VN - Ren'Py - Completed - A Night with Babysitter [v1.0] [Cremosito]

A Night with Babysitter 1.0

Pros:
+Renders and facial expressions are surprisingly good
+Babysitter looks fantastic and has incredible tits (and some of the best looking nipples I've come across in a VN recently).
+Progression is sexier than just clothes disappearing when it's sexy time.

Neutral:
=Animations were short and mostly fairly simplistic but generally effective. Everyone's got different standards for animation and for me this was middling but not bad. I appreciated the attention to facial movements and some moderate boob jiggle.
=Some lines were left with spanish punctuation and there were some awkward or unnecessary lines.
=It's purposely over the top throughout which didn't really enhance or detract for me but others might not care for the silliness

Cons:
-Not really much of a story here. Very much a simple porn short story, but with a pretty lacking story. Basically the MC and the babysitter hate each other until they have an anime trope moment and then she sees the majesty of his magical cock. Queue porn music.
-Ending is funny but extremely unsatisfying.
-Some of the idle animations (mostly at the beginning) such as when people are talking look strange. I don't mind blinking or even eye movement, but bobbing around and in particular the mouth continually moving I didn't care for.
-MC looks too young. I know he's supposed to be a scrawny runt for his age, but he ends up looking a bit too young.

Overall:
I would say it's worth giving it a try since it's so incredibly short. This was basically a proof of concept short story VN for the author to get some experience and it's neither bad nor great for what it is. I think it generally achieves what it was aiming for. There's definitely potential for this author if they can step up their writing (which is the one area I feel may be the hardest to progress in). It'll be interesting to see how their next project goes.

A Night With Babysitter

Let’s face it, if you have ever had or been a babysitter you realize the potential that situation can bring for some wild VN content. A Night With Babysitter doesn’t really bring any of those exciting qualities, but does give a hint of excitement in the short time it runs for.

STORY
Give yourself a moment to think on what could happen when you’re a teenager and a babysitter comes over to watch over you. The babysitter is female and has a pretty high sex drive. You don’t, you just want to play videogames. Now somewhere along this trail you manage to get caught up in her sexual shenanigans, much to the dismay of your parents.

It’s not a strong story, but it managed to get a few chuckles out of me. The game is quite short, about a 20 minute runtime. That doesn’t allow the game to do a whole lot in terms of story, but because the invested time frame is small the story is passable. A Night With could have benefitted from a bit more humor, but everything is addressed quite seriously up to the point the altercation between the babysitter and the teenager happens.

In short, it’s a porn story and that’s the level you should expect from this game.

PRESENTATION
This game looks great. I’ll be honest and quote other reviews on saying that the mother actually looks more appealing than the babysitter does, but for the most part the girl looks great and the main character is just your typical teenager nerd. It all happens around the house, so while it’s a small AVN the details are looking great.

GAMEPLAY
It’s a VN with no real choice substance - you’re just playing to experience the one story that’s made.

OVERALL
A Night With Babysitter gave me an enjoyable experience over dinner - and that’s arguably what you should expect from it. It’s not super memorable, but it doesn’t ask for much and graphics wise looks pretty good. There’s no real story here nor are there porn scenes that stand out - so the real hope is some kind of follow-up that takes the MC’s mother seriously. She might be the best thing to come out of this game.

6/10

I would give it 5 stars if the ending had a nut shot all over the mother as MC pulled out of Elizabeth (female lead, Babysitter) that probably would have been an amazing prologue. The good News is that the MILF mother will be returning (according to a post by the author on itch comments) after his next project. I enjoyed this short game and I am looking forward to your next projects to come, best of luck.

I found this quite a bit boring really, MC is an 18 year old dude that apprently needs a babysitter that on its own feels a bit idiotic, but the hole getting to fuck the babysitter is also stupid, theres no build up no nothing, you use a watergun on her boyfriend who thinks it will make him go blind, then she sees MCs dick and goes crazy for him?

Theres no fast skip either which i would gladly have used just to see the game since the story just dosent matter in any way, then again its almost pointless since game is so short and barely has a sex scene since the parrents walk in on MC while hes fucking her and game ends....

The one well half animated scene is pretty decent but theres just not enough to make it worth while to download the game.

Dont waste your time on this one its just not worth it.

Would be a perfect prequel for a parody game with same characters. Great anims, great visuals.

Normally I would've given 4 but this is a pretty decent debut game.

Room for improvements

• Some scenes has jittering textures
• about a 10-min game which is okey but can be better (like the MC's stamina)
• anticlimactic (quite literally) end

Things that shows potential

• Funny dialog
• Funny characters
• unique animation style
• good character model

v1.0

short

• good graphic quality, especially lighting
• attractive models
  • babysitter has a big rack on a petite body, nipples looked okay too
  • unfortunately no content with mom
• animation included but a lot of it was too robotic
• plot flowed
• a lot of bg music
  • music could have been better seamlessly transitioned
• sfx included but volumes not balanced e.g. female moan was too loud compared to prior sfx
• sex scene was a let down due to each act being so short - if you're going to make a short VN at least let the sex scene feel substantial
  • writing further proceeded to montage the sex which could have been fine if any one part was substantial
  • animation for sex was the most mechanical

Writing was good and it flowed for a porn VN; graphics were pleasant and sound and animation being included was appreciated although it needed more polishing. Sex needed to last longer.
A sequel with the mom please!

I like short games (less than 2 hours) but this project is not well made.
The story part is too weak, mc is 18 and the babysitter is 20 by look. There's only one choice, one led to fail.

I will give 2 stars instead 1 because I think we need more devs who creates short fictions for us.

The "game" is extreme short. While it's well done, the models are pretty good and the babysitter is hot.
I find it a shame that the Dev made the primary sex scene with MC too short.
I've mixed feeling and would rather give 3 stars, but I'll let it slide and hope that the Author can do more in the future.

Name and banner reminded me of the movie The Babysitter (plot is also kinda similar but not that similar both babysitters are crazy and blonde wish the babysitter here is also as crazy the one in the movie though)

This game can be put into the genre of short and sweet it's mainly kinetic with two options that lead two different ending. One is main with my house my rules and other one is loser ending with less content. Got good renders and there is sound effects. Good sex scenes. Another good point is it's completed already even though I wish it's more longer.

Looking forward to Dev's new project

This is one short story, with just one real choice that leads to two outcomes, with different sex scenes each. The story is nothing to write home about or especially interesting, but it delivers. Sounds are there to add a bit of atmosphere. Character models are decent, and I like the effort to introduce animations in non-sex things like talking, even though animations are a bit cluncky. So, all in all, a quick trip, decent content and a good base on which to develop other games and stories afterwards.

It's short but pretty good, giving it a 4 star rating to encurage the Dev to continue creating games. Read the Dev notes before downloading, or commenting!

For a first time game it has good stuff going for it, sound for one thing which many games lack and am not just talking about music, it has sexual moanings!

It's a visual novel with only 1 choice to make, which decide the outcome of the night, both leading to a sexy scene. So it's simple, uncomplicated and very strait forward.

Renders are nicely done, sounds are decent, text is ok too.. didn't notice any really bad "engrish" mistakes. It got humor and somewhat realism.
Animations are ok, even non sexual ones in some places, like eyes and lips movement, you don't see that in most games!

Could have wished for an option to set age, but games have to abide the law and I get that
Could also wish it was longer, but it is what it is

I could clearly imagine that a rich overprotective mother would hire a babysitter to watch over her 18 year old son whom just had a fever, would surely wish mine had back in the day.. though we wern't wealthy, sadly enough, hehe