VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Alison Fall of the Apple [v1.0] [OneManVN]

If you are planning to play the game i would wait until the remaster has been finished because at the moment the game is a total mess, loads and loads of errors, story dosent stay consistent, characters don't stay consistent, its much better to wait.

MCs life totally destroyed just meeting this person and yet not a single hesitation to helping her, When asking for explanation and dosent get any its just oh well "best not push her" WTF his life is gone and he wont even ask twice why(seriously devs there is a thing called anger look it up, its what normal people have, if it was just her life then i could understand him not wanting to push but its MCs as-well now), it makes even less sense given his military training, yes sure keep the info that will keep you and me alive secret because you are embarrassed and shy i wont push you(is that what you think a military man would say/think?)

I don't know if it plans to be changed in the future but the entire meeting Melissa scene and the shopping trip after(not what any normal person would be doing while on the run) is a crazy mess, they are adult police officers yet they act like horny teenagers talking about watching movies and going shopping when they should be asking why just knowing Alison at all has caused their lives to be destroyed and planning what to do next.

Endless talking about how one person knows they will treat me right and they have a good heart etc... which given they have known each other for 2 days is just terrible writing especially after putting such empathis on saying that she had such distrust of men but two days with MC changes her mind on trusting men after 16 years worth of bad experiences with them.

Fake "choices" right from the very first "choice", example: "you can trust me, you know?" or "leave her be for now", pick leave her and get "trust that i mean you no harm and that i only wish to protect you.", one of the next "choices" "go to her" or "don't go", pick don't and guess what you still go to her(really why bother?), even one of the main selling points of the game "essentially 3 games in 1" is fake and states in the game that 2 of them are just for fun and shouldn't be taken seriously.

Story 0/5 (poor at best)
Sex 1/5
Characters 1/5 (terrible)
Art 3/5 (ok)
Choices 1/5 (lots of fakes)
Kinks 0/5 (it says it has some but i was unable to find any when trying)

I just couldnt play this game, im sorry, its excruciatingly boring, endless talking and inner monologues with characters that mostly say nothing and repeat things that already have been said numerous times. I dont mind long sessions of texts, but here they are way too long and absolutely nothing happens, and they are barely moving the plot and relationships forward, been playing if for almost 2 hours and barely any lewd content, and i get it, there is a story in there somewhere, but come on, get to the point dont drag it out with constant repetition, and honestly it just annoyed and bored me to no end.
Its a shame really, because the renders are not bad, especially the remasters, and there are some good animations, but the writing here is just not good, not terrible but far from good, the main issue being the pacing.
I will keep playing it, maybe it gets better, and then i will update this rating.

I love the renders, the character development, the variety of paths is fine because it fulfills many kinks, it ticks a lot of boxes for me.
A little bit of badass-ery rounds it out, villains are nice and one-dimensional so you can really enjoy it when they get their balls in a vise.
Now all of this is to say that it suits my taste, my kink, my prefs for shape and size. You don't like it? respect the work and move on. I hope to see much more.

After reading some of the reviews, I guess I was expecting more from this game. The truth is, the rating should be 4 stars simply because the dev is active, produces solid renders and delivers on schedule. Unfortunately, the story threw me right at the beginning, and I had a hard time finding my way back.

The dev makes a point in calling out this is more about the story and be prepared for a lot of text. Okay... fine. Thanks for the warning. So right there, my level of expectations for the story and the writing have suddenly hit another level. I expected more. I expected better.

Don't get me wrong, there is a lot to like. One of the first scenes takes place in a basement with the only light source coming from the stairwell. The scene lighting was great! It was really well done. In fact, both indoor and outdoor lighting was solid and all the renders looked good with no errors. This is significant, because that means the developer took their time to try and produce a great product. Even the music and sound effects are good. From a production standpoint, this is clearly a 4 star effort with glimpses of 5. (I am referencing the re-worked sections)

The problem, for me, is the story.

UPDATE: I deleted my original comments and changed my rating. It was pointed out that perhaps I should just consider reviewing the revamped section only as there are plans to change some of the elements of the rest of the story. As a result, I decided to give my rating just on the revamped portion of the game and ignoring the rest. I am giving them the benefit of the doubt and bumping up the rating to 4.

I love story based games that don't focus around mindless sex and this game main story line(love) is just that, a story with some 18+ elements in it.

This game has 3 routes:
1. Love route is the the main and true route, others are just "what if... " so if you play keep that in mind. It has some nice action, but also at 0.6.5 it is only half way remastered so keep that in mind also when playing
2. is Harem route, it sets MC alone with a lot of girls in big mansion and things get little steamy, this route is mainly for those who don't want that much story but more action as the name suggests it is more of a sex oriented route
3. one is Dom/Sub route, it has the least content so far out of all routes as it branches to sub-routes at one point again but it has enough content already to have become my fav route, as it captures the relationship between Dom and Sub as it is supposed to really be. And ofc one redheaded pocket size girl has won my heart in this story with her personality and that little devil has started to infiltrate all of OMVN's games
And to remind everyone Dom/Sub relationship is built on trust, love and pleasing each other, Dom is never abusive, the goal is never to hurt but to please.
A Sub obeys out of trust, love and a desire to please and Dom commands for the same reasons

I have tried and tested many games and this one is one of the best I have played so far

The begining is pretty strong, i would say, it got me hyped for a while. I played for 3 hours, ignoring the fact that i dont like Alison at all, Until the notification of the remastered part finihsed everythig was superb.

The story is pretty good and theres a lot to read. It has a downside which is:
if the text part fails or gets inconsistent, people who are willing to read it, may feel dissapointed.

The first one was creating a really badass character, who is able to turn around a pretty bad situation, to later allow her to get kidnapped in the middle of the street.
After being so happy and cheerful that they squeal (i think it was the line used) to watch lord of dings together.

The second was the frenchman talking all rough as he was going to get inside the cage and subdue Melissa and stuff, to later talk to her, put her to sleep warning the guards to dont even scratch her. Of course he doesnt even see her again.

The third was Johnson being knocked down by Alison and still be at Carolines with "a trap" set already before Alison got there. They had to rush and chose between Melissa and Caroline, so obviously there was no time.

The fact that Alison says she hates johson and wants to kill him, but after 2 encounters with him, hes still alive is worth mentioning, considering during the second encouter Alice was activated. Still he lives, i guess she doesnt hate him so much, that a heartless killing machine doesnt feel like killing him.

The cherry on top was the MC getting shot by 2 lowlife default cops in the dark, after having killed several trained men. The location used for this scene was the park at night and they were almost near the tunnel entrance when he decided to stop and stall the police thugs.

At this point nothing sexual has happened chosing the love path.

Renders look good although theres long chunks of text with a single stiill image, and as seein in the park scene, some renderes dont help much.
Theres parts that seem important that share 1 single image and theres almost meaningless parts that use several images.

And animations look good, not the best, i had to watch them in the game folder. Some are good, some are a waste fo render time.

I Think is too big of a project, and needs testing and more development, but i played 3 or 4 hours so still worth it, even for some snob like me.

Let me just start off by saying that I've only played the harem route, but what I've played so far I've been deeply invested in. While perfect by no means (the story is mediocre), the sex scenes are what I think make this game a gem. It caters to various fetishes, heavily featuring impregnation (Good Lord I love impregnation). What this game lacks for in story, it makes up with good looking character models, and its catering to various kinks. In fact, the only other thing I think could use some work is the main character's model. Most notably, his face. He looked like a pug, and not the cute kind. The kind that spend every last miserable moment taking in shallow breaths that could be their last. The kind that has to be picked up everywhere it goes because either it's too fat to move, or it's legs are so fucked up that it needs assistance, and a doggy wheelchair won't cover it.

Numerical rating: 9.2/10 - Would fap again. I look forward to seeing the next update (and impregnating more women (I'm coming for that womb, Nadia)).

(0.6 review)
Alison fall of the apple is a game that unique to say at least. Not unique in term of genre but a setting. It's thriller/sci-fi visual novel. The game contain a prologue then divided into three routes which have considerable amount of content. There are love route, harem route and domination route. All three has different story and cater differents kinks. The setting and plot is very good. The dialog is heavy and there're so many texts. So it's not recommended for those who doesn't want to read much. The quality of the dialog is standard to say at least. No Engrish no typo maybe a bit of weird wording. The character is very good. All of girls are lovable and have different looks/personalities. The render is nice in original version but it's one of the best in remastered version. Why 5 stars? Because I like everything about it especially main girls. It could be 4 stars for people who doesn't some aspect. Maybe 3 if they don't like drama. But nonetheless, this is a good game.

I wanted to enjoy this, and I could not.

The characters do not talk or behaved like actual people.
When you are a police officer who has been set up for murdering your partner and now face a warrant for your arrest, you do not take girls clothes shopping.

The scenes that are supposed to be humorous are not amusing, and the scenes meant to have some emotional pull are hollow.

The renders are inconsistent and go from being very attractive to... very unattractive.

Everyone is horny. We get it, it's a porn game. But if you want to put the effort into telling a story, tone it down, because the more ridiculous the cast acts, the less seriously we can take the plot.

If the renders were more consistent, and the writing was touched up to make the people act more like people, and certain scenes were given the gravity they deserve...
The basic premise that this game starts with and those improvements could see this as a game that deserves, minimum, 3 stars.

I'm not holding my breath, though.

I used to say that this game renders are great , the story is very good, and that i love how it can be dark sometimes and funny in others . this end in version 0.4 , what a mess of a game it is now , the hot alison become an ugly fat dwarf and the stud mc tranformed to a homeless wirdo with an awkward beard , even the masterpiece of an intro changed to a lame lazy one ...why fix something that was never broken? why redone renders and story and turn it to shit?

The baseline of the story is actually quite good and the girls are looking good, but why, why have the devloper this endless long dialogues that never lead to something? I find myself pressing the Enter-button in a never ending high speed.

I´m sorry, but this goes to the wastebin.

1. Animations and renders are good.
2. The English and grammatical errors are there, but only a handful of them.
3. Updates are long, since the dev works alone, it's expected and does put so much efforts in the each update. He definitely loves what he does.
4. Story really gets you hooked up, a few things didn't make sense to me, but dev is a hard worker, he gets better with each update.
5.This game has 3 paths where everything is different right from characters to the story in all the paths. Even the MC looks different in all the paths.
10/10 would recommend.

This review is after playing through volume 0.5.6.

Pros:

There are three paths you can play through in this game: Love, Harem, and Dom. They all open at one point in the game and each path moves into a completely different future of the characters in numerous ways, including the hairstyles of the main character and changes to the other characters.

The characters are really cool. As stated with the path portion, there are a number of differences in the cast depending on the path you choose. This includes some characters not showing up at all in the game depending on the path you choose. Regardless, there is a great deal of personality put into the characters which definitely brings levels of attachment to them. Beyond their personalities, they look great.

The graphics look excellent and will only improve as the game moves toward completion. I believe they will anyway.

The sex is pretty nicely done. It is not overly abundant, but it damn hot at times.

The story. Personally, I really enjoy the story so far. This is especially true of the love path with the harem path falling in second. I believe the dom path is the least developed. The love path adds a number of pieces that I was super stoked with that were left out of the other two paths. If you're looking for more sex, the harem path is the best option at this time.

Cons:

Some characters don't make it into some of the paths yet. Although this is disappointing, this might change in the future. That means I am still hopeful that we see Nadia show up in the other paths.

The main character... not a big deal over all, but he looks like a complete douchbag in the dom scenario with his ridiculous Vanilla Ice hairstyle and bad tattoos.

Over all:

I have high hopes for this game and have enjoyed it thus far. I mean, I did put the time in to explore all three paths in the game. The story is interesting and I am looking forward to seeing where the developers take it.

Great job so far!

what can i say about this game ....?

there are several ways to play among other 3 different routes so far so good, yes result .........

This game consists of KUNG FU, SHOOTINGS and CRAZY LITTLE GIRLS, totally strange the whole thing!

story
- there is none available the whole game insists on dialog reading, reading and reading again and that goes on until you can just take the whole thing away otherwise it is unbearable, it makes everybody happy about this game.

Rendering
- is very good (the reason why I tried this game)

Animations
- I can not say much I've played all versions animations were very few (the game 3.5 GB)

If you expect nice animations and a good story in this game, you will be bitterly disappointed ....

Sorry Dev. 1/5

What can i say? When i first watched all the 5 stars rating i decided to give it a chance, but it was really disapointing. I don't mind games with heavy-long dialogues if the story is really catching and interesting, but this is not the case. The game is really unrealistic and the story is really bad. Maybe this is too cliche but all the women are horny teenagers that want MC's dick no matter what and that is a some real mood-killer.
I really think that you should not download this game and look for something actually well written.
Jesus chirst, i want to believe that all the "5-ratingstars" are some kind of bots or something, there's no way that someone would actually think this is a good game.

Version: v0.5.6

PROS:
Has good renders of female character models and regular animations. The developer is honest in saying that the game has a lot of text to read in your game.

CONS:
Distorted story and characters that change their appearance. It has a lot text which makes it unnecessary. It’s quite tiring to play.

Review:
It is one of the games that I could have avoided had it not been for my curiosity and of course, for the exaggerated tags that the game has a little. Curiosity also came because of certain reviews, one side has 4.5 star reviews and the other side has 3 fewer stars. So when I started playing, in no way will this game impress you, thrill you or make you feel pleasure. The game has 3.5gb download and I ended up being very disappointed by the quality it has. I've seen games be more effective with less file sizes, or games of that size have a lot of content, but I don’t want to make comparisons, it was just an vulgar comment.
History:
To tell you the truth, I didn't follow much, because I felt that something was not being interesting. The game requires you to read the texts and the author is always trying to inform you in detail what is going on or something. I just read a little bit at the beginning and then I stopped following, because I didn't want to waste my time getting stuck in texts through texts.
Gameplay:
It's a VN, without RPG or sandbox. In the game there will be 3 paths for you to follow, the relationship path, the harem path or the pet path. The relationship path is the romance path, the harem path is slutty, and the pet is dominant. However, I just followed a path that was from the harem and to tell you the truth, I had no interest in wanting to know the other two paths. I was going to forget, the harem path is a "meh" path, therefore, I don't even imagine the others.
Graphics & Sex Content:
The graphics are no better for a 3.5gb size game, but it’s not the worst either, it’s far from it. The renders of the female models are fine, but I just liked two renderings of characters (the tattooed girl and a blonde girl). Now, talking about Alison, it's a strange thing to say, the developer changed his appearance, body, weight and width several times in the game, one hour she has a fat face and another normal, as well as her waist, butt and hair. The main character ended up becoming strange, because some renders that came out defective. Just like the MC, which is also changed three times.
The sexual content of this game did not impress me very much and I did not have any pleasure, the game has sexual content and animations, but I did not like it very much. I would consider it a little forced, I mean, in some scenes. Anyway, I'm not saying it's bad, I just didn't like it very much.

So, why I did gave 1 star?
I'm being honest, I thought this game was bad. I didn't follow the dialogues of the story's script, because it didn't awaken my interest, but visualizing the scenes, I understood what was happening. One of the biggest weaknesses of this game and what made it bad in my opinion were the long texts with no major objective, because I'm a little bit against an exaggerated amount of text, and you who are the author, can make a story a little more summarized or detailed in a few words, that is, something that is more understandable than explaining. One of the other things is the renders, the visual of MC and the female character are
constantly exchanged during the game. Well, I don't know if that is part of the story, but I believe it is not, because other characters don't have the changed visual. This is one of the most critical points of the game, one of the most unacceptable failures. I understand that the developer was looking for a better appearance, and I know how difficult this is, but you need to define, and have no doubts.
Anyway, this game does not have a captivating story, it's too far that happen, the graphic violence it’s not too heavy to be seen, it’s somewhere around the +14 age group in my opinion. The sexual content is reasonable, but I didn't like it very much and I had no pleasure. So, I do not recommend this game if you are looking for a VN game that is fast in gameplay or that has a story where you can follow and appreciate or that has a lot of sexual content. Overall, if you like a more appropriate game, that has a lot of slutty content, I would tell you to look for another game.

I have to say, I have no idea how this game got the reviews it did. The long text would have been fine if it was enjoyable. These characters are completely annoying and the dialogue cringe. The Dev really needs to take a step back on this, I think they have skill in the models department, but they should either hire a writer or take some classes on it cause this is probably the worst I have seen in a VN for quite some time.

There are Issues the Dom route is not done but does the MC does not Feel Like a Dom in it more like a weak switch. The Harem route and love route make up for and pass and they can go back and fix some of the issues with the Dom route i really rate works in Progress but this i feel can only get better and is at a place that i feel people should play it while the is a lot and i mean A LOT of text the art the goes with it is great

It's a decent game at parts with some fetishes that you don't see often but it borderlines on needing a smooth walkthrough (and it definitely would hugely benefit from one), to the point there's a lot of wasted play time without it. Kind of a weird game where because of how it plays it's a 2 but it's got the core of a 4 star game in it, all the fetishes don't help though when it's a guessing game to get to the content you want from it's list.

Wow, i was prepared to be bored with this title. And i spent several hours glued to it. I played 2 of the story lines (3rd one just isn't my thang). The characters were likeable, the story was relateable and interesting. I was really impressed. I will be following this title to keep up with the updates. If i had one complaints is that there are not very many animations and several of them are a bit chincy, but the models are decent and the story was fun, great escape for a day. Good job Dev, keep it up.