LWtbo

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Since the MC got swopped out in the first jump which I prosume is EP1.
I am honestly struggling to play this except from the son.
Who's not really expected to be quick on the uptake sinse he's a classic Jock. type.
However the Mom and Daughter are supossed to be inteligent.
And yet none of them notice the glaringly obvious.
I'm only at the secound Jump sofar.

Practically every thing the alternate MC say's and do's screams not the poppa.
Even after the first jump the MC didn't change in how he talked or acted.
Yet suddenly he's so diffrent and still neither his Wife and Daughter (that have known him years I presume) .
Dont find his sudden slip up's and out of character actions weird enough to set off alarm bells?.
For supossedly intelligent people I have to say my 5 year old great neice.
Is both smarter and more observant than these three.

I REALLY like the premise and the story itself and want to see how it go's.
But god playing this type of stupid in the face of the glaringly obvious.
Is causeing me to play in very small doses becuase after so long playing.
I feel I'm loseing braincells.

And now some one said I have to sit through this till EP 9 before this torture is over:eek:.
I may end up needing therapy

Just Sayin.
 
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jeffforporn

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I liked the idea of the second universe with the low ratio of males, but with 300,000 males still left it actually wouldn't be a big deal. The USA only has about 10k births per day, so even with conception rates of 5%, each guy would only have to have to have sex once per day (with a different woman) to maintain the population, and pretty much every woman who wanted to should be able to have kids still. To make it a real issue there would have be far less men.

I just thought this was interesting though, I'm not trying to be a smartass. It definitely is too subtle to break the illusion and I only thought about this a few days after. Great chapter overall!
 
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MrDL

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I liked the idea of the second universe with the low ratio of males, but with 300,000 males still left it actually wouldn't be a big deal. The USA only has about 10k births per year, so even with conception rates of 5%, each guy would only have to have to have sex once per day (with a different woman) to maintain the population, and pretty much every woman who wanted to should be able to have kids still. To make it a real issue there would have be far less men.

I just thought this was interesting though, I'm not trying to be a smartass. It definitely is too subtle to break the illusion and I only thought about this a few days after. Great chapter overall!
You're off by 3.2-3.6 million there.
 
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Firaxius

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Overall pretty well done VN, though the animations are somewhat simplistic, the story on other hand makes up to it. I already knew that after the first Alternate world the dad wasn't the real one, and gladly the daughter picked it up quick too, I hope you will keep surprising and ending with cliffhangers, because the real dad coming to the rescue was really cool to see, he seems to even have improved the portal as he could make it appear on the right spot now. Either way i'm trilled to see the future updates. Keep up the good work.
 
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