RPGM Completed Agony of the Healthy Sleep [Final Day] [DushniyGames]

[Dushniy]

I'm playing it right now. I think I'm gonna wait till the next update to replay it from the start. Also, not finished yet but this one already is your best day yet mate. Way better than 4 and even better than 3, which used to be my favourite. Plane 4 was... Wow.

EDIT. Ok, I'm done. The sex scenes were the best yet, I solved the puzzle first try (it wasn't obvious, you did a good job there) but I think I screwed up with Clare. I went for the "stupid" answer first and I guess that precluded any chance I had to get the "right" answer to her question. Or was it? All of them were wrong or...? Anyway, great work Andrey. Great, great job.

Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it
Yeah, I enjoyed this day also, a bit proud of it! The answers to Clare are all wrong, she runs away regardless.

The 4th plane was way worse in the first cut of the day. It was so bad, it made my head spin (all the textures were moving) so I toned it down a bit, lol.

Haven't played day five yet, but days 1-4 I finished without being distracted, because for me story is more important than porn.
I think scene with Perse was very good, I even returned to it after finishing the plot to properly 'appreciate' it.
Also, I'm really bad at remembering names, but was that novice girl from day 3 really drawn in Sparrow's style?

I should bring plane version of Perse back, ha? Been awhile they met.

Yes indeed. Good eye.
The thing is, I am a very bad artist. So I use A LOT of references for my drawings. Sometimes like 3 pictures at a time
Sparrow, Sleepy Gimp, Boobsgames are my usually go to guys for body references. Big fan of them
I was hoping I would improve without the need for references, but no such luck, I just suck. The dream would be to hire sparrow to draw for me, but I imagine I need to be slightly more ''popular''.

 

[thevoid089]

Now the most important part. Not shit the bed on the ending.

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I know that feeling! But the most important question would be... did you jerk off? Nobody mentioned that part yet and I am curious


Depends. I'd recommend to replay it. The story is gonna get more and more twisted in the next days, so it's good to have a reminder of the good ol' days (and gather any foreshadowing). Plus there are new notes.
If you are still unsure, you can wait a week or two. I plan to make a small update. (My mates found a LOT of grammar errors.). Thought I'd add an extra scene and a gallery as well.
Well, it's up to you.
I didn't realize that my game is actually quite long now.
Ahhh the times when it was just 15 mins....

Thank you for the reply and explanation, can't wait for the next update to learn more about those worlds. And...yes, I did jerk off with all the sex event in the game. Would be better if later you add a way for players to replay those event again

 

[thevoid089]

Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it
Yeah, I enjoyed this day also, a bit proud of it! The answers to Clare are all wrong, she runs away regardless.

The 4th plane was way worse in the first cut of the day. It was so bad, it made my head spin (all the textures were moving) so I toned it down a bit, lol.

I should bring plane version of Perse back, ha? Been awhile they met.

Yes indeed. Good eye.
The thing is, I am a very bad artist. So I use A LOT of references for my drawings. Sometimes like 3 pictures at a time
Sparrow, Sleepy Gimp, Boobsgames are my usually go to guys for body references. Big fan of them
I was hoping I would improve without the need for references, but no such luck, I just suck. The dream would be to hire sparrow to draw for me, but I imagine I need to be slightly more ''popular''.

_ Not gonna lie I use the save to replay and check out all the choices in the hope to tap Clare's ass but when I learned that it was all wrong I feel like a predator just let a juicy prey ran away
_ You SHOULD bring plane Perse back, I like her design a lot and would love to have more event with her. And if it wasn't too demanding then a few more lewd event with Dolo please
_ One can always dream of to have 1 of those big 3 to draw for this masterpiece, but yeah the cost would be too much for small Devs. Even without them I like your art style more, it fit the game atmosphere extremely well and make them unique that if a professional artist draw them instead it would feel out of place. Beside it wasn't bad at all to taking inspiration and slowly grow out of it, I believe that your skill will getting better and better each update so don't be too humble but be happy that people love your style and your story writing

 

[fadran]

Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it
Yeah, I enjoyed this day also, a bit proud of it! The answers to Clare are all wrong, she runs away regardless.

The 4th plane was way worse in the first cut of the day. It was so bad, it made my head spin (all the textures were moving) so I toned it down a bit, lol.

I should bring plane version of Perse back, ha? Been awhile they met.

Yes indeed. Good eye.
The thing is, I am a very bad artist. So I use A LOT of references for my drawings. Sometimes like 3 pictures at a time
Sparrow, Sleepy Gimp, Boobsgames are my usually go to guys for body references. Big fan of them
I was hoping I would improve without the need for references, but no such luck, I just suck. The dream would be to hire sparrow to draw for me, but I imagine I need to be slightly more ''popular''.

Ok for Clare. For Perse I really wish we could fuck her normal form in one of the following days. Maybe day 6? How many days you planned btw? Also... It was good to see Dolo coming back. Even if only for a short scene

 

[Dushniy]

_ You SHOULD bring plane Perse back, I like her design a lot and would love to have more event with her. And if it wasn't too demanding then a few more lewd event with Dolo please
_ One can always dream of to have 1 of those big 3 to draw for this masterpiece, but yeah the cost would be too much for small Devs.

She will be back next day. I was already planning on it.
As far as Dolo goes... well, I already said I am planning to make a small update (honestly, I just want my game back on the first page again, this update it spent 2 hours there ) I was thinking of including a secret scene. I mean, what's an update without a naughty picture. We'll see. I'll need to think on it.

Yeah... if one of those 3 would draw for my game, I think I'd cum myself lol. Maybe I could ask them to do a title picture? I think I can gather enough money for that. Hmm... we'll see.

Ok for Clare. For Perse I really wish we could fuck her normal form in one of the following days. Maybe day 6? How many days you planned btw? Also... It was good to see Dolo coming back. Even if only for a short scene

Well, originally I planned 7 days. But due to RPG Fuck maker MV restrictions and the way the story goes... well... I am not sure at this point. Story wise, I'd say we are about half way there. So maybe 10 days? We'll see.
But the ending and everything was complete as soon as I started, so that doesn't change

 

[thevoid089]

She will be back next day. I was already planning on it.
As far as Dolo goes... well, I already said I am planning to make a small update (honestly, I just want my game back on the first page again, this update it spent 2 hours there ) I was thinking of including a secret scene. I mean, what's an update without a naughty picture. We'll see. I'll need to think on it.

Yeah... if one of those 3 would draw for my game, I think I'd cum myself lol. Maybe I could ask them to do a title picture? I think I can gather enough money for that. Hmm... we'll see.


Well, originally I planned 7 days. But due to RPG Fuck maker MV restrictions and the way the story goes... well... I am not sure at this point. Story wise, I'd say we are about half way there. So maybe 10 days? We'll see.
But the ending and everything was complete as soon as I started, so that doesn't change

Nice! A Dolo secret photo can be a fun finding, maybe making a small album so players can go around collect pics of not just her but other girls/Plane girls in the game would be even better. I think you should extend it into 13 days, feel like with the kind of horror game like yours it would be fit and give you a bit more air and space to adding anything that you feel like just 10 days won't be enough. About hiring 1 of the 3 for title picture, I think it could be within your pocket

 

[ItzSyther]

Holy hell I don't know how I missed the update (day 5) but can't wait to hop into it when its done downloading!

 

[Goldspark1]

Hey, just wanted to thank you for the update to day 5.

As for your question on how the puzzles should be or not be in the game, I can understand both sides. One one hand, this is a video game. Their should be some games in this porn game. For example, I enjoyed figuring out who did not match the group of murderers in the plant world. That puzzle had good clues to help point you in the right direction and even have a nice reward to completing it. On the other hand, by the very nature of puzzles, some will be harder for others to solve. Want just enough desire to solve the puzzle, but not enough to where players quit the game. So recommend you keep the puzzles as optional sex scenes. Where solving them leads to bonus sex scenes but not always necessary to solve how to keep going.

 

[Dushniy]

Nice! A Dolo secret photo can be a fun finding, maybe making a small album so players can go around collect pics of not just her but other girls/Plane girls in the game would be even better. I think you should extend it into 13 days, feel like with the kind of horror game like yours it would be fit and give you a bit more air and space to adding anything that you feel like just 10 days won't be enough. About hiring 1 of the 3 for title picture, I think it could be within your pocket

Might not be Dolo after all, after I spent a few nights thinking about it. I might want to tease her a bit more. Don't worry, you'll get some rough sex with her sooner or later

Holy hell I don't know how I missed the update (day 5) but can't wait to hop into it when its done downloading!

Hope you'll have fun!

Hey, just wanted to thank you for the update to day 5.

As for your question on how the puzzles should be or not be in the game, I can understand both sides. One one hand, this is a video game. Their should be some games in this porn game. For example, I enjoyed figuring out who did not match the group of murderers in the plant world. That puzzle had good clues to help point you in the right direction and even have a nice reward to completing it. On the other hand, by the very nature of puzzles, some will be harder for others to solve. Want just enough desire to solve the puzzle, but not enough to where players quit the game. So recommend you keep the puzzles as optional sex scenes. Where solving them leads to bonus sex scenes but not always necessary to solve how to keep going.

Thanks for the feedback!
Yes, I do agree, I don't want the puzzles to impede the progress. A little punishment if you do the wrong and a little reward if you do them right seems good.
It was my first attempt ever and I'll see in the future if I'll add more. After all, you gotta be smart for good puzzles and... well... you've seen what my shirt says


Anyway, currently I am having a good pace on the update.
Once again I plan to add:
-Secret naughty scene (almost completed the drawing)
-New spell (finished the animation)
-Add gallery
-Fix grammar mistakes

It should be out soonish and then I can start working on day 6.
By the way, have my scrapped design for a secret scene, I didn't like her at all, so I drew another one. You'll probably won't see this picture in the game, so I might as well show it to my only fans here, hehe

I also uploaded it on twitter, I would love a follow there, if you want to check out the progress on the game and see some dank lewd memes.

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[thevoid089]

Might not be Dolo after all, after I spent a few nights thinking about it. I might want to tease her a bit more. Don't worry, you'll get some rough sex with her sooner or later


Hope you'll have fun!


Thanks for the feedback!
Yes, I do agree, I don't want the puzzles to impede the progress. A little punishment if you do the wrong and a little reward if you do them right seems good.
It was my first attempt ever and I'll see in the future if I'll add more. After all, you gotta be smart for good puzzles and... well... you've seen what my shirt says


Anyway, currently I am having a good pace on the update.
Once again I plan to add:
-Secret naughty scene (almost completed the drawing)
-New spell (finished the animation)
-Add gallery
-Fix grammar mistakes

It should be out soonish and then I can start working on day 6.
By the way, have my scrapped design for a secret scene, I didn't like her at all, so I drew another one. You'll probably won't see this picture in the game, so I might as well show it to my only fans here, hehe

I also uploaded it on twitter, I would love a follow there, if you want to check out the progress on the game and see some dank lewd memes.

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The tease look very good, it was both hot and quite bone chilling at the same time. You make me feel excited for all the planned content in the next update and the hint of rough sex with Dolo in the future, really can't wait for Day 6

 

[Goldspark1]

Might not be Dolo after all, after I spent a few nights thinking about it. I might want to tease her a bit more. Don't worry, you'll get some rough sex with her sooner or later


Hope you'll have fun!


Thanks for the feedback!
Yes, I do agree, I don't want the puzzles to impede the progress. A little punishment if you do the wrong and a little reward if you do them right seems good.
It was my first attempt ever and I'll see in the future if I'll add more. After all, you gotta be smart for good puzzles and... well... you've seen what my shirt says


Anyway, currently I am having a good pace on the update.
Once again I plan to add:
-Secret naughty scene (almost completed the drawing)
-New spell (finished the animation)
-Add gallery
-Fix grammar mistakes

It should be out soonish and then I can start working on day 6.
By the way, have my scrapped design for a secret scene, I didn't like her at all, so I drew another one. You'll probably won't see this picture in the game, so I might as well show it to my only fans here, hehe

I also uploaded it on twitter, I would love a follow there, if you want to check out the progress on the game and see some dank lewd memes.

You must be registered to see the links

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Hello and thanks for responding to my comment (I also updated my review if you are interested of what I thought of the other features of the game.)

Checked out your twitter page. First off, yeah, I can see why you did not like the drawing of the blowjob artwork. The single eye is just so creepy. Not even sure if a dick can even fit inside her head. (Now, I am not an artist and am in now way a master of this kind of artwork. Would have liked some creativity with her breasts. Maybe a characters breasts have a portal in the nipples that lead to another plane. Or that the nipples are hungry for cum. No clue if these ideas would work).

Second, am not sure how to judge the new attack animation with a purple thing coming out of your hand. If I knew more about the world/planes, I can tell you how good the symbolism or meaning is with this. Or I am just a retard and cannot figure out how the MC's powers work with the clues.

Also, sorry but will not be joining you on Twitter as I see it as a wretched hive of scum and villainy.

 

[Dushniy]

The tease look very good, it was both hot and quite bone chilling at the same time. You make me feel excited for all the planned content in the next update and the hint of rough sex with Dolo in the future, really can't wait for Day 6

Well the picture that I attached, I am not going to use, I don't like it. There is better one coming, I hope

Hello and thanks for responding to my comment (I also updated my review if you are interested of what I thought of the other features of the game.)

Checked out your twitter page. First off, yeah, I can see why you did not like the drawing of the blowjob artwork. The single eye is just so creepy. Not even sure if a dick can even fit inside her head. (Now, I am not an artist and am in now way a master of this kind of artwork. Would have liked some creativity with her breasts. Maybe a characters breasts have a portal in the nipples that lead to another plane. Or that the nipples are hungry for cum. No clue if these ideas would work).

Second, am not sure how to judge the new attack animation with a purple thing coming out of your hand. If I knew more about the world/planes, I can tell you how good the symbolism or meaning is with this. Or I am just a retard and cannot figure out how the MC's powers work with the clues.

Also, sorry but will not be joining you on Twitter as I see it as a wretched hive of scum and villainy.

Thank you for the review!

And yes... I should explain the spells, don't I? There is no real hidden symbolism behind them, it's just Harold's better attunement with the plane due to... well... due to spoilers, lol.

I also know that the 1st act is way faster than it should be. When I just started creating the game, I wanted to hook people in. There are so many porn games coming out, that I didn't think people would be interested just in a job simulator.

But don't worry, my story plans for a little flashback, so you get to see early days!

 

[thevoid089]

Well the picture that I attached, I am not going to use, I don't like it. There is better one coming, I hope



Thank you for the review!

And yes... I should explain the spells, don't I? There is no real hidden symbolism behind them, it's just Harold's better attunement with the plane due to... well... due to spoilers, lol.

I also know that the 1st act is way faster than it should be. When I just started creating the game, I wanted to hook people in. There are so many porn games coming out, that I didn't think people would be interested just in a job simulator.

But don't worry, my story plans for a little flashback, so you get to see early days!

Ah! What a shame, I thought it was good in my own personally but if we got a better one then I can't wait to see it. About the 1st arc are fast I can't blame you because this is your first time developing a game and didn't have confident that people would love it until they actually are, I like the idea of a few early day flashbacks of Harold though but would be better if after you nearly finish the game and go back to develop a path to save Steph you can expand the first arc as you seen fit

 

[Dushniy]

Ah! What a shame, I thought it was good in my own personally but if we got a better one then I can't wait to see it. About the 1st arc are fast I can't blame you because this is your first time developing a game and didn't have confident that people would love it until they actually are, I like the idea of a few early day flashbacks of Harold though but would be better if after you nearly finish the game and go back to develop a path to save Steph you can expand the first arc as you seen fit

Good idea.
I was thinking to release endings separately (otherwise the game would be without update for months, lol) so I could add a flashback in new game+
We'll see!

 

[User55]

I'm currently stuck on the Hand Puppet on day 1. The fight really seems impossible with the damage it does.

 

[Dushniy]

I'm currently stuck on the Hand Puppet on day 1. The fight really seems impossible with the damage it does.

Hand puppet on day 1? I think she is on day 3.
Anyway, make sure to heal up, stun her and drink some juice in day 1 and 2 at the fridge.

 

[thevoid089]

Hand puppet on day 1? I think she is on day 3.
Anyway, make sure to heal up, stun her and drink some juice in day 1 and 2 at the fridge.

Kinda funny that I won against her without even the need to use the pill or even drink the juice at all, I just simply stun her and attack her while at the same time rationally use spell to heal up in between and win when I'm only have 22 HP left. That was a close call but interesting and intense battle

 

[Dushniy]

Kinda funny that I won against her without even the need to use the pill or even drink the juice at all, I just simply stun her and attack her while at the same time rationally use spell to heal up in between and win when I'm only have 22 HP left. That was a close call but interesting and intense battle

Currently working on revamping the fights a little. Give Harold more hp and mana so he can actually play more with those spells. It's a pain in the ass. Never knew balancing can be so hard
The update is pretty much ready with secret scene and a new spell, just need to get the stupid fights right

 

[thevoid089]

Currently working on revamping the fights a little. Give Harold more hp and mana so he can actually play more with those spells. It's a pain in the ass. Never knew balancing can be so hard
The update is pretty much ready with secret scene and a new spell, just need to get the stupid fights right

I think the fight was acceptable, if you want to make it a bit breathing air for players then just add a spell that help Harold to recover his MP so that players can use spell to heal while can testing other spells too. Balancing combat always hard to make it right, I think you would need to save it for Day 7 so that you can have more time to correct it but for now focus on the story and new scenes

 

[Dushniy]

Promised update for my game!
Day 5.1
Here is a list of changes:
-Added gallery (my avatar gives you the item after you finish the day. Just use it on yourself and you'll be teleported to the gallery).
-New spell and animation added (you get it after a fight with a Hand puppet. Does huge damage, but inflicts pain on yourself).
-Fight with a prisoner is now mandatory, instead of only happening, when you steal a book.
-The juice no more gives mana (or stalk power) instead just giving you a bit of health. As a trade of Harold gets more mana and HP in general.
-Fixes and changes to the fights. Now with Harold's bigger HP and MP pool, the fights should be just a bit longer and easier. You have the time to play with all the spells.
-Secret scene added. It happens during day 3 at the Harold's apartment complex, but you do need to do something in day 1 and 2. It's not that hard to find, if you inspect everything, but the scene itself happens at a specific time only. If you can't find it... well... I am sure someone will upload a save for the gallery at some point The scene is quite fun in my opinion, but has no relation to the story.
-Fixed a bug in day 2 (if you trigger a certain event in day 1, the dialogue repeats in day 2. Spooky!).
-Fixed multiple grammar mistakes (yeah, I am still not as smart).

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