that in mind I don't like forced pauses or transitions, I just want the next scene/text to come up when I click.
Second, some plot/story points;
Copying abilities is tremendously painful but Sue specifically says it'd be even better if she fainted because then she couldn't feel it.
So logically why not sedate each person with anesthetic before then copying the ability? Strong opiate painkillers [morphine? Oxycodone for anyone who can't be penetrated by a needle?]?
Then as for beating Nethaniel, well people are 60% water so that should open up many possibilities if her gets in physical contact. Based on what we're being told about Aurora's ability and how it looks like it actually controls energy then that should be an I-Win ability, as every cell in your body relies on energy to function, not least of which are brain and nerve cells.
So presumably with practice our MC could just instantly paralyze an enemy or even kill them by stopping brain function?
Potentially could even puppet someone by taking control of their nervous system.
Finally, when the fight becomes close contact then couldn't the MC just copy Nethaniel's abilities?
I only say these things as they seem obvious to me immediately but none of the characters have seemed to mention it.
If that fails;
Hellfire R9X
Since it seems fighting in this other world is typically done with melee weapons then lets use a Hellfire R9X, basically a sword on steroids specifically designed for targeting individual people.