Came back to try this game again...
....I just couldn't...do *click click click*...I...*click click click* I..can't...ughh..(x.x)
It tries to be the jack of all trades and master of none, the story becomes so incoherent and lacking in focus because of this, and any sense of real character progression is hard to find in this wishy-washy verbose text dialogue.
Also no one seems to have pointed out that people don't talk this way in text messages, they use short lazy language full of abbrevations, missing the ball pretty hard in terms of immersion with this type of writing. Find another medium to tell the story and not just in text messages between the characters. The rare instagram update is not enough for this, but it is better than another long-winded text message about how christina is out whoring again...for the 12th time, such intersting story development, much progress. Wonder what the next message from him is gonna be about..
I guess when you have 10 different storylines running all with different kinks it's hard to give the appropriate focus and attention that is needed to make the story engaging and meaningful even in dialogue. And don't even get me started on the wife and all the stagnant incoherent interactions between her and the MC. I guess I can't blame her, all these text messages is making her head spin.
#Jenna's QoS blog, or maybe the wife stumbled upon an interesting forum and we get to snoop on her activity. The internet thing on the phone has been sitting there since the beginning and all we can do with it is sell the wife's picture into the ether with no feedback or interaction from anyone. But at least we made 700$ to pay back some loan which is utterly irrelevant and forgotten and was a stupid thing to put into the story in the first place. Just throwing out some ideas, cause the creativity is sorely lacking from such an amazing start to this...
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