HTML - Onhold - After Colony 250 [v0.15] [After Colony Games]

Not a bad quest, but a bad porn-game. There are some problems with the convenience and scaling of interfaces. Navigation by keywords in the text is not the most convenient solution. Also the delay before the appearance of the text and time-limited events while you are reading the text, suddenly you lost. You should also add an autosave option when switching between locations. But the biggest problem - there is no any journal or quest log. As well as passwords that need to be entered manually, which of the words are passwords, while it is not always clear and it is not clear then where they should be looked for. It was much better to make a trigger after receiving the password that would allow you to enter the found code automatically.

A good start and enough completed endings to warrant a playthrough.

Has the potential to be a 5/5 all time great HTML based story with a lot more investment from the dev.

For now I'll rate this 4/5 (rating the game as is) with the point lost from the lack of content.

A decent and interesing quest with almost no porn content. I like the fantasy aspect and the story is a unique one. However, we are here in search of a porn game. With hope that this story will be updated. Will definately keep an eye on this one.

Version: v0.10b

When it comes to HTML games, this games devs takes a bit more adventurous road and decided to try to make a murder mystery/puzzle game. And when it comes those two aspect, i can tell that the devs have put in some effort and work to make it happen, yet its difficult for me to say if they made the puzzles interesting. As of now, the game is still too early in its development for me to properly judge.
Yet the puzzle may be simple, i still found them enjoyable for what they are, the murder mystery is there, with some characters here and there to mess you up or help you solve the mystery.

Overall i think this game could be a fun and somewhat unique game given time and effort, good luck devs.

A golden-era RAGS game without the crappy interface of RAGS. Great writing, great worldbuilding, great pictures, and great potential. I was pleasantly surprised at how much content was included in the first release, and with it appearing that each update will introduce a chapter, each update should contain a solid amount of content.

Also, I would like to congratulate the dev on choosing to focus on a female protagonist. Too many games lock you in as a male protagonist, so having a little variety where the female isn't always a submissive object to be "conquered" by the male MC is a good plus in my book.

This game can definitely become one of the greats in the RAGS/HTML puzzle genre like Tales of a Drunken Cowboy, Lost in Laminate, or Legacy of the Ancients.

The Expanse references are also refreshing!

Have to say, I was surprised on just how intrigued I was with this game. Here are my thoughts.

First, just found the premise that this takes place in the far future where humanity is spread across the solar system and you can start out almost anywhere, well, that opens a huge universe to explore. Entire planets to explore, a detailed political and news system, mysterious murder/disappearance of your farther, friends to call, places to explore with puzzles that are just challenging enough to solve. On top of all that, meeting the A.I. Alice that uses every chance she can to corrupt the protagonist into being naughty. This game is going to be huge. That is a good thing, this game is ambitious. Just worried that this is too much to do. I came to this game to have Sci-Fi style porn. Drugs and experiments that you can willingly participate or forced to do if made a mistake. Was really looking forward to just taking a break from the main story of the death of your farther and just chilling out in the asteroid belt, offering your (sexy) services (especially if you are a scientist who can turn people into bimbos) while keeping an eye out for agents after you. This can even lead to interesting story potential as you try to understand who created ALICE and why she is trying to make you (possibly people) slutty.

Did enjoy the moments in the story. Meeting Alice felt earned as you had to solve a puzzle to get to her and the game punishes you for fully trusting her. Really liked that.

Second, liked the train station where you had to get creative to scrounge up enough money to book a ticket off Earth. Now, I do not understand how someone who lives in a mansion is poor, but the event was cool. How to find items in the warehouse while freeing a slave (beautifully foreshadowed that sexual slavery exists in this system).

Third, liked the visuals. You really do feel like you are in a Sci-Fi world. Filled with mechanical drones, spaceships, mechanically/electronically locked doors, etc.

The porn itself was kind of tame. Though that might be because I have not seen all the crazy endings the protagonist can end up at. Though as I alluded to at the beginning, the best thing this game needs is just more. More story for the different paths of leaving or staying on Earth.

I would be willing to help you develop the game by offering feedback on the story, characters, and smut if you need a beta reader, game tester, ideas, etc.