Honestly I like the dialogue and the inner thoughts, but really the pacing of the text needs to be quicker, or at least have a setting that you can tweak the speed at which it displays. Also, the option to skip with either Q,W or Ctrl would be great, as well as a chart log just in case we skip over something important.
Otherwise I'm really enjoying the character's progression and the story so far. I just hope there'll be an option to either give up herself to the chief or not. I'd hate for it to be just something that happens without our control.