VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - A Fresh Start [Halloween Minigame] [King Bob]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    JackMiejov

    Review for A Fresh Start v0.1.2:

    Overall: 3/5 - It's worth a look if your expectations in adult games aren't very high.

    Story: 2/5 - Not much story but what's there is just weird. It's a super fast-paced vanilla incest story. The MC's mom and dad are divorced, dad shows up and needs $500,000 for... something, and mom agrees to help him get it (that's totally not normal and players just have to accept it). However, the whole thing is like some 13-year-old virgin's fantasy: The game starts with mom waking up the MC wearing a sheer teddy. First day at school, the teacher is dressed like a slut going to a nightclub. A girl that MC meets the first day in class flashes her tits then gives him a handjob after class. There's a robbery and a policewoman, who also happens to be a classmate at school, shows up wearing basically a slutty policewoman costume. What the actual fuck?

    Writing: 3/5 - It's kind of average by adult-game standards (which isn't saying much), but the balance of writing to visuals isn't great. Things that are obvious from the visuals should be left unspoken/unwritten.

    Renders: 4/5 - The renders are pretty good. Sometimes a little grainy, but generally good. Yes, you've seen the models before in other games, but they're still good.

    Animations: 2/5 - Mix of jerky 2- and 3-frame type animations and some that are low framerate but not super jerky. The game definitely needs work here.

    Amount of content: 3/5 - Seems about average for 6 months' worth of work.

    Lewd Content: 2/5 - Talk about no build-up. I'd give a way too many spoilers to talk about it, but everything happens way too fast and it really just isn't very erotic.

    Bugs: 5/5 - It's just a kinetic novel with almost no choices, so a lack of bugs should be no surprise. Strangely, some of the early content actually appears to have been designed to be part of a sandbox.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    peperondana

    v0.1.2 (Halloween Minigame)
    Good start, good dialogues, it seems promising, it is understood that the game begins and you don't have to rush to realize it.
    Let's hope the game takes direction in the next updates. Keep it up. The Halloween minigame is very basic but it is understood that it is a date that must be taken advantage of to make a minigame without making so many spoilers.
  3. 1.00 star(s)

    desmosome

    [v0.1.2]

    Yea, it's an early version. Yea, it's probably trying to capitalize on models used in popular games.

    All that aside, the writing is just awful. Give it a shot if you don't believe me. They all talk like robots that are barely capable of speech acting out the part of a character from a D tier MTLed Russian porn game. There is just no substance whatsoever to the writing, whether it be the dialogues, characters, or the overall plot progression.

    And no, the sex scenes are not any good either, so there is no point in playing this one at this time. The scenes are basically 2 pump chump sex where the MC cums immediately if you click a few times, or a series of janky animations with no build up or dialogue at all.