Good Points
+ Well i can say main story (more like background story) was pretty interesting and kind of well writed. Espacily story about Mlaxsewl and Grynesha was pretty cool and i can say its surprised me. I wasn't waiting someting like that and aside from cringy details MC's journey to became himself again feels kind of interesting aswell which are one of reasons why i continued play this game even despite how MC look or how pathetic his character is. (Still prologue and first two chapter was cringy ASF: look bad points for more details)
+ Sex scenes have a lot of different angle/position and animations for them.
+ Its harem game, there is a lot of girl you can have sex and most of them looks hot. And as the story goes your harem number keeps growing, its funny and enjoyable same time.
Bad Points
- Yes i told MC'S journey to became himself again feels kind of interesting but his prologue was cringy ASF... First of all in prologue he looks like
trap with that body and body form... Oh god espacily his little tits... Even Grynesha tells him ''You are very weak and you look like a girl!!'' and ''Wait... Those are breasts?!'' (refering to MC's little tits...) which is quite odd since Grynesha writed by DEV himself and not actualy existent... So DEV insults his own creation with his own other creation... (And before forget he didn't even got better body after a lot of thing happened, fight with demon soldiers etc... Seriously? Change him someone little bit mascular dude, he have all those powers, its not logical him to be like this:
his current look) Secondly he acts like biggest loser/beta/coward you can see in your life... Oh god i cant even describe how annoying prologue version of MC was... Charlotte giving MC orders like: ''Clean bathroom with toothbrush'' or ''Give me foot massage with your mouth.'' etc, and you cant even choice not to do... Or she kicking MC from his face, or from his balls etc whenever she wants, like he is some kind of animal or object... Seriously who said its good idea to make prologue like this? He didn't need to be beta loser with futa body for our story, its totaly nonsense but thats not worse part...
- Worse part is things not quite stop even after prologue, there are still couple of girls gives you problem like Holly trying to blackmail you. Or Alessa accusing you with trying to harass her etc... I can even understand prologue part having cringy things like that but god... Even in chapter 2 we are still strugling with this shits... Why he is trying to help girl who accuse him with harassing her without i can make any choice?! Or while im thinking Holly got quite sad story she using Alfred and tie us to some kind of sex toy and slapped our dick with whip... You should have stopped this kind of shits after prologue... Its still contines after hours! I'm serious even after hours its still same! With chapter 2 finale things changed for better but until that part its cringy ASF! And thats biggest reason why a lot of people stop playing this game before actual game starts, which is pretty understandable and totaly because of bad decision of DEV.
- Game IU and menu needs some changes, i can understand you are trying to have inique menu and IU but instead of having hard to use annoying inique menu and IU players would love to have easy to use standart Renpy menu and IU. I dont care its same with all other games, i care about how usefull it is and save-load menu looks terrible, its not useable at all. Placing menus bottom of screen is pretty bad decision and not usefull at all, you should place them left side like all other classic Renpy games...
- You cant name your character which is totaly takes away RP feeling from you, while its about having certain story still its someting some people mind and thats why im telling this in bad points.
- Game starts with Spanish language and like you can understand english is not main language of this game, and our game english version is not good. For example we have dialogues like: ''I know she exists, but we don't know each other'' or ''I even cook for her, it costs her nothing to be kind'' etc. I know english is not my strong suit either (English is not my mother language) but even i can clearly see how bad English of this game is.
- Dont know the reason but couple of girls/women have some weird dot (like
this one or
this one) around their areolas which totaly unnecesary and it looks bad.
- While it looks like choices matter in big events like choising who lives and die in normal situtations they actualy dont matter, for example you can say ''No'' to Holly while she is torturing you but in the end you gonna agree with her like a loser again... Yeah... Amazing...
- Animation and render quality needs improve for quality and physics.
- There is a lot of wasted oppurtunity in story: for example MC takes a lot of girl first time and he is Incubus we didn't get any different dialogue nor power up notification for them, as a Incubus he should have taken more and permanent power up for taking girls virginity but its pretty much wasted...
- Game dont have galery mod or any way to open galery scenes (which can be given by DEV itself like save game or codes etc..) so if you want see some scenes you gotta play game literay from begining, some scenes needs you be nearly in fully pervery route and some wants you be nearly in fully kind route and even you alter those numbers via unren its not gonna work because game look your choices not how many point you have which is quite annoying...
- Oh BTW who choiced these names? Zellynore? Najtrax? Viliness? Grynesha? And more importantly... Mlaxsewl... Seriously? LMAO
For The End
Well... This game could have 4 star quality (for its own style of course) if it wasn't made poory (Prologue and first two chapter precisely) I already told all bad points, but just basicaly making prologue and first two chapter less cringy could/should save this game, literaly things happened in prologue and first two chapter is probably why this game deserves 2 star poor rating instead of 4 star... What can i say? Things getting better after chapter 2 and MC becames more like a man, but that doesn't change you gotta bear a lot of cringy story part and MC's act for hours... I'm telling again for ''hours'' not just 1 hour or someting... I didn't look clock how much time i spend until reaching MC became non-loser (not fully still...) but i can say 3 or 5 hour at least... Its literaly wasted a lot of empty time for poorly writed things... DEV should have stopped doing this after prologue and should have give us better choices... Well thats how game is now, if you can bear first 3-5 hour you gotta see enjoyable game maybe worth 3-4 star rate for its own style, but is it worth it? I'm not sure... I'm alredy past that point so im gonna contine playing but if someone told me: ''First 3-5 hour gonna be like hell, you gotta bear a lot of cringy story part incluse loser MC but after that game will be enjoyable.'' i wouldn't play this game at first place. And unless DEV makes remake and chance those scenes this game don't deserve more than 2 star. When i consider parts after chapter 2 and chapter 3 i realy want to give this game more rating but i cant just ignore how bad prologue and first two chapter is... I gues i should say good job? Because its pretty hard to messed potencial like this one, good job DEV...