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HighbornTiger

Sizable Pianissimo M*C^2
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You're ignoring the fact that the writer is writing everything, not just the parts you understand.
He also wrote the part where the women have lived to the age of 20 and not figured out how to wrap some cloth around their breasts.
Are you sure you're as smart as you think?
Are you sure you want to openly declare that this is well written?

I'm also right about my other point, which is that this character is deliberately being crafted to be pathetic, selfish, and uninteresting. (so far)
Think about it another way, why would the writer and model-poser make fantasy sex scenes, unless his goal were to make us identify somehow with someone who fantasizes rather than taking action? Wouldn't an actual alpha character do the helpful things he's already doing, but plan to actually sleep with them, rather than pathetically fantasizing about it in explicit, graphical detail?
I do believe I'm as smart as I think. That's not a particularly hard challenge. You just need some self-awareness.
About openly declaring that the game is well written... You're talking to the wrong guy.

Obviously, I couldn't convince you that it is. There are areas where the game can improve. Your bra issue is okay. I've heard it a couple of times. No biggie. The fantasies are clearly labeled and skippable. Some people have an issue with them but most prefer it over not seeing tits before the story ramps up.

I can't take your criticism of the main character seriously because you didn't understand him. It could be because I didn't convey his motivations well enough. Or it could be because you got frustrated and didn't give my game a chance to work its magic. Idk. Don't care, either. If you bought it on Steam and were disappointed, you might get more sympathy. Also, I should mention that the only person who liked your initial post was me, the creator you were criticizing. And that's because I listen and don't judge people with complaints. I judge them when they double down and start fighting with those who enjoy my game and try to stand up for me.
 

VirsagoX

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I do believe I'm as smart as I think. That's not a particularly hard challenge. You just need some self-awareness.
About openly declaring that the game is well written... You're talking to the wrong guy.

Obviously, I couldn't convince you that it is. There are areas where the game can improve. Your bra issue is okay. I've heard it a couple of times. No biggie. The fantasies are clearly labeled and skippable. Some people have an issue with them but most prefer it over not seeing tits before the story ramps up.

I can't take your criticism of the main character seriously because you didn't understand him. It could be because I didn't convey his motivations well enough. Or it could be because you got frustrated and didn't give my game a chance to work its magic. Idk. Don't care, either. If you bought it on Steam and were disappointed, you might get more sympathy. Also, I should mention that the only person who liked your initial post was me, the creator you were criticizing. And that's because I listen and don't judge people with complaints. I judge them when they double down and start fighting with those who enjoy my game and try to stand up for me.
Your wonderful game is in my top 5 of visual novels keep it up and I for 1 love the fantasy to this story and the harems are where i strive for all sorts of outcomes no matter the choices. Story for me is great and a caring MC who loved his job to strive for the good of others makes this better. Keep going and please don't stop. I literally replay this just for the fun of reading the story its like a good book you just cant put down. Thanks
 

Elhemeer

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Also, I'm just getting started (Thanks to JDOR) and I'm really liking the introduced characters so far ... It appears we're eventually going to get the mustache-twirling villain, but early on the lack of "stupid-but-well-meaning" people has been a nice change-of-pace.
 
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