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It's a good plot line and works with the current story... and you can take this line in any direction. Personally, I'd rather see Anna stumble into a first time with Chris then consciencely decide to go for it. With either of our approaches the plot would need some catalyst that puts the encounter on the table. However what is left in the air is what Mr_Palmer has envisioned with Chris/Anna.
a-After the first time would there be many more Chris/Anna encounters?
b-Or after Chris gets Anna's cookie the story moves to the next batter up?
c-If Chris is the first, how that affects the other routes if at all?
d-What comes out of a Chris/Anna encounter?
*I'll stop at just 4 lines of thinking
With {a} how do you continue the excitement of an ongoing Chris/Anna relationship?
With {b} it means nothing that Chris/Anna crossed a line and is a weak storyline.
With {c} should Chris really be the first? Common sense says yes, but considering the old men in the waiting, a possible BBC route and a helpful neighbor along with anyone else I am forgetting <plus any unknown and upcoming other contender for Anna's cookie> would it make more sense to have Chris be in the middle of the pack? Personally, I think Marvin going first but not getting the whole enchilada but putting Anna in the mood seems logical.
With {d} Should Anna and Chris passionately kiss at first and spark an emotional connection. Would there be an emotional connection in the first place? Does Anna have regrets for getting it from Chris... is Anna horrified that another man's seed is in her and would that if the developer is using a 30-day clock like a lot of games put her own fertility in play... or what other possible consequences come into play?
Each of just these 4 lines of thought branch into many more sub-branches on their own. Goes back to the begining, just how complex is this game going to be as the story goes forward.
