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VirsagoX

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I do believe I'm as smart as I think. That's not a particularly hard challenge. You just need some self-awareness.
About openly declaring that the game is well written... You're talking to the wrong guy.

Obviously, I couldn't convince you that it is. There are areas where the game can improve. Your bra issue is okay. I've heard it a couple of times. No biggie. The fantasies are clearly labeled and skippable. Some people have an issue with them but most prefer it over not seeing tits before the story ramps up.

I can't take your criticism of the main character seriously because you didn't understand him. It could be because I didn't convey his motivations well enough. Or it could be because you got frustrated and didn't give my game a chance to work its magic. Idk. Don't care, either. If you bought it on Steam and were disappointed, you might get more sympathy. Also, I should mention that the only person who liked your initial post was me, the creator you were criticizing. And that's because I listen and don't judge people with complaints. I judge them when they double down and start fighting with those who enjoy my game and try to stand up for me.
Your wonderful game is in my top 5 of visual novels keep it up and I for 1 love the fantasy to this story and the harems are where i strive for all sorts of outcomes no matter the choices. Story for me is great and a caring MC who loved his job to strive for the good of others makes this better. Keep going and please don't stop. I literally replay this just for the fun of reading the story its like a good book you just cant put down. Thanks
 

Elhemeer

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Also, I'm just getting started (Thanks to JDOR) and I'm really liking the introduced characters so far ... It appears we're eventually going to get the mustache-twirling villain, but early on the lack of "stupid-but-well-meaning" people has been a nice change-of-pace.
 
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tortorus

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M dev could you add some gameplay in your game...?
because for now it s nearly a kinetic and even if the story is nice i m not here to read ebook with picture... but to play a game.
 

jI11jaCksjAkk

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M dev could you add some gameplay in your game...?
because for now it s nearly a kinetic and even if the story is nice i m not here to read ebook with picture... but to play a game.
I think it's great that they are finally allowing mentally handicapped individuals to register and post at F95! Good for you, Buddy!!
 

HighbornTiger

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Nah, I get his point, but it doesn't mean I'll change my game. Multiple paths would just make my workload too high, and the game wouldn't get finished. I want to tell the story, and it takes long enough for me to do that as it is. No need to make the wait for each update three times as long.
 

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Nah, I get his point, but it doesn't mean I'll change my game. Multiple paths would just make my workload too high, and the game wouldn't get finished. I want to tell the story, and it takes long enough for me to do that as it is. No need to make the wait for each update three times as long.
It's just a troll, hence my response. The same kind of complaint about it not having game mechanics was literally posted just a couple days ago. Even though the description in the OP states clearly this is a "visual novel."
 
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Capt. Obvious!

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Nah, I get his point, but it doesn't mean I'll change my game. Multiple paths would just make my workload too high, and the game wouldn't get finished. I want to tell the story, and it takes long enough for me to do that as it is. No need to make the wait for each update three times as long.
Well if you like after you finished, you can always add paths, but for now, I have to say I'm glad there aren't any, it's just a interesting story to read...
 
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HighbornTiger

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Corruption path DLC, where instead of getting Esther out of custody, you spent that night with Tracy. I thought about it before. Not sure if I'll do it. Probably not
 
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tortorus

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I think it's great that they are finally allowing mentally handicapped individuals to register and post at F95! Good for you, Buddy!!
It's just a troll, hence my response. The same kind of complaint about it not having game mechanics was literally posted just a couple days ago. Even though the description in the OP states clearly this is a "visual novel."
MMMMmmmm.... What could i say to this... insulting people don t make you look good too "buddy". insult are the weapon of the weak minded people as they said... And yes, i don t read all the forum before to give my opinion, not sorry if i think like other people few days ago maybe there is a right point here... A visual novel have gameplay, the choices. if not it is a kinetic novel, and it s not a game, a game without gameplay is not a game, it s just a book. you can read comics/manga but you can t play with them.
And to finish, i really don t care what a troll like you think of me.


Nah, I get his point, but it doesn't mean I'll change my game. Multiple paths would just make my workload too high, and the game wouldn't get finished. I want to tell the story, and it takes long enough for me to do that as it is. No need to make the wait for each update three times as long.
So it s too hard and long for you to make a game and you prefer just write an ebook, ok. You are the dev, you can make it as you please, it s just not for me.
I wish i ve read somewhere before starting it this "game" will be a kinetic, maybe add a tag or some info in the dev note would be nice. It will help some people to no go for a ebook they will not enjoy. So for me it s end here.

Good luck with your story Mr dev.
 
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rambo455

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man it would be a lot easier to get through the story if the opening 5 min did not already leave you with so many questions un answered XD
 
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