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I don’t understand something about the MC, if he has tons of proof that his wife is cheating on him, like he’s got her text, photos and even has videos of her, he should be confronting his wife and not just stand there and let it all happen.
Yep. You are very correct. And if the MC cheats she has evidence of that as well. Not to mention she
can see the texts on her phone every time someone else uses it to mess with the MC and that gets
ignored too. She could just as easily talk to him too. And since I play this from the wife's perspective
it infuriates me to no end.
 
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For the most part the choices actually do. The problem is, a lot of the time, they are disconnected
from each other. Which is just lazy scripting for literally zero reason. When I talked about the possibility
of me modding this to a coherent "Alpha MC" NTR I said that knowing most of my work would be properly
activating all the choices that exist.

If you fuck Katherine, Chris finds out and comes after you through your wife. Your wife finds out and starts cheating on you. The more you cheat, the more she hates you and reciprocates. If you don't fuck Katherine, Chris fucks Henry's wife because Henry can't keep it in his pants. If you help Henry fuck Jevaveve he doesn't try and talk you in to becoming a cuck, but it will continue to cause problems with your wife. If you didn't get caught fucking Katherine, Rick can't convince your wife to cheat. The camp still happens no matter what as a part of the blackmail, sexual harassment plot. If you are not on the wife cheating/wife NTR path your wife gets madder at Autumn for tempting her. If you get your wife black out drunk during your house party it is left unclear whether she was in the room or not. No matter what you chose your wife does not get a cheated point. If you fucked Katherine, she probably does but its broken.

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Ded Baraded

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For the most part the choices actually do. The problem is, a lot of the time, they are disconnected
from each other. Which is just lazy scripting for literally zero reason. When I talked about the possibility
of me modding this to a coherent "Alpha MC" NTR I said that knowing most of my work would be properly
activating all the choices that exist.

If you fuck Katherine, Chris finds out and comes after you through your wife. Your wife finds out and starts cheating on you. The more you cheat, the more she hates you and reciprocates. If you don't fuck Katherine, Chris fucks Henry's wife because Henry can't keep it in his pants. If you help Henry fuck Jevaveve he doesn't try and talk you in to becoming a cuck, but it will continue to cause problems with your wife. If you didn't get caught fucking Katherine, Rick can't convince your wife to cheat. The camp still happens no matter what as a part of the blackmail, sexual harassment plot. If you are not on the wife cheating/wife NTR path your wife gets madder at Autumn for tempting her. If you get your wife black out drunk during your house party it is left unclear whether she was in the room or not. No matter what you chose your wife does not get a cheated point. If you fucked Katherine, she probably does but its broken.

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but no matter what you do, your wife is cheating with the boss anyway, and in the camp. regardless of whether you fucked Catherine or not.
 

hcbull87

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I really love this game... But this last update... hmmmm
Like so many unexplained stuff, like so many stuff missing....
for example: What happened in taxy... not even a hint, what happened with Cris in room? What happened in campus ( I was hoping to see her at least holding two cocks at the same time ) ... The end was sloppy.
I don't focus much on MC's mother, only on wife... so I hope next update will be better!
 

Ragajaga

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I really love this game... But this last update... hmmmm
Like so many unexplained stuff, like so many stuff missing....
for example: What happened in taxy... not even a hint, what happened with Cris in room? What happened in campus ( I was hoping to see her at least holding two cocks at the same time ) ... The end was sloppy.
I don't focus much on MC's mother, only on wife... so I hope next update will be better!
you will surely be disappointed. this game has rapidly gone downhill with each update in terms of story quality to the point so many things make zero sense
 
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Well then the platinum members need to let dev know that his story is becoming chaotic and is rushing it to much if he's got to draw out update releases to make story better it be for the better
 

vermazusa

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I'm confused and update or two what happened at the nightclub. Did the MC wife have sex that night with the guy she was dancing with? He looked similar to Samuel. It ended in a drunk haze.

As of the last update I am unsure about the wife's involvement with the friend who stayed with them in the apartment? Did he do her? The MC takes shit from Chris, although he knows his boss fucked his wife. WTF. Kick Chris's ass and quit the job!

I don't understand the wife's best friend's communications with him. To what purpose, she tells the wife to cheat, and then warns the MC about the same possibility. Break up the marriage? Why would she want the MC? The MC doesn't have the balls to go after the hot chick working with him even though he must know that his wife is 'at least' giving hand jobs and blowjobs to Samuel. If she fucked Chris so easily.......she would be easy for Samuel but the MC still believes his wife is not cheating. Anyone could identify their wife's body if photos were sent to them. He sees no similarity even in the clothes she is wearing. Incredulous.

The mom's involvement makes no sense in the story except that there is an incest angle with MC or wife or a threesome that is being set up for future updates. My only conclusion about the purpose of the story is that the MC is being psyop'd with images and messages to accept being a beta cuckold and still remain married to his mind-controlled but now promiscuous wife who fucks his boss, best friend & strangers at the bar(?), BBCs in the camp. I don't see any other outcome.............cuckoldom and humiliation and ultimately her getting pregnant by Samuel or any of her lovers...........mainly because he has no balls to be anything else but the cuckold he has become as the story has unfolds - he doesn't even fuck his wife anymore or anyone else! The last update shows him sexually excited seeing her photos and video with cum on her face and jerking off a BBC. We all know where this is headed.

One last point about business operations. An owner does not hire a employee/manager to be personally responsible for his capital investment in a business. If the MC quits after 2 weeks, the owner is responsible for the business. If the business fails, it is all on the owner, not the employee. The only capital the MC has invested in the business is his wife's pussy. This is Business 101. No one can be this dumb in the real world.
 
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Ded Baraded huddlestonkeith33 hcbull87 Ragajaga

The game is literally broken with several event points left incomplete or unfinished.
By the looks of it deliberately. It's all there and in large part some is well written while
other parts clearly aren't. Which is causing a lot of ya'lls confusion. Things will happen that
you expect to get some form of clarity and suddenly it jumps a day or to something else
that looks like said event was completely forgotten. Like the house party where you can go
get wine or let your wife get black out drunk cos she doesn't drink hard alcohol.
The whole time you're wife is in the bathroom. Get her drunk and you have no idea where she is.
You are left to believe she's in the bedroom. Because her phone is in there? It's your house.
Where else is it gonna be? Why are you even calling her. You are both at the house.
Why are you not going in and tossing the people out or at least if you think she's in there drunk,
being a man and protecting your wife. If she is having sex she might think it's with you.
No one is clearly ever going to NOT go in to their own room to sort shit out. Or at least make sure
your wife is okay. Then it jumps to the next day. Where did you sleep? Where was your wife?
Did you sleep together cos you certainly woke up together. You have no idea what she was
wearing when Autumn taunts you? You can't recognize her at all? REALLY? It's clearly not her.
This is due to bad scripting and broken events. Easy to fix.

Same with the Chris stuff. If he isn't blackmailing your wife, or having an affair with Henry's wife
there is a throw away part that suggests he's fucking his secretary. But it's broken or ignored by
the creator. Like reading the documents and handling business. The MC says he's going to do it
and it never happens. He doesn't forget. It just never happens and then suddenly Chris hates you
for not doing your job. A job you are clearly doing. Unless your so busy fucking your secretary that
you are pissing him off AGAIN, that he wife blackmail path begins again. Disconnected, unfinished.

Does she cheat later at the BBQ? No she doesn't. But suddenly the game mechanics are removed
for linear story telling for no reason at all. So no she doesn't cheat (no cheated points, no Wife NTR
pathing. It's not happening.) BUT the story progression says otherwise, again making you all angry
and confused. Leading to exactly what Ragajaga said. Instead of a good progression, it's a trash fire
of copy paste repeat. Which sucks. This could be so good and compelling!
The MC does not need to be this inexcusably retarded. It's not even him being stupid. How does he
tie his shoes? The house could be on fire and his LOVING wife (yes she actually loves this idiot)
could be begging for them to escape but he won't stop reading her obviously faked chats.

There also needs to be a reason for all the antagonism. But there isn't. What did the MC do to
cause this? I have some ideas. But you need the pathing done. Other he's a selfish prick (cheating path),
or he's a good husband (not cheating path), who pisses people off (NTR path) or fights for his wife (no NTR,
only sexual harassment path) which either leads to consensual cuckold path, non-consensual cuckolding path,
or Dominant husband/submissive wife path (the wife's attempts to fix the intimacy plot that gets forgotten.
Remember her browser history on how to fix their problems? She was looking into options.)

Any way.. how is everyone liking the new Update?
 
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Ded Baraded huddlestonkeith33 hcbull87 Ragajaga

The game is literally broken with several event points left incomplete or unfinished.
By the looks of it deliberately. It's all there and in large part some is well written while
other parts clearly aren't. Which is causing a lot of ya'lls confusion. Things will happen that
you expect to get some form of clarity and suddenly it jumps a day or to something else
that looks like said event was completely forgotten. Like the house party where you can go
get wine or let your wife get black out drunk cos she doesn't drink hard alcohol.
The whole time you're wife is in the bathroom. Get her drunk and you have no idea where she is.
You are left to believe she's in the bedroom. Because her phone is in there? It's your house.
Where else is it gonna be? Why are you even calling her. You are both at the house.
Why are you not going in and tossing the people out or at least if you think she's in there drunk,
being a man and protecting your wife. If she is having sex she might think it's with you.
No one is clearly ever going to NOT go in to their own room to sort shit out. Or at least make sure
your wife is okay. Then it jumps to the next day. Where did you sleep? Where was your wife?
Did you sleep together cos you certainly woke up together. You have no idea what she was
wearing when Autumn taunts you? You can't recognize her at all? REALLY? It's clearly not her.
This is due to bad scripting and broken events. Easy to fix.

Same with the Chris stuff. If he isn't blackmailing your wife, or having an affair with Henry's wife
there is a throw away part that suggests he's fucking his secretary. But it's broken or ignored by
the creator. Like reading the documents and handling business. The MC says he's going to do it
and it never happens. He doesn't forget. It just never happens and then suddenly Chris hates you
for not doing your job. A job you are clearly doing. Unless your so busy fucking your secretary that
you are pissing him off AGAIN, that he wife blackmail path begins again. Disconnected, unfinished.

Does she cheat later at the BBQ? No she doesn't. But suddenly the game mechanics are removed
for linear story telling for no reason at all. So no she doesn't cheat (no cheated points, no Wife NTR
pathing. It's not happening.) BUT the story progression says otherwise, again making you all angry
and confused. Leading to exactly what Ragajaga said. Instead of a good progression, it's a trash fire
of copy paste repeat. Which sucks. This could be so good and compelling!
The MC does not need to be this inexcusably retarded. It's not even him being stupid. How does he
tie his shoes? The house could be on fire and his LOVING wife (yes she actually loves this idiot)
could be begging for them to escape but he won't stop reading her obviously faked chats.

There also needs to be a reason for all the antagonism. But there isn't. What did the MC do to
cause this? I have some ideas. But you need the pathing done. Other he's a selfish prick (cheating path),
or he's a good husband (not cheating path), who pisses people off (NTR path) or fights for his wife (no NTR,
only sexual harassment path) which either leads to consensual cuckold path, non-consensual cuckolding path,
or Dominant husband/submissive wife path (the wife's attempts to fix the intimacy plot that gets forgotten.
Remember her browser history on how to fix their problems? She was looking into options.)

Any way.. how is everyone liking the new Update?
You ain't wrong if only the dev took there time writing everything instead of rushing updates we'd have answer's for all these questions and having different pathways wouldn't diminish the game/story because it's original but options would fix lot of these problems the dev needs to go back basically the whole game to fix these problems
 

Comisar

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These updates man... I don't wanna sound ungrateful but holy shit.
Feels like the story moves one inch per update..

MC: I suspect my wife is cheating (she's obviously cheating)

MC wife: I don't want to cheat (she cheats multiple times)

MC's nemesis: You wife cheats, admit that you like it and you're a cuck

MC responds: No I'm not and I don't like it and she's also not cheating

Update 2:

MC: I suspect my wife is cheating (she's obviously cheating)

MC wife: I don't want to cheat (she cheats multiple times)

MC's nemesis: You wife cheats, admit that you like it and you're a cuck

MC responds: No I'm not and I don't like it and she's also not cheating

Update 3:

MC: I suspect my wife is cheating (she's obviously cheating)

MC wife: I don't want to cheat (she cheats multiple times)

MC's nemesis: You wife cheats, admit that you like it and you're a cuck

MC responds: No I'm not and I don't like it and she's also not cheating



In the words of the great Yogi bear " It's deja vu all over again"....
 
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If Izmeraldas was writing this story I'm sure it would be top of line she would've let us know if it was wife fucking Trevor in mc bedroom first party made mc an alpha or sigma male you would've know if she fucked dude at club when you couldn't find her etc etc
 
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If Izmeraldas was writing this story I'm sure it would be top of line she would've let us know if it was wife fucking Trevor in mc bedroom first party made mc an alpha or sigma male you would've know if she fucked dude at club when you couldn't find her etc etc
I wouldn't have had the MC forget he was using a spying app and CALLING Samuil. How fucking stupid?
And the wife wasn't like "Where the fuck did you even get his number?" Instead she's like, you've been
going through my phone? I shall delete my chats.... WHAT? Call your damn service and ask for the call
and text records. They spy on you more than that app! Hacker dude probably works IT for AT&T.
How else could he have all the backdoor access for that app of his? Inside hacking is how the majority of
shit like cloud leaks happen. I must really be a masochist cos I want to fix this story. It's getting obsessive.
I've had to go back to my own yard and clean my brain with female MC NTR stories.
I love guys, I really do, but these stories. Man. You don't need modern feminazis dragging you through
the mud when you have fellow guys make these stories SMH

As for the Patreon stuff, sure. In the end the whales win. But we can still gather here and chat.
Make friends through shared suffering hahahaha
And I can actually get a male perspective on all this. Cos I just want to beat the MC with a baseball bat.
 
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I wouldn't have had the MC forget he was using a spying app and CALLING Samuil. How fucking stupid?
And the wife wasn't like "Where the fuck did you even get his number?" Instead she's like, you've been
going through my phone? I shall delete my chats.... WHAT? Call your damn service and ask for the call
and text records. They spy on you more than that app! Hacker dude probably works IT for AT&T.
How else could he have all the backdoor access for that app of his? Inside hacking is how the majority of
shit like cloud leaks happen. I must really be a masochist cos I want to fix this story. It's getting obsessive.
I've had to go back to my own yard and clean my brain with female MC NTR stories.
I love guys, I really do, but these stories. Man. You don't need modern feminazis dragging you through
the mud when you have fellow guys make these stories SMH

As for the Patreon stuff, sure. In the end the whales win. But we can still gather here and chat.
Make friends through shared suffering hahahaha
And I can actually get a male perspective on all this. Cos I just want to beat the MC with a baseball bat.
You and me both girl I feel like the MC's an idiot and the story is starting to have big ass holes and missing plots like you said and I feel like the dev is an idiot and needs to listen to people like you and me who can help fix this story game
 

HypnoKitten

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As for the Patreon stuff, sure. In the end the whales win. But we can still gather here and chat.
Make friends through shared suffering hahahaha
And I can actually get a male perspective on all this. Cos I just want to beat the MC with a baseball bat.
Yup, at this point I'm not following the game anymore, but totally still following the chat for the sake of shared misery ><

And male perspective, yea, I think we're mostly all along the same wavelength. The line is more between those willing to suffer through because the porn vids are crisp and hot, and those who are not. But the MC is toxic and idiotic for all the reasons you mentioned and more.

Humiliation / kink / suffering are one thing. What's going on with the MC is a whole 'nother thing. Its like 'martial arts movies where dude fights alien ninja's' is cool, but 'show where drunk dude repeatedly hits his whimpering dog' is not. Both include violence and might be unrealistic, but totally hitting different buttons. 'Space-magic device that makes everyone around you horny' is unrealistic but fun, 'You are totally straight and vanilla but dude rapes up your wife so you go heeeeey oolala!' is uncanny-valley weird.

MC's messed up, toxic, and in dire need of therapy. Wife is not the brightest, but most of the time comes off as 'look, I'm trying here, and if I don't push harder its because I'm kinda just at the fuck-it point'. Mom and bestie just wants to get laid, more power to them.
 

Spuul

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So far the only impression the game gives me is that in any reality the MC would be driven so
insane he'd off his wife and then himself. Leaving me to believe that the creator of this is either so
massively socially inept that they have no concept of how people, business, school, marriage, family,
friends actually work. And reading these responses to an game with actual potential outside of it's
writing and serioulsy questionable scripting (you're all being duped. There are mechanics not being used
that would change all of this to something way better. Unless you are fucking around, your wife is actually
NOT cheating on you - oh is that a spoiler?... who the fuck cares? hahaha).

So if you guys want me to fix this mess, just let me know and I'll actually consider it.
And if the creator wants an actually good writer and doesn't mind it being an actual socially functional girl...
message me :p
That's hilarious because I was thinking the same thing while playing, "this guy is going to kill everybody in this game and then jump off the roof of the repair shop"!

I've stuck with the game this long because I thought it had potential, and I was hopeful that the writing would tighten up, but if anything, it's only gotten more ridiculous. I'm certain your perception of the dev is also correct; it's the only thing that makes sense. I hate ragging on a game like this, but I also know it could be improved thus making it even more frustrating to play. Your offer is a generous one that I suspect won't be acted upon by the dev, especially because of that suspected social awkwardness. But you've got my vote for taking a crack at fixing it--that would be pretty awesome!
 

Dogorti

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This would be a decent NTR game if the mc didn't have so much contact with Samuil (or whatever his name is) and everything was kinda NTR mystery type where the mc realizes little by little and the wife's personality changes little by little until she is more corrupted and that the only way to know what the wife is doing is if we activate her perspective or something. But instead we have something that looks like a delusional cuckold game with an idiot MC who does nothing despite the evidence he has. The funny thing is that the dev's name is Kerosine_NTR and this of NTR has little for me.

OR You can leave the story almost the same, leaving Samuil's contact with the MC but having him pretend to be a friend of the MC and continue sending him things about his wife but where his face cannot be seen and he says that she is some random girl, I don't know, anything is better than how the game is currently.
 
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