VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - A Split Existence [v0.3] [A Dre@mer]

Good Start

Interesting topic, new and refreshing, hope to see more as it can get very funny if applied right. stunning characters and layouts and lots of possibilities. Hope more to come!
A def try to see

Good luck Crazy Gamer really hope to see more on this one

Great game, everything is go the quality and the body type of the characters..Why did you abandon this game . Waiting for the update for a long time Carry on with what you are doing and make more games like this and don't forget to update this current game ..Will be waiting...

Version: 0.3

Needs more updates to really see what we're working with here but so far:

• great render quality
• fake animation (crossfaded loops)
• nonsensical story, doesn't take itself seriously / comedic (not necessarily funny though)
• sound effects substantially utilised
• perverted MC and very horny non-consensual women
• women have thick, shapely bubble butts
• content: not much and there is currently one sex scene

If you don't mind the exaggerated plot and illogical characters then the rest of the issues are technical:

• obligatory English revision required
• character name errors - default names ("Melisa", "John", "Samantha") present in text despite name prompt
• some hard to read text because of light colour text
• inner thoughts and verbal dialogue need to be better distinguished from each other

Well... at least the renders are nice.

The game as a concept has been done before. An experiment has gone wrong, dude produces stupid amounts of pheromones, every woman in sniffing distance wants to sleep with the MC. Yawn. The writing does so little to make up for it. English clearly isn't the devs first language and it doesn't seem like they know anyone who does speak it natively because wow grammatical errors. I hope you like context clues because you will need them.

The characters are annoying. The renders are good, but there isn't a whole lot I like about them as people. They are over the top in all of their given traits. It's another game that uses massive boobs and butts to make up for the total lack of character.

It's pretty short so far, but it was still a bit of a chore to get through for me. It is through-and-through a porn game, so don't expect much else.

I usually don't review games but when I do, they are (in my personal approach) a solid 10/10. The game is quite simple to navigate with a male protagonist corrupting the other characters in the meanwhile domination, it cannot get better than this, hopefully, developer will continue his masterpiece and show us how much of amazing storyline is waiting for us.