Ren'Py - Abandoned - Academy Love [v0.4a] [Darqueen]

Bad English, bad gameplay, bad story telling. It is a no-choice VN that acts like a sandbox. Really really bad. Locations that have no function should not be available. Why make it a sandbox style game if most gameplay is skipping time to get a a specific time and location.

Switches to spanish at night in the dorm, errors popping up in several places, the dialog sounds like it went through google translate, the over the top and completely ridiculous dialog choices for the MC make him sound like a predator.

I'm not even sure this is a 0.1 update. It needs a proofreader and a lot of clean-up to even make this release workable.

First review, awesome.

There isnt much game here yet, 10 minutes at most, so i’ll make this short and to the point.

Pros:

• Renders are very good
• Character designs are mostly top-notch. But, I'm not a fan of the character yue, she looks like some cherub doll come to life

Cons:

• The dialogue is bad, not horrible but definitely feels like a quickly made first draft
• The script is the same we’ve seen a hundred times or more.
• At the end of this version the script and choices switch to spanish

Tldr

Short, good renders, promising