HTML - Altered Vision [v0.13.5] [Caretaker Publishing]

This is good, it can use more visuals I'd say, plus just some better formating. It's often hard to tell what people are saying, and to read the text. White on Cyan background is a sin. Nothing is really indented, nothing had Character Name: "Text" or Bold or Italics.

It also felt more like a proof of concept, one that might have some merit to it at least this time. Could also use a bit of a rework since it seems a bit random what tasks your given, however that's more me just not liking the first real task given.

It's a good start. But it definitely needs more visuals.

The "back story" is way to easy to skip on that first page when. You see "continue" right at the bottom. IMO it should be "continue" takes you into the backstory and "skip backstory" is the second option.

The exposition dump that is the current back story could definitly be made into chapter one/chapter zero. Broken up into more pages and with a few more visuals.