Finished the Demo version, my opinions:
Story:
-> Good promise, with the transition between realms and enjoying the usual femdom in the school setting, also being part in a fantasy realm and you should be its hero in a way or another.
Originality:
-> I know one or two games that have the same concept in mind, but it doesn't feel copy pasted, which is a plus.
Renders:
-> Big plus here because it's an original style, not using all the presets for normies. Some facial aspects can be improved, but overall I like this style.
Playability:
-> Zones are a bit strange, I had to check every door again and again to be sure I'm not missing anything, It's like it could use more of the yellow star particles on ocassions and some Quest system to tell the player where he should go.
-> We don't see the health bar of the enemies, in my opinion should be displayed at least when we choose an action, after that should be hidden or something to show better the art itself.
-> Still about the fight, a way to hide text like press 'H' would be an amazing addition.
Performance:
-> Works fine.
Bugs:
-> About the Hobo girl, after you pay her one time, the second time I went to her with no money , but she still seemed to be happy that I've payed her...
Grammar:
-> Here's the reason for the 4/5 rate, the grammar was pretty awful at times, there was only one time tho when I didn't get what the character wanted from me at all, but besides this, I could close the eye.
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