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Thanks for the feedback i'll keep what you said in mind for the futureIs there any other girl at school who you can pursue or is it just Zoe for now? The game clearly has Katalist influences, but I'd say it has plenty of content for a "trailer" (about one hour of playtime give or take) and has plenty of potential - if you could find a proofreader that would definitely help as right now most of it is intelligible, but there are many spelling mistakes and grammar errors.
Anyway, overall I'd say it's a promising project and wish you good luck with your game!
Thanks for the feedbackCool start, though I'd like to see more polished dialogues (not only in terms of proofreading) and maybe less repetitive/grindy fights. I'll be watching the development, seems like a lot of additional kinks could be added (especially in the magical world) and I'm quite curious about the hobo girl Good luck!
BTW I think you have a bug with her:Thanks for the feedback
As English isn't my first language i will admit that the dialogue and story need a lot of polishing and i will try to improve it as soon as i can
As for the hobo girl I did made the art for her scene but didn't had time to put them the game at the movement
That might be the caseBTW I think you have a bug with her:
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Thanks I'll keep that in mindIf you need help with editing text and conversations, feel free to let me know.
Your points have been noted and will be worked upon in future updatesRight now the game's a Katalist rip-off, hopefully this will change in the future. The premise shows good will and I'm all for that but there are some critical points I'd like to address:
Having said that good luck with the game!
- I find the writing for what seems to be the main plot right now to be really sub-par (you get transported in another world to fight demons and you immediately accept this as your new reality, no problem whatsoever).
- In the fight with enigma I can't seem to succeed in a struggle, or the odds of that are extremely low.
- There are many grammatical and punctualization errors.
- Grinding for new scenes with the students is not really fun. If there's something like an invisible affection meter maybe having more diverse activities in different places of school at different times with them would be a good way to change things up a bit.
- The art is incoherent and feels like it's traced from someone else. On that note, anatomy in particular is heavily overlooked, especially in enigma's cg with the panty shot from below, the body shape there is bogus.
Thanks for your kind wordsAmazing game and such an extensive demo, please keep them updates coming. maybe add more kinks if you want
Only with save editor, she has absurd amount of health, I don't think it's supposed to be killed in this version, even after I defeat her it's only an "ah cool you beat me" but no continuity.Has anybody beat Enigma, yet? If so, what was your level?
you wrote all the things i wanted to write so thanks ^^Right now the game's a Katalist rip-off, hopefully this will change in the future. The premise shows good will and I'm all for that but there are some critical points I'd like to address:
Having said that good luck with the game!
- I find the writing for what seems to be the main plot right now to be really sub-par (you get transported in another world to fight demons and you immediately accept this as your new reality, no problem whatsoever).
- In the fight with enigma I can't seem to succeed in a struggle, or the odds of that are extremely low.
- There are many grammatical and punctualization errors.
- Grinding for new scenes with the students is not really fun. If there's something like an invisible affection meter maybe having more diverse activities in different places of school at different times with them would be a good way to change things up a bit.
- The art is incoherent and feels like it's traced from someone else. On that note, anatomy in particular is heavily overlooked, especially in enigma's cg with the panty shot from below, the body shape there is bogus.
I will make that move occur less oftenWould be great if you could skip enema's stomping a half time faster. because right now it is kinda annoying, that you have to wait 10 sec per one her basic attack.
katalist doesn update year to year you're thinking about TOTIt's reminded me some of other legendary foot universe "Katalist" so much. But other game has updates to YEAR to YEAR and I hope this won't be like him game. thank you for this excellent work, I'm in. and can't wait for next updates!
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