Let me start by saying that the writing, especially for a first release, is... exceptionally excellent! It's not the best dialogue I ever read but it's realistic. It's not the greatest descriptive writing either but, that job should be accomplished by the art in a VN and it most certainly is the case here. The still renders, transitions and short animations all enhance the story telling. What puts this story over the top is the character development. So far the characters are genuine and charismatic. Too many adult VN's try to put the story first but, in reality, are lead by the porn; that's definitely not the case here.
I've read some comments where folks didn't like the time skips. I think they are extremely appropriate. We've gotten used to stories where a decade's worth of events happen over the course of a few days. Life just isn't like that. This first chapter is essentially a prologue in which we get to know a traumatized war fighter as he returns home and the people who are becoming a part of his life. I feel confident that, if the story gets faithfully told, we will see more passage of time and only experience the highlights. Why? Because much of life is mundane and dealing with combat related PTSD doesn't happen in days or weeks but, rather, months or years. I know. I'm a former Marine and a veteran of war.
The models are absolutely gorgeous and unique. I'm quite certain there will be some amazing sexy times with many very loveable women. If you're looking for a one woman path... I'm happy to say I think you will have a hard time choosing and, if you lust for more, you'll be like a kid in a candy store.
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NME Artworks. Good luck and God Speed. Semper Fi