VN Ren'Py A Slut Phone [v0.23] [Aason]

[quiboune]

The UI did improve in this update, so success?
Clicking through the messages is still a pain in the ass and clicking through every few words in the diary is just as bad. The second is easily solved by getting rid of a few middle images, have every full sentence or paragraph take a single click and you're good to go. I'm not sure of a just as easy solution for the first.
The tag being there for an instantly aborted pregnancy is BAD. Unless you're planning to have later pregnancies in the game the tag shouldn't even be there, but if that's your plan you should just leave the first pregnancy without being aborted and roll with it.
The last issue: the dad's blackmail. It doesn't work. Blackmail is kind of a cheap tool in porn but it can be well done if it's something powerful and if you use it smartly, but it's not the case here. You should make the Dad's blackmail an optional path, and maybe tone down on the intro to it (like not sending evidence of blackmail followed by "I've always wanted to rape you").
Again, this game has a lot of potential and I hope to see it improve.

 

[Candy1970]

The diary entries should be an optional not a forced thing.... the click to type on them is a bit annoying ...

 

[Justthetip69]

good premise, could be interesting. looking forward to content

 

[Mommysbuttslut]

I like the portrait ratio mimicking a phone but you should look into using a custom format for your save page. This looks kinda ridiculous on that tall skinny screen

For the most part I like the UI changes.
Is there actually a difference with the call 999 path? Exact same events played out after she didn't actually report anything.
Blackmail porn is almost never believable imo so I wouldn't sweat that too much but it'd play a lot smoother if it were more gradual. Dad definitely goes from 1-100 way to fast.
Still, I like the concept and I hope you stick with it.

 

[Loqic]

The concept is fun, but the whole caveman approach of "now dad rape daughter too" isn't really working... at all.

 

[Inkheepurr]

Can someone explain this game, why is my phone a slut?

 

[Aason]

The diary entries should be an optional not a forced thing.... the click to type on them is a bit annoying ...

Except for the first and last one, the others are optional, there is the "Stop Writing" choice.

I like the portrait ratio mimicking a phone but you should look into using a custom format for your save page. This looks kinda ridiculous on that tall skinny screen View attachment 1648561

For the most part I like the UI changes.
Is there actually a difference with the call 999 path? Exact same events played out after she didn't actually report anything.
Blackmail porn is almost never believable imo so I wouldn't sweat that too much but it'd play a lot smoother if it were more gradual. Dad definitely goes from 1-100 way to fast.
Still, I like the concept and I hope you stick with it.

Yeah, I'll definitely fix the save page.
For now, she just panics hang up, by fear of what her mom will do.



I should be clear about the direction I wanna take with this game. I'm not trying to build a realistic story, with realistic relationships. I really don't want to build a boring setup you already saw a trillion times in other porn games, and I definitely don't want you to read a trazillion messages before you see a titty.
I want to make a short, fun, fast paced game.

 

[Deleted member 247635]

Love the game and cannot wait for the Pregnancy content to be added hopefully instead of her wanting to get an abortion how about we have the option for a pregnancy route?

 

[nemolesilver]

Very promising concept, good writing style. I can't wait for more updates.

 

[White Lamp]

I like the premise and the writing is great. The concept.... is different....but not in a good way at least for now.

I'm not sure how you can make an entire game (that doesn't get repetitive) through just the FMC phone but good luck!

 

[theickobicko]

Very nice, but waaay too short. I meant it's like 2 minutes if you do everything and read everything
But nice concept. I'll keep a look for more

 

[Real Diable]

Way too short, It will be way more fun to have more choice in interaction, like actually really choose between 3 words for the diary, have to choice to click to open X app and not be forced to open X app first etc. I will follow this project and hope for the best. Good luck

 

[bigballs429243]

Great concept awful execution. .

 

[navzonta]

liked the ideia are there any games similar to this one? i mena in the gameplay aspect of being on a phone

 

[hrpheonix]

Can you use this as an actual phone in the future it would improve the rp feel to the game instead of rushing the brother and dad story and opting to have those storys later on

 

[kanszato]

More more i want more more story

 

[Dzentelmen__]

I'm still waiting for the next part :C

 

[Rutonat]

There hasn't even been a single new post on the Patreon since 0.2 release.
One post on the 4th of Feb for the initial release, another one a week later for 0.2, and nothing since.
I'm usually trying to be positive and give the benefit of the doubt, but this time it doesn't look good...

 

[Aza0000]

Beautiful game but to slowly progressing i mean i was first time playing like month ago and it still have content for 5min :/

 

[Aason]

Beautiful game but to slowly progressing i mean i was first time playing like month ago and it still have content for 5min :/

Yeah sorry, I have a lot of work irl. I'll quote myself with what I said on the Discord:
So, next update will be a small update (sorry), I don't want to keep you waiting too long.
What I would like to do :
-small evolution in story (1 sex event) [mostly done]
-change the save screen menu (it's way too small rn)
-reduce the files size.