VN Ren'Py Abandoned A Slut Phone [v0.23] [Aason]

[Mommysbuttslut]

I like the portrait ratio mimicking a phone but you should look into using a custom format for your save page. This looks kinda ridiculous on that tall skinny screen

For the most part I like the UI changes.
Is there actually a difference with the call 999 path? Exact same events played out after she didn't actually report anything.
Blackmail porn is almost never believable imo so I wouldn't sweat that too much but it'd play a lot smoother if it were more gradual. Dad definitely goes from 1-100 way to fast.
Still, I like the concept and I hope you stick with it.

 

[Loqic]

The concept is fun, but the whole caveman approach of "now dad rape daughter too" isn't really working... at all.

 

[Inkheepurr]

Can someone explain this game, why is my phone a slut?

 

[Aason]

The diary entries should be an optional not a forced thing.... the click to type on them is a bit annoying ...

Except for the first and last one, the others are optional, there is the "Stop Writing" choice.

I like the portrait ratio mimicking a phone but you should look into using a custom format for your save page. This looks kinda ridiculous on that tall skinny screen View attachment 1648561

For the most part I like the UI changes.
Is there actually a difference with the call 999 path? Exact same events played out after she didn't actually report anything.
Blackmail porn is almost never believable imo so I wouldn't sweat that too much but it'd play a lot smoother if it were more gradual. Dad definitely goes from 1-100 way to fast.
Still, I like the concept and I hope you stick with it.

Yeah, I'll definitely fix the save page.
For now, she just panics hang up, by fear of what her mom will do.



I should be clear about the direction I wanna take with this game. I'm not trying to build a realistic story, with realistic relationships. I really don't want to build a boring setup you already saw a trillion times in other porn games, and I definitely don't want you to read a trazillion messages before you see a titty.
I want to make a short, fun, fast paced game.

 

[Deleted member 247635]

Love the game and cannot wait for the Pregnancy content to be added hopefully instead of her wanting to get an abortion how about we have the option for a pregnancy route?

 

[nemolesilver]

Very promising concept, good writing style. I can't wait for more updates.

 

[White Lamp]

I like the premise and the writing is great. The concept.... is different....but not in a good way at least for now.

I'm not sure how you can make an entire game (that doesn't get repetitive) through just the FMC phone but good luck!

 

[theickobicko]

Very nice, but waaay too short. I meant it's like 2 minutes if you do everything and read everything
But nice concept. I'll keep a look for more

 

[Real Diable]

Way too short, It will be way more fun to have more choice in interaction, like actually really choose between 3 words for the diary, have to choice to click to open X app and not be forced to open X app first etc. I will follow this project and hope for the best. Good luck

 

[bigballs429243]

Great concept awful execution. .

 

[navzonta]

liked the ideia are there any games similar to this one? i mena in the gameplay aspect of being on a phone

 

[hrpheonix]

Can you use this as an actual phone in the future it would improve the rp feel to the game instead of rushing the brother and dad story and opting to have those storys later on

 

[kanszato]

More more i want more more story

 

[Dzentelmen__]

I'm still waiting for the next part :C

 

[Rutonat]

There hasn't even been a single new post on the Patreon since 0.2 release.
One post on the 4th of Feb for the initial release, another one a week later for 0.2, and nothing since.
I'm usually trying to be positive and give the benefit of the doubt, but this time it doesn't look good...

 

[Aza0000]

Beautiful game but to slowly progressing i mean i was first time playing like month ago and it still have content for 5min :/

 

[Aason]

Beautiful game but to slowly progressing i mean i was first time playing like month ago and it still have content for 5min :/

Yeah sorry, I have a lot of work irl. I'll quote myself with what I said on the Discord:
So, next update will be a small update (sorry), I don't want to keep you waiting too long.
What I would like to do :
-small evolution in story (1 sex event) [mostly done]
-change the save screen menu (it's way too small rn)
-reduce the files size.

 

[jacophamster]

Yeah sorry, I have a lot of work irl. I'll quote myself with what I said on the Discord:
So, next update will be a small update (sorry), I don't want to keep you waiting too long.
What I would like to do :
-small evolution in story (1 sex event) [mostly done]
-change the save screen menu (it's way too small rn)
-reduce the files size.

go ma man go, this looks very promising and creative.show us lots of slutty things. too bad im a poor bastard

 

[LisaTheFoxx]

Looks interesting. Hope we can see more in the future and it won't get abandoned like many other games. Also I'm wondering how future scenes will be done. Like anything actually happening between characters outside of the phone and stuff. It is a unique way to tell a story, but I think a really difficult one. Either way, good luck!

 

[Aason]

Looks interesting. Hope we can see more in the future and it won't get abandoned like many other games. Also I'm wondering how future scenes will be done. Like anything actually happening between characters outside of the phone and stuff. It is a unique way to tell a story, but I think a really difficult one. Either way, good luck!

I have some ideas for the realization, don't worry! You'll see how sex outside the phone is told.