VN - Ren'Py - Alice: Through the Rabbit Hole [vR.0.11.0] [CandyBox]

clearly at the very least inspired by games like GGGB and ORS but feels in places like a direct rip off. art is okay but not great. writing is again okay not great. doesnt have the charm that other games in the genre have.

The story line is straight forward without the "slow-burn" build-up. The graphics are fresh and models/poses are provocative - overall very hot.

Based on the pace of the story/corruption, I do wonder how far the Dev intends to take it. I see lots of possibilities to extend it, but recognize it may be short story. Either way, its refreshing top notch graphics, hot dialog, and eagerness of the MC make this a full 5-stars!

Highly recommend backing for more content/longer story!

I'm going to leave a lazy review and concur with the entirety of what DrDerpington reviewed earlier today below. The game has a lot of potential with amazing artwork and dialogue, but is not very far along with the story.

TL;DR = great corruption game. Typical new girl in a town that discovers her sexuality.

Story: 4/5
Pros:
+ Heroine has moved into new town after bad breakup. She is having frest start. And she can go really wild.
+ Although story isnt anything special, it ticks all the good cliché.
New girl in a town that discovers her sexuality. Slutty female coworker. Hot female friend, who works as model. A lot of males to seduce. Landlord seduction. Boss at work seduction. Stripping for photographer, etc. etc.
Cons:
- Only downside of the game is the fact, that it is in early in development. There is not much content and story doesnt progress far. It is around 1 hour of content.

Art and Sex Stuff: 4/5
Pros:
+ Heroine is hot.
+ Graphics is nice cartoon 2DCG. I like it.
+ Sex scenes are hot.
+ You can avoid the scenes you dont like or the people you dont like.
Cons:
- There is not much content. No sex yet.

Gameplay: 4/5
Pros:
+ This is typical VN with choices.
+ Choices in this game matters. Choices can affect heroine's stats.
+ English is decent.
Cons:
- There is no soundtrack.

To sum it up:
I really liked the game and I am giving it 5/5 due to potential.
Maybe check the game later, when there is more content.

Good art, writing is a little porny in the sex scenes and a bit bland in the rest of it. The characters are all quite stock as well. I can see it being good when there's more to it and it's worth checking out as a quick little demo just now. For a first game it's a really promising start.

Not gonna go into crazy details why I liked this....
But it just ticked a lot of my boxes.

Simple and sexy with a female protagonists, and I really liked the artwork.

It's in early stages, so gameplay is very short... but still enough content for me to get hooked on Alice...

Try it out!