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VN - HTML - A Phone Affair [v0.0.3.0] [Allure Arts Studios]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    bbcfan

    Insane potential, deserves a lot more attention and support. The game caters to every single niche of ntr enjoyers. There are both Netorase and Netorare routes- and both of them have subroutes too which is really neat. I have this thing where I want my girl to become more sexually liberal but I don't want her banging my best friends. This game seems to understand that and has options for the girl to do naughty stuffs with strangers/new people rather than only using the male MC's best friend(s) to drive the corruption aspect forward. The renders are not many in number but their quality makes up for it. The model for Bella is insanely pretty and it's just a treat to gaze upon her innocent, cute face.

    My only reason for giving 4 stars instead of 5 is that some of the dialogue feels way too lovey-dovey. Like, the male and female MCs don't always have to address each other with things like 'boo' or 'my angel', you know? This was a bit cringe to read through. Also, the spamming of emojis during texting also feels unnatural. Normal people, specially these days, definitely don't use that much emoji in texting. If the devs could reduce the amount of 'boo's, 'my angel's and emojis; I'd be more than happy to give it 5 stars.

    Another gripe with the game is that the female MC should already have sent a few nudes to the male MC. Why are their texts always devoid of any freaky stuff?? Long distance relationships like this involve a lot more nudes, sexting and video calls. This should also be fixed.

    But overall, really excited to see where this project heads. You can tell the devs care a lot for the game. Godspeed.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    Small Head

    great teasing so far. excited to see where this game goes.



    Already having different routes is very nice, honestly i'm already dying for more

    Love the innocence of the characters, my favourite trope when it comes to ntr
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    Karcosa

    I enjoyed this game game or at least this early stage that we have atm. this "phone" games need good writing, a decent set up and good art, this game has all of that most of the time. But its a start point for the dev to keep improving for sure. The ui, how smoth it plays, the hint system that is always nice if u want to be sure on which path u are, those are points in favor too. Out of the latest "phone" games is one of the most promising imo.
  4. 2.00 star(s)

    doku99

    Drama simulator is what this is.

    The game pacing is not good, the way the text messages send is very slow, and the talks also move very slowly in general. Its fine to build a slow and long story, but there isnt anything but just normal, everyday drama between four people for 45 minutes, and then the game ends in this version. Nothing really interesting happens, even a single time

    The way you control the MC is also limited, you can sometimes choose 1-3 options, but they are all the same boring personality, and the choices feel very very similar to eachother. You dont get much choice and the choices feel like they dont change a single thing in the game. Also just the way the MC texts is stupid, always using too many emojis for everything

    The game art feels well made, but the characters arent very attractive... Your girlfriend is pretty, but her body is weird, everything is bony and vascular. The antagonist also looks weird as hell, like you blended together Gigachad and a teen boy together... Doesn't really look human

    Overall, its good that the creator wanted to go with something slower and with more meaning with the story, but still fails to make anything interesting ever happen, there is also nothing hot that ever happens. This is a porn game, right? Well like I said, it doesnt feel like one, it feels like a boring drama simulator with nothing sexual in it, and the pacing doesnt make it feel worth to wait. Its not very enjoyable
    Likes: Ataly
  5. 3.00 star(s)

    Ataly

    As for 0.0.1.1 it's quite good. Plot is a little sily, but I've seen much much worse (it's h game, I know - but it's good when plot is believable). Renders are goodish, but GF "style" is not my cup of tea. Pace is a little bit too quick but I understand dev wanted to test the ground before commiting more to this game. I like the overall idea and interface. Right now 3/5 stars from me, but it's promising so i will be back for next release and might edit this review :)
  6. 4.00 star(s)

    Aryven

    This is only a 0.1 review so my rating is based on the experience, not the amount of content. That said, content-wise this almost feels more like a long demo than a 0.1. There is 0 fap content so far, so if that's what you're after, check back later. If I hadn't gotten distracted, 2 playthroughs and writing this review would have taken less than an hour.

    The interface is promising. All of the icons on the home screen actually do something, and you can go back to them any time you want. Popup notifications take you to the next relevant chat window (but that doesn't always match the notification. For example, you click out too soon and someone sends a "TTYL" message, you get that popup but it still takes you to the next window. You can also scroll back through the full convo (maybe unsustainable later, but it's more realistic than empty chats every time) and consecutive messages come in without clicking for every freaking line.

    The interface sizing is weird. I tried multiple browsers and the width is locked, but the height is always full. Great when you can have more of the convo on screen, but weird when images go full screen and are distorted because there aren't defined proportions. All of the interface icons scale appropriately, but the images don't.

    On the subject of images, would be great to be able to click and view them fullscreen within messages and not have to back out to the gallery every time. But they are high quality images. Not the best I've ever seen, but FAR from the worst.

    Story-wise, it's a good setting that provides for a lot of flexibility in the future. You are a programmer, your gf and 2 best (male) friends are in another city pursuing careers in film. There's a lot shoved in, likely trying to setup the heart of the game, but it is a lot of Tell vs Show in terms of backstory and requires some suspension of disbelief to accept the premise - but it's a porn game, not a documentary.

    Writing is decent, but it could use another pass with an editor's pen. Most of it isn't a bit deal, but there were 2 things that jumped out at me as potentially important within the theme/plot.

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    Overall, I'm excited to see where this game goes. It shows promise and the dev is definitely starting off with good intentions. Not a lot to experience yet, but I'll keep an eye on this one and revisit my review when things change.
  7. 5.00 star(s)

    SupremeAncestor

    Review for 0.0.1. Still quite early, but I really enjoyed the start to the game. There is a variety of choices and you can see the paths splitting already. I am probably going down the NTRS path, but I'll be sure to check how the other paths progress in the future too. I also enjoy the writing style of this author and am a fan of phone games like this in general. The actress profession for Bella (gf) is also a really nice way to set up future NTR/NTRS without creating some forceful situation like blackmailing in which the girlfriend cheats.
    The other friend Chuck is also there to send updates on Bella and Roy which I think is also a good addition because you are getting the perspective from a 3rd person and it adds a bit of mystery to the NTR, and who doesn't love some mystery?
    Overall, great game and i'm excited for future updates with Bella and Roy.