Ren'Py - A Wife's Phone [v0.5.0] [Bloody Ink]

A bit of a new take on the wife corruption path. I would prefer that there was a little more freedom with the path, but this is so much better than games that require a grind to progress story. Decent imagery. I hope there will be more options to stear the wife into different directions in future updates.

A great start I like the phone simulation idea. It's the first time I've played a game like this, and, well, it's really good. The MC is likeable and seems like a good person who loves his wife. There already are some choices to make, so the player won't be railroaded into stuff they don't like.
I haven't seen any bugs, and the game is quite good from a technical standpoint. I mean, it's a pretty realistic simulation of a phone with messages and apps.
So, best of luck to the dev! Looking forward to the next update

This is a really interesting concept approach, with a lot of hot images and videos. If you're not into interracial you may want to avoid this title. There are a lot of good quality clips and images from Blacked.

Be aware that the notes at the end as well as the overview mention feminization and hypnosis. I'm unsure who can be feminized, but it may be the MC or some of the other men. The hypno spam is definitely the kind of content that accompanies feminization and sissification of the MC. Crossing my fingers.

It is emphasized that all such content is avoidable/optional, including optional NTR of your wife.

I'll try all of the routes regardless.
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Edit: Sadly, the avoidable content is not so avoidable. Many of the story's cheating aspects play out even if you do nothing. Avoiding certain characters, such as Kirely, avoids their content, but not the major family members. Currently, there are a lot of flaws in the programming so that you end up with your wife both cheating and acting like she's not cheating.

The game's greatest flaw is the central role of Jenna. She is the architect of your character's downfall, appears to be responsible for many of the behind the scenes machinations with family, and yet, despite the MCs mild annoyance with her, she has access to you and your entire family w/your consent. That is not something any rational person would do after being so thoroughly stabbed in the back by her (As in you lose your company, your job, your house, and you owe Salim $1 billion--queue Dr Evil). It seriously interferes w/the main narrative thrust of the game. I'm honestly just waiting for Jenna to be revealed as the main villain of the story--which the MC will ultimately be fine w/and glad she allowed you to become the cuck you've secretly always wanted to be.

So, I've revised the rating down from a 5 to a 3-star rating. The Dev has chosen a lot of good images, and quality porn, and it will please NTR lovers. But, it is undermined by a messy, inconsistent, and incoherent story, and is annoyingly repetitive too often. There are a lot of bugs that thwart any attempt to save you of your family from their inevitable downfall. So, despite the claims, current bugs in the game mean little of the NTR is actually avoidable. You will inevitably have scenes that make no sense. If NTR is your fetish, you'll avoid many of these flaws, and probably be fine with the flaws and bugs you do run across (so 4 stars for NTR lovers--still a lot of bugs and repetition).

Great Start ! Can't wait for next update . Good mix of resistance from the husband about wife's promiscuity. Couple of bugs and text mistakes but i am sure dev will fix those. The characters are well defined and good direction.

Nice relaease the Game seens very very interesting, i hope the Game go far in this route. I wait next update of this. The way you can "hack" phone, the social media app, nice image pick, well i don't have to much of this, the Game is on early developement but promises. Good job developer i hope the Next chapter keep the same quality

where the fuck do i begin -_-

ok, so, if this is a legit game,it has a semi intresting premis, inspired from the girlfreind abroad or whatever it was. simple ground work content wise, a decent base. the future of it could be intresting.

as for the way the game is made/played, very bad, at least for the renpy engine, twine suger cuber or other engines could be better.

having text speed funtion be default no matter that the setting is isnt a good idea.
disabaling the skip dialog also isnt a good idea,
I am not a programmer but something tells me the reason those to exist, is because the game would be unplayable with the following and the last 2,
when you click 1 too many times after a convo is ended you are expected to click the home butoon on the bottem of the screen, click too many times and it will boot you to the menu.
same with the phones "home screen" after the players dialog is finished at times you are supose to select the messaging app or the instagram app, but click the home screen and you get booted to the menu.

you have shown the next mechanics of game play, they are intresting for sure, but the last problem, of being booted to the menu from 1 accedental click, must be resolved, other wise people will drop it thinking the game is borked.

i am intrested to see what is planned and how it comes out, best of luck.

A really great first instalment. Very few bugs or errors when played on android (wife's name is sometimes the MC's name is the only one that stands out) Definitely one to watch for those who...enjoy this type of content...

Writing and pacing is great and I can see this becoming quite addictive if played long-term. I wouldn't mind seeing the son being sissified at some point too...