VN Ren'Py A Wife's Life [v0.2.5] [Kerosine_NTR]

[Griev]

I really enjoyed the start of this game, but I think the decision to make the MC just be an object to be acted upon was a bad choice. HE doesn't do anything. Things happen around him, and to him as he allows these things no other human would allow. He gets harassed random numbers, his wife's friend, some rando chick, the guy that is seducing his wife and he just takes it all without fighting back or talking to her about it. I get the point of it is that he's slowly being broken down and corrupted at the same time that his wife is, but the dialogue shows that he knows its happening and he doesn't WANT it to happen, but he then talks himself out of taking any action. THAT is what throws me off. His mental commentary where he acknowledges that he needs to leave his wife because she's a cheating whore, stating that there's no coming back from this shows the self awareness of a normal human. Then the next sentence he's excusing it all because "...but I love her". Cucks enjoy watching their wives with others. This guy has shown no interest in it at all. In fact, now when Samuil hits him up he's given up on his relationship but refuses to leave. "what now?" "You already have my wife...".
He's not making any moves. He's not taking any action. He just sits there as shit happens so idk how as a reader, I'm supposed to empathize with the MC in order to understand the NTR here. This is just cheating, not NTR. They are different.

 

[SCORPION.SKY]

Compressed version please

 

[makoitiesto]

for me i have this bug,right after the new update begins

 

[MIkedante]

Fine, OK... one less game in my PC.

 

[carrickfelix]

for me i have this bug,right after the new update begins
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it's not a bug, it's supposed to be that the mc isn't listening to her so he doesn't know what she's saying

 

[FaiRTaiL]

another reverse racism game..

 

[Griev]

Yay another black cuck dev who loves to watch black cock porn just because he has a small dick

Bro you clicked the game after seeing the Banner gif. You clicked to get MORE of what you saw. So, Get over yourself.
Name checks out though btw!

 

[Zer0zero]

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Hello everyone,

The new update is out, and some of you have already checked it out. I suppose some of you might not like it due to the main plot advancing too quickly, BUT… there is a reason for that. You’ll find out why this is happening when you play the next update. We’re already working on it.

So, why did the MC’s wife cheat on him by giving Samuil a blowjob? Why is she acting strange and submissive at work? Why is she doing what the migrants want her to do? How did it all start? The next update will answer these questions.

The MC will gain access to the chat history and find out why his wife’s behavior changed so much. He’ll find a way to save her from being harassed by the migrants. But how long until it happens again? Can the MC’s wife go back to her former self, or have the recent events affected her mind? Will her corruption continue?

We’ll find out very soon, friends.

p.s. Actually, we planned to release all this content in the latest update, but we were a bit short on time and had to split this part of the plot into two updates. That’s why the events of the current update might seem rushed and illogical. Perhaps we should’ve postponed the release and finished working on the content, but what’s done is done.

YET -- YET - He will still have no agency. Make no decisions. Act on nothing. Confront her with nothing. Not beat his bosses ass. Not go to the police. Not do anything an actual sane person would actually do. Thats why this story sucks.

 

[proudmoore91]

I play the update and... well... from one of my favourites games, now is just a poor one. Very rushed. From being tense and wanting to see what would happen, if there was going to be a handjob or a photo, we moved on to direct blowjobs, swallow, penetration... Suddenly now it turns out that she has also fucked the boss... the magic of intrigue, curiosity, anticipation, mystery has been completely broken. Honestly, totally and completely disappointed. And I say it with love because in previous posts I said it, it was one or rather, it was my favorite game of this style. A real shame that everything was rushed this way instead of getting the most out of it and making good scenes with everything that was available. It really pissed me off that one version ago we were wondering whether or not she had been able to give Samuil a handjob, but suddenly, she has fucked the boss, she sucks everyone's cock, she swallows the cum, sell the mother of the MC, super clear photos without any kind of mystery or doubt about what could be happening, which is precisely the charm of NTR games. I will never play this game or download it again, it's not funny anymore, to watch porn I just go to pornhub.

 

[BigPapiAZx3]

It looks like your putting a lot of effort into this game and thats great I wish you success in your project. But Im gonna have to stop following this project since im looking more for a netorase vibe rather than a netorare one. Plus some of the aspects of the story didn't sit right with me but remember always satisfy your taste rather than anyone else's.

 

[zedout]

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Hello everyone,

The new update is out, and some of you have already checked it out. I suppose some of you might not like it due to the main plot advancing too quickly, BUT… there is a reason for that. You’ll find out why this is happening when you play the next update. We’re already working on it.

So, why did the MC’s wife cheat on him by giving Samuil a blowjob? Why is she acting strange and submissive at work? Why is she doing what the migrants want her to do? How did it all start? The next update will answer these questions.

The MC will gain access to the chat history and find out why his wife’s behavior changed so much. He’ll find a way to save her from being harassed by the migrants. But how long until it happens again? Can the MC’s wife go back to her former self, or have the recent events affected her mind? Will her corruption continue?

We’ll find out very soon, friends.

p.s. Actually, we planned to release all this content in the latest update, but we were a bit short on time and had to split this part of the plot into two updates. That’s why the events of the current update might seem rushed and illogical. Perhaps we should’ve postponed the release and finished working on the content, but what’s done is done.

This sounds like "Oh, we fcked up and now we're afraid a lot of you will stop sending us money on Patreon sooooo GUYS THIS IS PART OF SOMETHING BIG COMING OUT NEXT UPDATE, KEEP YOUR MEMBERSHIP ACTIVE AND YOU'LL SEE!!"

 

[Kerosine_NTR]

This sounds like "Oh, we fcked up and now we're afraid a lot of you will stop sending us money on Patreon sooooo GUYS THIS IS PART OF SOMETHING BIG COMING OUT NEXT UPDATE, KEEP YOUR MEMBERSHIP ACTIVE AND YOU'LL SEE!!"

Everyone hears what they want
Also, the next update will come out in about two weeks, so new patrons won't need to pay us twice

 

[LexPro]

damn, when we get to part when wife brings bbc home and fuck them in kitchen while cockyhusb has his breakfast? That game just going to nowhere. We already know she is sucking and fucking other and there no reason to continue to watch that. Cliffhanger part passed.

 

[xtracheese69]

guys, what is the actress name of Laura? ---->
Vanna Bardot

You are the MVP brother

 

[xslutz]

The Dev is clearly telling the story they want to tell. It's a Visual Novel where the wife full on cheats, so a lot of people (myself included) aren't going to care for that. I don't care for the lack of agency given to the player nor do I like the absolute god fucking awful communication between two people who are supposedly husband and wife.

The MCs personality makes very little sense for him to even convert to being a willing cuckold either. He is adamantly against his wife cheating in his inner monologue. If he was even remotely interested then his Inner Monologue should've reflected that from the beginning. Now, it's a character assassination if he becomes a willing cuck.

Anyways, good luck with your story Dev. I just think you could do better.

 

[BigGamera]

I think it's a very difficult balance to strike. Because like another poster said earlier, once a line is crossed it's hard to continue building the tension, which is where the eroticism comes from in these stories. I find the idea of slowly getting hints of cheating to be extremely erotic. That's why these games are so interesting. The blackmail angle is not my favorite but it's not a complete mood killer because it can lead to a more interesting true seduction of the wife.

I am a patreon supporter because I love the angle of voyeurism by spying on the phone. I would say this game suffers from the same thing similar games suffer from, too many sub-plots. The game would be better if you focused solely on the wife and the refugee camp or whatever it is. When you add in the boss, the friend, these other random women with the MC, etc. It just gets all muddled. It becomes a rapid porn delivery game rather than an intriguing story. And the people sending brainwashing material is also not believable or interesting. That's just my two cents. I am just ctrl skipping the parts about jenavieve and katherine because that's not what I'm here for. I'm here for the main story, which so far has been pretty great.

 

[Griev]

I think it's a very difficult balance to strike. Because like another poster said earlier, once a line is crossed it's hard to continue building the tension, which is where the eroticism comes from in these stories. I find the idea of slowly getting hints of cheating to be extremely erotic. That's why these games are so interesting. The blackmail angle is not my favorite but it's not a complete mood killer because it can lead to a more interesting true seduction of the wife.

I am a patreon supporter because I love the angle of voyeurism by spying on the phone. I would say this game suffers from the same thing similar games suffer from, too many sub-plots. The game would be better if you focused solely on the wife and the refugee camp or whatever it is. When you add in the boss, the friend, these other random women with the MC, etc. It just gets all muddled. It becomes a rapid porn delivery game rather than an intriguing story. And the people sending brainwashing material is also not believable or interesting. That's just my two cents. I am just ctrl skipping the parts about jenavieve and katherine because that's not what I'm here for. I'm here for the main story, which so far has been pretty great.

I agree 100% with all of this. I'd also like to add. One detriment of doing a real porn game is you don't have these ideal character models that are exclusive to your particular game. When you do something this bad to your story, people will just give up, search the model's name and just go watch her porn instead. Then they just get over the game.

 

[Ericsdadismyhero]

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Hello everyone,

The new update is out, and some of you have already checked it out. I suppose some of you might not like it due to the main plot advancing too quickly, BUT… there is a reason for that. You’ll find out why this is happening when you play the next update. We’re already working on it.

So, why did the MC’s wife cheat on him by giving Samuil a blowjob? Why is she acting strange and submissive at work? Why is she doing what the migrants want her to do? How did it all start? The next update will answer these questions.

The MC will gain access to the chat history and find out why his wife’s behavior changed so much. He’ll find a way to save her from being harassed by the migrants. But how long until it happens again? Can the MC’s wife go back to her former self, or have the recent events affected her mind? Will her corruption continue?

We’ll find out very soon, friends.

p.s. Actually, we planned to release all this content in the latest update, but we were a bit short on time and had to split this part of the plot into two updates. That’s why the events of the current update might seem rushed and illogical. Perhaps we should’ve postponed the release and finished working on the content, but what’s done is done.

Love to see the content you slashed and where the story goes.
Don't mind the haters

 

[Anton_User]

The Content and the idea is lovely... But i'm not a fan of small updates... Better less updates and then bigger one.

 

[Nej_Aldrig]

If you are just going to tell a story, not even give cyoa level agency you have to write bearable characters. The husband just going, "eh well she's cheating on me but... I'm le tired, let's sleep".

Is he lobotomised? Are we to assume he's retarded?