CREATE and FUCK your own AI GIRLFRIEND TRY FOR FREE
x

HTML - A Phone Affair [v0.0.1] [Allure Arts Studios]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    Aryven

    This is only a 0.1 review so my rating is based on the experience, not the amount of content. That said, content-wise this almost feels more like a long demo than a 0.1. There is 0 fap content so far, so if that's what you're after, check back later. If I hadn't gotten distracted, 2 playthroughs and writing this review would have taken less than an hour.

    The interface is promising. All of the icons on the home screen actually do something, and you can go back to them any time you want. Popup notifications take you to the next relevant chat window (but that doesn't always match the notification. For example, you click out too soon and someone sends a "TTYL" message, you get that popup but it still takes you to the next window. You can also scroll back through the full convo (maybe unsustainable later, but it's more realistic than empty chats every time) and consecutive messages come in without clicking for every freaking line.

    The interface sizing is weird. I tried multiple browsers and the width is locked, but the height is always full. Great when you can have more of the convo on screen, but weird when images go full screen and are distorted because there aren't defined proportions. All of the interface icons scale appropriately, but the images don't.

    On the subject of images, would be great to be able to click and view them fullscreen within messages and not have to back out to the gallery every time. But they are high quality images. Not the best I've ever seen, but FAR from the worst.

    Story-wise, it's a good setting that provides for a lot of flexibility in the future. You are a programmer, your gf and 2 best (male) friends are in another city pursuing careers in film. There's a lot shoved in, likely trying to setup the heart of the game, but it is a lot of Tell vs Show in terms of backstory and requires some suspension of disbelief to accept the premise - but it's a porn game, not a documentary.

    Writing is decent, but it could use another pass with an editor's pen. Most of it isn't a bit deal, but there were 2 things that jumped out at me as potentially important within the theme/plot.

    You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
    You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

    Overall, I'm excited to see where this game goes. It shows promise and the dev is definitely starting off with good intentions. Not a lot to experience yet, but I'll keep an eye on this one and revisit my review when things change.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    Enlight432

    Strengths of the Game:

    1. Writing: I enjoyed reading the dialogues; they aren’t filled with unnecessary lines. Each line feels essential or enjoyable to read.
    2. Story: It’s relationship-driven, which is enough for me to consider the story aspect a positive. Although there might be more engaging, captivating storylines in the future, which could enhance the game’s value.
    3. Relationships: This is the best part of the game. Both the MC and FMC have solid personalities, and neither exhibits inconsiderate behaviors (in romance and NTS routes). Their relationship is beautiful; so far, I haven’t noticed any issues in their connection, though it's a bit early to judge fully.
    Also, the two friends of the MC and FMC are genuine friends. It’s rare for me to like potential bulls, but I do in this case. Having real friends in NTR and NTS games is valuable.
    Overall, both the characters and relationships are well done. I found no faults in this area and would commend the developer for it
    4. Choices: This is another enjoyable aspect. Choices feel meaningful and aren't overly simplistic or cliché. In fact, it seems like in the NTS route, we have two or more different sub-branches
    5. FMC’s Appearance: Not only is the FMC’s design unique, but she’s also beautiful and undoubtedly hot

    Weaknesses:
    1. Renders: While this isn't a flaw per se, higher-quality renders are essential for an excellent experience. When compared to games with high-quality renders, the difference is quite noticeable. I hope the next update pays special attention to this, as it currently falls short compared to other aspects
    2. Bugs: Given that this is the first update, bugs are natural and not a significant issue

    -------------------------

    Overall, I believe that if the quality of the renders and the aesthetics of the mobile interface improve, this game could be classified among the top games.

    Good luck!
    Likes: pochops
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    SupremeAncestor

    Review for 0.0.1. Still quite early, but I really enjoyed the start to the game. There is a variety of choices and you can see the paths splitting already. I am probably going down the NTRS path, but I'll be sure to check how the other paths progress in the future too. I also enjoy the writing style of this author and am a fan of phone games like this in general. The actress profession for Bella (gf) is also a really nice way to set up future NTR/NTRS without creating some forceful situation like blackmailing in which the girlfriend cheats.
    The other friend Chuck is also there to send updates on Bella and Roy which I think is also a good addition because you are getting the perspective from a 3rd person and it adds a bit of mystery to the NTR, and who doesn't love some mystery?
    Overall, great game and i'm excited for future updates with Bella and Roy.
    Likes: pochops